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First webnovel ever. Thoughts and suggestions are greatly appreciated. This was inspired by Eragon and other revenge fantasies. I always enjoyed reading fantasies so I thought I'd give writing one a go.
This is a great and enticing story. Although only four chapters in, I can tell that there is a whole new world out there to explore. There are so many secrets and room to expand the plot and I believe it would be an amazing reveal.
The beginning was good, but it could've been better. However, the story simply gets better and better the further you read. Watching Chaus grow in power is amazing and I don't think you'll be disappointed.
First webnovel ever. Thoughts and suggestions are greatly appreciated. This was inspired by Eragon and other revenge fantasies. I always enjoyed reading fantasies so I thought I'd give writing one a go.
This is a great and enticing story. Although only four chapters in, I can tell that there is a whole new world out there to explore. There are so many secrets and room to expand the plot and I believe it would be an amazing reveal.
The beginning was good, but it could've been better. However, the story simply gets better and better the further you read. Watching Chaus grow in power is amazing and I don't think you'll be disappointed.