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Write a reviewGreat novel looking forward to new updates. Ndndjsn d SmdnsndndnMa Snskdlf A Skakgns Stand nd Smnddnms d S And fm Smnfmandnd Mamsmdmdmmdmd
The idea is interesting but the pacing is really slow and most of the characters are kinda basic. On a more personal note, I really was not a fan of one of the later developments...
The story is running good and most of all it is new to my taste. However, there are some grammatical error and wrong use of punctuation marks. I am using this app to help me correct my mistakes and this app is called grammarly. It helps you find mistakes in your story and correct it. It is available on mac, windows, android and I think it is also available in ios... If you found it hard to use it you can always rely on youtube.... Good luck in making this novel
The story is fascinating and I like the plot of the story. But there are some grammatical errors, which ruins authors hard work and punctuation are wrongly placed.
This is a really interesting story, however, there are some grammar and spelling errors, and the incorrect use of punctuations. Overall, it is surprisingly fun to read! I hope there are more updates to come! Thank you for the chapters.
I enjoy the story a lot. Its an interesting story concept and has a nice flow. There are a few grammar and spelling errors here and there though.
Nice story Descriptive characters and world background 4 races elves drawves human and demon. An it's also have modern technology xd. The demon king in mobile phone or should I say Magi-phone Hahahaha interesting. Keep up the good work!
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Writing Quality is good. The development of the story plot is smooth and the characters are designed very well... This story has great potential. I cannot wait to read more updates! The author did well!
This book really is captivating! It has an interesting plot and story, the way you describe things fascinates my imagination. It's easy to imagine what's going on in every scenario. Please don't drop😊
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact keraringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Great novel looking forward to new updates. Ndndjsn d SmdnsndndnMa Snskdlf A Skakgns Stand nd Smnddnms d S And fm Smnfmandnd Mamsmdmdmmdmd
The idea is interesting but the pacing is really slow and most of the characters are kinda basic. On a more personal note, I really was not a fan of one of the later developments...
The story is running good and most of all it is new to my taste. However, there are some grammatical error and wrong use of punctuation marks. I am using this app to help me correct my mistakes and this app is called grammarly. It helps you find mistakes in your story and correct it. It is available on mac, windows, android and I think it is also available in ios... If you found it hard to use it you can always rely on youtube.... Good luck in making this novel
The story is fascinating and I like the plot of the story. But there are some grammatical errors, which ruins authors hard work and punctuation are wrongly placed.
This is a really interesting story, however, there are some grammar and spelling errors, and the incorrect use of punctuations. Overall, it is surprisingly fun to read! I hope there are more updates to come! Thank you for the chapters.
I enjoy the story a lot. Its an interesting story concept and has a nice flow. There are a few grammar and spelling errors here and there though.
Nice story Descriptive characters and world background 4 races elves drawves human and demon. An it's also have modern technology xd. The demon king in mobile phone or should I say Magi-phone Hahahaha interesting. Keep up the good work!
Reveal SpoilerSnaidnshsbwjs. D spend día a did ene. S is fjalamndka fijan Nm a finance snaiwbsjndnskcnnajxbsjkabs on in a Sha a snake de bend a few sbjsne sje
Writing Quality is good. The development of the story plot is smooth and the characters are designed very well... This story has great potential. I cannot wait to read more updates! The author did well!
This book really is captivating! It has an interesting plot and story, the way you describe things fascinates my imagination. It's easy to imagine what's going on in every scenario. Please don't drop😊
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact keraringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.