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...Levi watched his eyes glow a darker shade of blue as veins crept out of there as well and onto his cheeks.
He stood undaunted this time, very curious about what was happening.
[Good job Levi. It took time, but well done]
Levi touched and felt his transfigured body with wonderment.
[Liaison and Union completed. Full health restored]
[Core 2 out of 300. Interrelationship 1%]
[Welcome Parker]
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Seven years since Levi set foot in the North Wing; the only booming region on Earth after the Ròkks' raid. He never expected to find out about the death of his only family, his father.
Levi discovers an alive tech chip that burrows into his neck, healing him of his lethal illness and gives him unimaginable abilities. But Levi is still weak and needs to master this system.
He finds out about the real story behind the death of his father and seeks to avenge him. But finding himself in enemy territory, Levi has to stay low and level-up because another Ròkks' raid was coming and he knew only he could stop it.
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It had good plot and unique story, but the mc it’s just so unbearable I had to drop it
As simple and as free flowing as the writing is, it's definitely a feast for my eyes. I capture the words as images in my head perfectly, dialogue is very good even though it's still surface level. There's just enough foreboding to keep me intrigued at to what's actually going on behind the scenes. I'm yet to see the power system in this novel so hopefully that will be explained later. Characters flow nicely! And World design is literally almost perfect. In all, I will be seated for more of this.
I have been following this book for a while and I will say it’s intriguing. The writing is top-notch and the scenes are thrilling. I was hooked by the synopsis and first chapter. Not going to spoil much but the part he killed the officer got me. Good job author
Very engaging and intriguing start. I don't know why this gave me a little Ben10 vibe. MC have to discover his abilities after gaining his suit which gave me Crysis vibe as well. Awaiting for more chapters for further development!
So let’s go ahead and get an early review underway that’s spoiler free. For writing quality it’s a 4/5 here And having a 4/5 isn’t bad it means what you’re writing is easy to understand and the message gets across nice and easy just a bit often you might miss a , or you use the wrong verb for a situation. All in all the first 6 chapters are good Update is a free pass as we only have 6 chapters at the moment. The story development throughout the first 6 chapters is fast and some unique deaths early so I have to give it a 5/5 here but we need a lot more in the coming chapters but it’s a great start. The character designs are simple and straight forward but they are 3 dimensional with uniqueness to them with flaws so that’s always good to see. Finally the world background is a 4/5 right now as we need to see more of this destroyed earth and the lasting effects these creatures have had on it. Again a 4/5 is good it shows your world building is on the right track. I look forward to doing a second review once you hit 50 chapters. Good luck and god speed Author.