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He, who had it all, fell into a trap but also through space and time, losing his life to gain a new one as the light of a new dawn fell upon him, as glorious as his past life has been. And so he shouted his first cry.
From the famous and respected young emperor of the largest empire in the continent Uzar which tamed the silver dragons and built the largest magic academies to a world of... "science and technology" ?
"What... what is this sorcery !? Where are my dragons ! ahh!"
In a nursery, a three and half years old boy named Charles and nicknamed Charlie, cries in anger holding on a book "Imaginary creatures".
He looked around watched the other children playing around and the adults observing him with amusement.
' I want to go home... it's already been so long and tried but magic keep failing. '
Clutching his little hands into fist, raised them and shouted.
" Fine ! If it is so, I shall conquer this world too !"
'But how... that is the question. And then, I must return home.'
Laughter could suddenly be heard around him. The adults couldn't resist. It was a funny little kid indeed. But a young girl looked at him in confusion yet awe before smiling.
Seven years later, he knew how. A translucent window suddenly appeared before his eyes as he took his first step down the stairs. Unluckily for him, he regained consciousness in the hospitable with a broken left arm. However, the window was still there.
' What's this ? Magic ? no... a system. What's a system ? ah ! What's this, Stats ? Charm 32 ! Charming I am indeed ! Quite true. Intelligence 9... Wut ? '
And the title of the system was "Reach the top". He then finally smiled and laughed startling the nurse that came to check on him.
' What's wrong with the kid !? He didn't seem to have a concusion.'
So who has killed him and throw him into this bizarre world and why ? What will he do ? Will he suceed ? How long will he take to return to avenge himself ?
P.S. : It's a parallel world of ours. Some things are the same, others aren't.
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Hola!! I read three chapters till now, but I should say the writing and expressing emotions through words is flawless and I like some things which are opposite to our world like the old calling themselves brat and the adults talking like kids🤣 and the story can make it big. Keep up the good work and have a great future ahead.
The story is quite interesting and written in great way as for as the opening is concerned. World background is kept specific. Character development is fairly doing it's charisma in the further pace of story, I like the cut and short progress too. I am confident that once a reader start this novel, it will hook the interest of anyone. Good luck Author
Only 6 chapters so far. It's interesting read. The storyline was great, the characters description was also great. I hope hope hope you don't end this by making him a patient of a crazy institution 🙏 please don't!! I'm looking forward to keep reading more. Thanks for introducing this novel to me!
My honest review (said the author, it is completely UNbiased ahahah) For now, I think, the writing quality is good, I make a lot of effort in trying to avoid repetition but words like "indeed and then" keep appearing. Sorry ! Stability of update : It's the begining so there will be quite a few chapters but I cannot garantee a reguliar "income". Moreover, writing a 1400-2000 words per chapter tire me out ! (it's my personnal goal *take whip and whip myself*) The story developement is going strong ! Slow but strong ! I know whare I am going, I try to not forget importants points or details so they can remain revelant in the story later on ! (I take notes ! Hopefully without losing them at some point...) Character design and world(s) background aren't fleshed out enough with only 3 chapters so no perfect score here ! But little by little you'll come to discover both worlds and main characters (Which are our dear little Charlie & Addie (oops little spoiler eh but that's okay)) So be it then ! 4 out of 5 ! Not bad I guess. *Throw flowers at herself*
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I've read it! I can't help to feel the same vibe as the anime 'the devil is a part timer' tho they are completely different.This is interesting to read! I like how he's an ignorant like a normal person would do when they are in the same situation. Not the typical bad as S MC, and they suddenly know everything. Can't wait to read more 😂