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Story develepmont is nice but this all goes a little too fast and doesn’t have many details otherwise you can consider it a good try. Other than that it could do some editing but i love the idea of the story hence i think you should continue once you stack some chapter in a detailed manner to make it more entertaining.
Story develepmont is nice but this all goes a little too fast and doesn’t have many details otherwise you can consider it a good try. Other than that it could do some editing but i love the idea of the story hence i think you should continue once you stack some chapter in a detailed manner to make it more entertaining.