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ΠΡΠ»ΠΈΡΠ½ΡΠΉ ΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΈΠΊ Π΄Π»Ρ ΡΡΠ΅Π½ΠΈΡ, ΡΠ΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡΡ Π²ΡΠ΅ΠΌ Π»ΡΠ±ΠΈΡΠ΅Π»ΡΠΌ Π΄Ρ Π° ΡΠ°ΠΊΠΆΠ΅ Π΄Π»Ρ ΡΠ΅Ρ ΠΊΡΠΎ Π»ΡΠ±ΠΈΡ Π³ΡΠ΅ΡΠ΅ΡΠΊΡΡ ΠΌΡΡΠΎΠ»ΠΎΠ³ΠΈΡ.Π₯ΠΎΡΡ Π½Π΅ΠΊΠΎΡΠΎΡΡΠΌΠΈ ΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈ
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Really good I hope his emotions don't get in the way of the fanfic. I really liked Rao and Faora they are a great coupleI really liked Rao and Faora they are a great couple. β¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈ
sir author is this novel dropped ?????? more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more
espero que continues la historia, aunque no creo por que vi comentarios del aΓ±o pasado, pero no se pierde la esperanza jejejje espero que la continues porfa lee mi mensaje buen dΓa, tarde o noche
I honestly love this story so far. The only things that gave it the lower then 5 stars are actually understandable. If you want an actual smart Mc then here it is.
please continue with the story If you go to the other universe, you may develop the story further and you could even jump to Marvel. You could also make him more open to love not a womanizer but more accessible . . . .
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Ce novel c'est du boom, cΓ΄tΓ© dΓ©veloppement de l'histoire/ la maniΓ¨re de pensΓ©e du mc/ le complexe de divinitΓ©/ le dΓ©veloppement mondial, tout est juste π₯π₯π₯π₯, chuis devenu addict, suite π±π¬, suiteeeeeeeπ¬
I really like the story but I guess it got dropped. Unfortunate but I hope you can rewrite or continue it. Anyway just wanted to say thatβ¦.;
Is this dropped ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This must be continued. This is the best fan fiction about a Cryptorian. . . . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . . .
Its a really good story with original plots and diffrent ways to portray a charcter and its unique, the story is good, the action is good, the Mc is a good character. It just slows down is some parts but overall its amazing.
will you ever update this book again because it's really good 1111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
It's was the best fanfic I ever read.I love the MC and the others characters, the story development and all the stuff is good. Is really sad that his stopped writing the story. I think that is my favourite author . I read every day "my three wives are beautiful vampires" and when I saw his was also the author of this story, I immediately said" let's go!" . Really, not a disappointment π. Victor wisseman, you have to continue writing many stories or there are people like me who are your fan will cry π.good luckπͺπ. Ps: I'm not very good with English so sorry if made mistake.
WriteAuthor, I want to know if you're going to keep this fan-fiction going. I've been waiting for new episodes for a very long time, we've been waiting and even asking you to read this novel 2 times because there is no proper fan fiction to read, send new chapters now. (Google translate)
Autor essa novela acabou ou vocΓͺ vai postar mais capΓtulo em um futuro prΓ³ximo porque jΓ‘ faz muito tempo que vs nΓ£o posso um capΓtulo dessa novela π
Liked it. If that comes back, I'll be here. ««««« ___________________________________________________________________________-------------------------------
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you just had to use something like kryptonians that belonged to DC...and we could have ignored diana ..it is just in the list of fanfics cause you used kryptonians..well keep it up
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There are few thing s the author didnt specify or rather ignored, Since Rao has divinity does stayingin the sun boost the divinity? Also Since he is basically a sun god and a kryptonian he should be almost as strong has superman 1million, but the power scaling is good. another thing is that a god who loses his divinity is basically a human, but since a kryptonian who loses his divinty can still be a planet buster
Updating Stability 2 star. This novel drop or Hiatus last updated 5 month? ...........,......................................................,......................................................,......................................................,......................................................,..............................................
I really love this story. It is one of the rare novel/fanfic that I'm always impatient to read the rest. Can't wait to see where it's going to go. Pls never drop this piece of art,
ΠΡΠ»ΠΈΡΠ½ΡΠΉ ΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΈΠΊ Π΄Π»Ρ ΡΡΠ΅Π½ΠΈΡ, ΡΠ΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡΡ Π²ΡΠ΅ΠΌ Π»ΡΠ±ΠΈΡΠ΅Π»ΡΠΌ Π΄Ρ Π° ΡΠ°ΠΊΠΆΠ΅ Π΄Π»Ρ ΡΠ΅Ρ ΠΊΡΠΎ Π»ΡΠ±ΠΈΡ Π³ΡΠ΅ΡΠ΅ΡΠΊΡΡ ΠΌΡΡΠΎΠ»ΠΎΠ³ΠΈΡ.Π₯ΠΎΡΡ Π½Π΅ΠΊΠΎΡΠΎΡΡΠΌΠΈ ΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈΠΈ
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Really good I hope his emotions don't get in the way of the fanfic. I really liked Rao and Faora they are a great coupleI really liked Rao and Faora they are a great couple. β¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈβ¬ οΈ
sir author is this novel dropped ?????? more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more
espero que continues la historia, aunque no creo por que vi comentarios del aΓ±o pasado, pero no se pierde la esperanza jejejje espero que la continues porfa lee mi mensaje buen dΓa, tarde o noche
I honestly love this story so far. The only things that gave it the lower then 5 stars are actually understandable. If you want an actual smart Mc then here it is.
please continue with the story If you go to the other universe, you may develop the story further and you could even jump to Marvel. You could also make him more open to love not a womanizer but more accessible . . . .
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Ce novel c'est du boom, cΓ΄tΓ© dΓ©veloppement de l'histoire/ la maniΓ¨re de pensΓ©e du mc/ le complexe de divinitΓ©/ le dΓ©veloppement mondial, tout est juste π₯π₯π₯π₯, chuis devenu addict, suite π±π¬, suiteeeeeeeπ¬
I really like the story but I guess it got dropped. Unfortunate but I hope you can rewrite or continue it. Anyway just wanted to say thatβ¦.;
Is this dropped ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This must be continued. This is the best fan fiction about a Cryptorian. . . . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . . .
Its a really good story with original plots and diffrent ways to portray a charcter and its unique, the story is good, the action is good, the Mc is a good character. It just slows down is some parts but overall its amazing.
will you ever update this book again because it's really good 1111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
It's was the best fanfic I ever read.I love the MC and the others characters, the story development and all the stuff is good. Is really sad that his stopped writing the story. I think that is my favourite author . I read every day "my three wives are beautiful vampires" and when I saw his was also the author of this story, I immediately said" let's go!" . Really, not a disappointment π. Victor wisseman, you have to continue writing many stories or there are people like me who are your fan will cry π.good luckπͺπ. Ps: I'm not very good with English so sorry if made mistake.
WriteAuthor, I want to know if you're going to keep this fan-fiction going. I've been waiting for new episodes for a very long time, we've been waiting and even asking you to read this novel 2 times because there is no proper fan fiction to read, send new chapters now. (Google translate)
Autor essa novela acabou ou vocΓͺ vai postar mais capΓtulo em um futuro prΓ³ximo porque jΓ‘ faz muito tempo que vs nΓ£o posso um capΓtulo dessa novela π
Liked it. If that comes back, I'll be here. ««««« ___________________________________________________________________________-------------------------------
bit.ly/3LyRF1N ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
you just had to use something like kryptonians that belonged to DC...and we could have ignored diana ..it is just in the list of fanfics cause you used kryptonians..well keep it up
ΠΠΠΠ¬Π¨Π.. . .. . .. . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . .. . . .
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There are few thing s the author didnt specify or rather ignored, Since Rao has divinity does stayingin the sun boost the divinity? Also Since he is basically a sun god and a kryptonian he should be almost as strong has superman 1million, but the power scaling is good. another thing is that a god who loses his divinity is basically a human, but since a kryptonian who loses his divinty can still be a planet buster
Updating Stability 2 star. This novel drop or Hiatus last updated 5 month? ...........,......................................................,......................................................,......................................................,......................................................,..............................................
I really love this story. It is one of the rare novel/fanfic that I'm always impatient to read the rest. Can't wait to see where it's going to go. Pls never drop this piece of art,
Any chance for an update? Please update huhu