Reviews of DEATHLY APP by Darlene_Virginia - Webnovel

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Pornking

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Mill_01

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TheVersalStudios

I don't know if it's just me but I don't understand anything about this novel. I feel that both the title and the synopsis completely misled me. Since after reading 25 chapters, the stories that are supposed to trap people to death have so little prominence And almost everything comes down to how the MC suffers. To be honest, I found this story a big scam and hardly coherent. I do not recommend it.f it were not for the good writing I would not have even read it.

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Lolo_Losla

Buenísima, mantuvo la tensión al máximo ero sin llegar a legar a la ansiedad generando un aura de Teror increíble, se agradece la historia.

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el_Real

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Balen_Hawramy

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Shadow_Magus

A well written novel. Creepy in general, but still I liked it. I normally don't find writing scary. Most horror movies are also boring most of the time. But this was not boring as things like The Nun, and others, and it was interesting to read. You could try and make it scarier by giving more description just before the climax of the scene, similar to how the background noises increase in tempo just before the ghost is revealed.

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Hi, This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “DEATHLY APP”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via geekyteddyyo@gmail.com, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan

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Mortifer

I don't know why this has such a high rating. Author is probably deleting the negative reviews (I'll spam this if you delete it) . MC is basically a wuss crybaby idiot. Nothing is explained. The "app" pretty much controls him. There's no "writing stories" here. The app doesn't give him ideas ,it forces him to write according to what It wants. Also it's bullsh*t that everything is smooth at first since 9 chapters in and we already have 1 who died without any explanation whatsoever (he got killed even before the app told the mc about not following his orders for an outline) and a kidnapped girl which doesn't make sense since we're shown that she is controlled by the system and not controlled. MC did not find out that people are vanishing into his stories, it's pretty much forced into him as a threat. And like I said before, he did not write anything that happened to the victims, the app killed them and told the mc to write according to how they were killed. Also with what happened to the victims exactly, nothing was explained except they're dead and they were killed in gruesome ways.

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Johnurfriend

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Garo_

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Pranjal_Patil

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SMomoTempest

Wow, I only read 1 chapter, but this book is excellent 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓😐🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓

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4bidienkingdom

Great story and great MC character anyway thank you for novel.

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Hender

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deanbunter88

Thanks for the novel 😊😆😄😆😐😉😯😐😯😑😇😅😇😂😀😂😀😁😀😊😁😄😆😆😄😉😐😐😯😑😯😇😀😂😁😁😊😆😄😆😄😆😉😯😇😇😅😇😅😇😂😀😀😁😊😁😆😄😆😄

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northpoem

Sigh.... there are so little good horror novels on this d*mn app, this one is one of the rare few good ones. Please don't drop this author, imo there are 3 good horror novels here, my house of horrors, plague doctor, and this one. Keep up the good work!!

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Skull_

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Lee_Ches

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