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Is this fantasy? I saw something like status board. Wow~ Give me more chapters right now. I demand an update right now.（＾∀＾●）ﾉｼ But this lady is willing to wait. Do your best author.
Now this is a good one, Though it's similar to one of the novel I know but still a great job. I hope that you continue to write more, Please do that Bye bye
Amazing Story Senpai, I hope the Main character becomes a hot dashing Character like that K novel Guy, I hope you know What I am saying, Please update more
Lucrus!!!! I am here again?!! Hehe! I love your works! I really do! Please Pat me Please hehe! I Want more of your stories! Send me more! hehe, It's so good!
Overall, its good, It relates to one Novel I know, but I won't say, probably that was your inspiration to write this, So far so good, But needs more updates
I love it! It's nice! The way how you wrote it actually impressive. To be honest I know you'll get there, Update more, Work harder. And you shall receive it.
Brother Nom!! The book is sooo nice! I felt pity for the MC! Is it your Story? I mean your real life story? It feels so real! Oh! Brother Nom do Write more!
The book was awesome. I liked it. I wished you did more Editings and stuffs. But man you did a Great Job. I will see what more you can write. Don't stop I am you biggest fan from now!
The novel is Good! Needs some improvements Though, But still I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hehe Author-san Write more, don't stop!!!! I will be cheering for you hehe! Jaa-naaa!
Dayummmm! That story flow tho... It's majestic I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it ✨✨✨✨
Hello! I have read the first 3 chapters. I am quite amused and amazed on how you write your novel, your writing style it is. When I tried to write like that, I just knew that that kind of style wasnt for me. The main character, hmm, you have made us readers sympathize and empathize him for what he had gone through, her sister and the senior was, quite, I don't like them tbh. A rotten swan hays. I do hope he'll be handsome when the time comes, but I don't mind it either way, I'm ugly asf. Anyways, about your writing quality, it's good and I like it. I thought it was a game like novel with a system or game type novel, is it or is it not? Because it says Fantasy tho, nevermind, as long as it involves fantasy stuff that's it. I actually do not know what to say anymore because the book itself is good and you already have a goal for your novel. I want to read more so I'm going to keep your book to my library. Happy Writing Author! !
Such a tragedy. I won't say anymore as most will only be spoilers. I can't say I can't relate but sometimes the world would be like that for a few people, and it can't be denied---that is the general outline for the story. Well done author Cheers;
The story just got me hooked. The writing and flow of story is so smooth, that it has compel me to read till the end. The Author has done justice with the story. You all lot will not regret reading it.
This book just like the book "Not all heroes fight against Evil" If I remember it correctly. They both reincarnated in an unknown place. Or so I thought? By this story kind of different. Good to read more of this book! Good job author! 😊
The story really pulls me in, the writer has a really great style! This novel has some really funny moments aswell, I'm really enjoying it so far!😍
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It is very great story, and I hope everyone to read it. The plot was very nice, it's written in good terms. The MC are very well, and the story has a good sense of humor. I like it much
Goddamn the old reviews are a fuckin prick and plastics, I didnt come here to read your story but i finished fast lol is too short anyway, i like your efforts creating this so i give you five star review.. i hope you get a lot more reviews so they could give you honest ones...
I really loved the story. I loved the way how the story starts. The flow in the story seems so realistic. Its like reading a manga. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ Please continue to write more.
I like how the author made the story, the details and the flow is really clear... I simply love it... and don't call it crappy... it's a beautiful and fascinating story... And I love it ❤
I am not going to point out how similiar it is the another book that I will not be naming. All of the POV switches can get very confusing and the one line at a time is very drawn out and can become boring. It’s well written and has an interesting storyline.
There can always be improvements to writing , but i love the way this story is conveyed and how the characters are expressed . keep up the hard work!
It's really interesting! The main character's life is well-described, plus the story is getting more great through the chapters. Can't wait to read more!!
I love how you delivered the character's feelings and how you built your imagination in your story. You are doing well this is way better than mine😄.
The synopsis gave me vibes that reassured me that this book would be interesting to read... and after reading it I am pretty amazed too..... writing style of the author is really good.... pls keep on updating!!!
This story is so wonderful to read; it provides beautiful imagery of what each personality is like and the cultivating cast of character is relatable and captivating. Wonderfully written!
The story is moving along well and I like how the characters interact with each other. While I am not a system fan its not a bad story and I wish the author luck.
Is this fantasy? I saw something like status board. Wow~ Give me more chapters right now. I demand an update right now.（＾∀＾●）ﾉｼ But this lady is willing to wait. Do your best author.
Now this is a good one, Though it's similar to one of the novel I know but still a great job. I hope that you continue to write more, Please do that Bye bye
Amazing Story Senpai, I hope the Main character becomes a hot dashing Character like that K novel Guy, I hope you know What I am saying, Please update more
Lucrus!!!! I am here again?!! Hehe! I love your works! I really do! Please Pat me Please hehe! I Want more of your stories! Send me more! hehe, It's so good!
Overall, its good, It relates to one Novel I know, but I won't say, probably that was your inspiration to write this, So far so good, But needs more updates
I love it! It's nice! The way how you wrote it actually impressive. To be honest I know you'll get there, Update more, Work harder. And you shall receive it.
Brother Nom!! The book is sooo nice! I felt pity for the MC! Is it your Story? I mean your real life story? It feels so real! Oh! Brother Nom do Write more!
The book was awesome. I liked it. I wished you did more Editings and stuffs. But man you did a Great Job. I will see what more you can write. Don't stop I am you biggest fan from now!
The novel is Good! Needs some improvements Though, But still I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hehe Author-san Write more, don't stop!!!! I will be cheering for you hehe! Jaa-naaa!
Dayummmm! That story flow tho... It's majestic I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it ✨✨✨✨
Hello! I have read the first 3 chapters. I am quite amused and amazed on how you write your novel, your writing style it is. When I tried to write like that, I just knew that that kind of style wasnt for me. The main character, hmm, you have made us readers sympathize and empathize him for what he had gone through, her sister and the senior was, quite, I don't like them tbh. A rotten swan hays. I do hope he'll be handsome when the time comes, but I don't mind it either way, I'm ugly asf. Anyways, about your writing quality, it's good and I like it. I thought it was a game like novel with a system or game type novel, is it or is it not? Because it says Fantasy tho, nevermind, as long as it involves fantasy stuff that's it. I actually do not know what to say anymore because the book itself is good and you already have a goal for your novel. I want to read more so I'm going to keep your book to my library. Happy Writing Author! !
Such a tragedy. I won't say anymore as most will only be spoilers. I can't say I can't relate but sometimes the world would be like that for a few people, and it can't be denied---that is the general outline for the story. Well done author Cheers;
The story just got me hooked. The writing and flow of story is so smooth, that it has compel me to read till the end. The Author has done justice with the story. You all lot will not regret reading it.
This book just like the book "Not all heroes fight against Evil" If I remember it correctly. They both reincarnated in an unknown place. Or so I thought? By this story kind of different. Good to read more of this book! Good job author! 😊
The story really pulls me in, the writer has a really great style! This novel has some really funny moments aswell, I'm really enjoying it so far!😍
DISGUSTING_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ TO BE HONEST BUT CROCO LIKE IT
It is very great story, and I hope everyone to read it. The plot was very nice, it's written in good terms. The MC are very well, and the story has a good sense of humor. I like it much
Goddamn the old reviews are a fuckin prick and plastics, I didnt come here to read your story but i finished fast lol is too short anyway, i like your efforts creating this so i give you five star review.. i hope you get a lot more reviews so they could give you honest ones...
I really loved the story. I loved the way how the story starts. The flow in the story seems so realistic. Its like reading a manga. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ Please continue to write more.
I like how the author made the story, the details and the flow is really clear... I simply love it... and don't call it crappy... it's a beautiful and fascinating story... And I love it ❤
I am not going to point out how similiar it is the another book that I will not be naming. All of the POV switches can get very confusing and the one line at a time is very drawn out and can become boring. It’s well written and has an interesting storyline.
There can always be improvements to writing , but i love the way this story is conveyed and how the characters are expressed . keep up the hard work!
It's really interesting! The main character's life is well-described, plus the story is getting more great through the chapters. Can't wait to read more!!
I love how you delivered the character's feelings and how you built your imagination in your story. You are doing well this is way better than mine😄.
The synopsis gave me vibes that reassured me that this book would be interesting to read... and after reading it I am pretty amazed too..... writing style of the author is really good.... pls keep on updating!!!
This story is so wonderful to read; it provides beautiful imagery of what each personality is like and the cultivating cast of character is relatable and captivating. Wonderfully written!
The story is moving along well and I like how the characters interact with each other. While I am not a system fan its not a bad story and I wish the author luck.