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saw in the comments that like 10 ppl dropped this at the same time.. but aside from that, the author just goes way too fast with relationships, like makino, who ditched her home village to go with a pirate she met the night b4? rly bro... and then you tell her (not ask) that you will be changing her species to dragon on the same day and the rest of your future crew too (this is why ppl dropped).. its the mc ppl make fun of, its the entitled loser that magically gets everything with no work, including the love of others.
Hasta ahora va muy bien la historia unas que otras cosas son incómodas pero supo go que es normal ya que es un FF :) muy bueno trabajo .... esperando más caps :🥲🥲
love the story, hope the author will update. Almost a year now.😖[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I kind of like it but i won't say i love it its good but kind of not [img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
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author, are you okay? your book is very interesting, don't tell me you dropped it? one piece is a world, where a lot of people writes fan fictions, but alas, few people can write good one, and you are included
Лучшее что я читал просто пиздец я бы тебя выебал пацан или девка и все такое такое бы хорошо хорошо тебе твовгугнцнцн ыоцггц6цнцнц цлц8ц88252руоущв
La historia es buena pero faltaron muchos personajes que se omitieron, en general y falto mas descripción en el (R18) pero en general esbuena para pasar el rato.
Didn't really get that far, I was trying to because I was bored...but wasn't able to stand it no more, soooo Peace Out! Why I wasn't able to? Simple really, MC = Luffy when it came to adventuring, he goes to where luffy went basically(beating the same people luffy had overcome in the original), the only difference is instead of luffy it's our FF MC, he pick up girls so fast probably faster than the flash running towards him to ask how to pick up girls. Simple minded people probably wouldn't mind this, well I might be wrong there but *shrugs* who cares, I don't. Anyway long story short, It's 1 of the WORST fanfic to read out there, and there's A LOT of them.
I the way that the mc and his story is just one part of the the story, and if our mc dies or leave this dimension the story will still continue. Is a fresh take on fan-fin. Thanks for not making the story revolve around your character, kinder reminds me of of the witcher 3 I great minds think alike👏👏👏👏👏
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Muito bom, parabéns para quem fez esse linda história! Que continue postando essa história porque eu quero é mais. Protagonista Op e um ótimo herem não tem nada melhor que isso.
I look at the chapters and the 4th chapter is a r-18 chapter drop for me................................................................................
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just a bit sad it doesn't upload a bit more ........................................................................................
U dropping this?or u just busy?🤔 it's a good Fanfic though so don't drop it and try to compensate your readers for not uploading for a long time 🤨🧐😎
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Nope. At chapter 2 made me drop this thing (couldn't even finish the chapter btw). I wonder why so many rated this at 5 or 4? Lol. They bot or something?
Very good book if I do say so myself. Of course, I'm the author so I'm a bit biased, but I think it's good and you should give it a read yourself. It's not that bad.
saw in the comments that like 10 ppl dropped this at the same time.. but aside from that, the author just goes way too fast with relationships, like makino, who ditched her home village to go with a pirate she met the night b4? rly bro... and then you tell her (not ask) that you will be changing her species to dragon on the same day and the rest of your future crew too (this is why ppl dropped).. its the mc ppl make fun of, its the entitled loser that magically gets everything with no work, including the love of others.
Hasta ahora va muy bien la historia unas que otras cosas son incómodas pero supo go que es normal ya que es un FF :) muy bueno trabajo .... esperando más caps :🥲🥲
love the story, hope the author will update. Almost a year now.😖[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I kind of like it but i won't say i love it its good but kind of not [img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
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author, are you okay? your book is very interesting, don't tell me you dropped it? one piece is a world, where a lot of people writes fan fictions, but alas, few people can write good one, and you are included
Лучшее что я читал просто пиздец я бы тебя выебал пацан или девка и все такое такое бы хорошо хорошо тебе твовгугнцнцн ыоцггц6цнцнц цлц8ц88252руоущв
La historia es buena pero faltaron muchos personajes que se omitieron, en general y falto mas descripción en el (R18) pero en general esbuena para pasar el rato.
Didn't really get that far, I was trying to because I was bored...but wasn't able to stand it no more, soooo Peace Out! Why I wasn't able to? Simple really, MC = Luffy when it came to adventuring, he goes to where luffy went basically(beating the same people luffy had overcome in the original), the only difference is instead of luffy it's our FF MC, he pick up girls so fast probably faster than the flash running towards him to ask how to pick up girls. Simple minded people probably wouldn't mind this, well I might be wrong there but *shrugs* who cares, I don't. Anyway long story short, It's 1 of the WORST fanfic to read out there, and there's A LOT of them.
I the way that the mc and his story is just one part of the the story, and if our mc dies or leave this dimension the story will still continue. Is a fresh take on fan-fin. Thanks for not making the story revolve around your character, kinder reminds me of of the witcher 3 I great minds think alike👏👏👏👏👏
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Muito bom, parabéns para quem fez esse linda história! Que continue postando essa história porque eu quero é mais. Protagonista Op e um ótimo herem não tem nada melhor que isso.
I look at the chapters and the 4th chapter is a r-18 chapter drop for me................................................................................
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just a bit sad it doesn't upload a bit more ........................................................................................
U dropping this?or u just busy?🤔 it's a good Fanfic though so don't drop it and try to compensate your readers for not uploading for a long time 🤨🧐😎
Reveal Spoiler Nope. At chapter 2 made me drop this thing (couldn't even finish the chapter btw). I wonder why so many rated this at 5 or 4? Lol. They bot or something?
Very good book if I do say so myself. Of course, I'm the author so I'm a bit biased, but I think it's good and you should give it a read yourself. It's not that bad.