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This is the fast food aka MC Donald version of fanfic, it is enjoyable if you doesn't use your brain. Sadly this story is probably abandoned by the author.
hehehehe a hot story based on one piece (obviously) the harem grows, the joy grows, the temperature rises a pity to have few chapters and the author to have discontinued
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Esto está buenísimo espero y lo continúen pronto, ya que sería una completa lastima que se quedará así como esta, todo lo que contiene a válido cada segundo de lectura.
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La historia es buena pero le falta un poco más de detalle en las escenas y que paso con Robin?, su personalidad quedó un poco extraviada así sea por lujurua creo que quedó muy alegre?, bueno eso esto el resto está bien
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Really looking forward to the next update. This is a really good story. I liked how it was proceeding. It has a nice pace. I am curious to see how it will go down when he meets Luffy.
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This is the fast food aka MC Donald version of fanfic, it is enjoyable if you doesn't use your brain. Sadly this story is probably abandoned by the author.
hehehehe a hot story based on one piece (obviously) the harem grows, the joy grows, the temperature rises a pity to have few chapters and the author to have discontinued
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Esto está buenísimo espero y lo continúen pronto, ya que sería una completa lastima que se quedará así como esta, todo lo que contiene a válido cada segundo de lectura.
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La historia es buena pero le falta un poco más de detalle en las escenas y que paso con Robin?, su personalidad quedó un poco extraviada así sea por lujurua creo que quedó muy alegre?, bueno eso esto el resto está bien
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Really looking forward to the next update. This is a really good story. I liked how it was proceeding. It has a nice pace. I am curious to see how it will go down when he meets Luffy.
You still alive? (._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )(._.) ( I: ) ( .-. ) ( :l )
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