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Synopsis
100 years ago a mysterious force suddenly enveloped the planet called earth it completely changed everything everyone had known magic and cultivation right out of novels suddenly became true, from people who were not lucky enough to be blessed to use this curse or gift from above too mysterious masters who roam the cosmos in search for greater power to use to rule more people, join Akuma White a weak boy with parents who were killed on the day he was born and not blessed with the mysterious power many people had to a almost god like- no a demonized cold hearted demon who only does that what he wants where he wants and how he wants to do it he only protects the people he cares for or who are worthy for that treatment, his road may not be easy but the rewards throughout is something not many people could even dream of possessing
[this story is a mix of magic power and cultivation, the first few chapters may be rushed because i am literally writing this on my phone laying on my bed under my cover]
[this novel may be slow paced for certain readers]
[i am a new author]
[tell me if there are things i need to improve on it the novel]
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Write a reviewcould you all rate it, i think i still have things u need to improve on but i don’t know what it is, also i need more ideas also u need new idea for this story and proof readers would be great too
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From what i have read, you need to add speech/ talking marks “” and break up your writing as its not a essay and its easier for the reader that way, lots of novel on this sit does this so there are many examples you could use. anyway i will continue to follow this sorry and good job for having a crack keep persistening 🐝