Equinox; Red Spider Lily • Hanabi

This is pattatass, I'm currently using my boyfriend's account. For those who are confused about the updates, I usually type 10 updates for a story and will update them in one. The grammar, spelling, typos, and a little bit plot holes are the hardest to polish. So please, understand me too because this is my way of writing. Thank you so much for reading.

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L_Asterisk

What happen to your story? This is one of the first story I have read here. I hope to see more chapters in this. I enjoyed it. I will support this if I see new updates.

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maesi_lee

Hello po ate paaaat nabasa ko yung promotion mo po sa wattpad about this story hehe nakakabigla kasi di ka nasulat duon ng english books kasi sabi mo po nahihiya ka kaya akala namin you are not that fluent hehe yun pala dito ka maglalabas ng galing. Goodkuck po ate pattatass! You are one of my faves author sa wattpad po ^_^ waiting po ako ng English story mo sa wattpad ^_^

I really like your story. I just wish you add more chpaters for us to read! I would have gvn you more stars if you had more updates. Full support to this novel!

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Vaspt

As one of the author's competitors against I really like your writing quality. Your comedy for this webnovel is genuine but has unique sequence storyline. Your only problem is your stability of update for your webnovel

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springmin

Came here from wattpad. I haven't started reading your work though but I'm sure it'll be worth the read even though I am not a mobile legend player. Its just quite awkward bcoz I used to read Bangtan fan fictions of yours. Goodluck for joining, author nim ;) God bless po. #Happy6thAnniv to us! :D

Otor-nim ate patatas update ka naman na sa ttd mo ohh haha sabi mo dba magpopost ka nang dalawang sabay na ud kapag nanalo ka dito? Aasahan namin yon eunnie. Sana mabuhay pa si Nathan baba hahaha Goodluck ate patatas!!!

Five golden stars for my favorite wattpad author~ Naglalabasan ang mga tagasuporta mo eunnie omona!~ sabi ko sayo worth it ang pag promote sa wattpad eyy! Waiting na po kaming mga readers mo sa english story mo sa Wattpad! Go Eunnie!~

Nabasa ko na po, ate Pat. This is thicctionary from, wp. Overall, your story is good. I thought I was the only one who supported you from your wattpad readers heol. I am very happy that you're exploring more to improve, I remember you told us that you're afraid to write in English because you are very insecure. But, goodjob ate Pat. Ang ganda ng story for a beginner(parang di naman po ehh hahahah). Good luck po :*

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PRINCESS143

Ate Pat bakit ngayon lang kayo nag promote sa wattpad huhuhu sorry po ngayon ko lang din nabasa yung promotion niniyo. Good luck po ate sa pag sali. Hwaiting !

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baeV_nim

Author-niiiiiiiimmm!! ~~ nakita ko rin sa wakas itong gawa mo hihi. I'm surprised that you're writing in English herr spokening dollars ka na ate Pat!! Very proud of you as an old reader sa wattpad. Update mo na po yung ttd peuleeeaseee~~~

What happen to the updates? The short is quite good and then quality if writing is good too.. But the updates are not. I'm so sorry but please update your story. But overall, this is good to read.

Dahil mapilit ka Pia na maglagay ako ng 5 stats sa gawa mo, ito na ito na!!! Alam kong gustong gusto mo itong contest na ito. Pero hindi enough na gusto mo lang ha? You need to put more determination since I can see what your story hole is. Apdeyt apdeyt din kapag may time ehe? As a friend and a cousin, you need to work harder kung ayaw mo kutusan kita.

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SOPEDDAENG

I'm not surprised that you are here, patty. When you announced in wp that you're joining, I already knew that you would. You have a good number of wp followers yet you didn't focused in promoting on wp instead you chose to promote it on fb when you only have 500 friends *claps otor-nim* As a friend, I may say that your first english story is well-written (you told us that your not confident, WHY???) but please update hahahaha even in wp you're updating once every 2 months. Your readers are hungry for your update, patty! But ok, keep up the good work. Hwaiting!!!!

I would've given you 5 stars if you update more often. You can write, but the chapters are cliff hanging. This story is good and it will have a spot in my library and support list. I just wish that this would be updated sooner or later because I bet your readers are waiting too. Good luck to the contest!!

WOAH I LIKE THIS! Very interesting idea! I hope you can put more context in your sypnosis tho so you can draw more people in to read cuz this story is really more than meets the eye :)

gusto mo realtalk pre? hindi kagandahan itong gawa mo napakacliche tapos halata na you are winning dahildahil sa kasikatan. kawawa kanaman kahit nagagalingan si lasayo hindi mo parin mapaganda itong gawa mo. Bajsoakwnahxiodnsbwhsoqoqngxd asdfghjklasdfghjklasjdlapapqiwuebdnxmslapquzndux nsisoalwmwnxhxuowpwmwnwhxuxosomwwnshix usowowmanbxjcueopwpwlwjwnbxhxoslwnna hsowkqnsnxjidpapqnwnshuxodowmwnahxuix hakaoamanzhuziskskaknhsiks troll review :D

Why is this story got in the top 10? Only few chapters. The writer is lazy. Do you think you will win? NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING.