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Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
love the book so far has a great story to it the Mc tends to lack common sense at times but I wouldn't change anything about it. ............
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I really liked it maybe not the MC but everything else was cool. I recomenx it for a quclick read after a hard day.😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
Wooow .... this novel is so CRAZY. DAMN. I already knocked him out after mc fight? / Cure slut with s e x? Then he tells every secret. (Ancestors, farts, blood type?)They go to the guild .... and meet other prostitutes and decide to help her ?? if you like where mc who is D I L D O lives then this novel is for you(cougar toy)
stupid MC................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Mc is a passive naieve fool with 0 presence that gets summoned by a elf princess that fuks and gets her previous summons Killed, she rapes the MC twice and her friend gives him aphrodisiac to rape him as well. The thIrd time they bind him to his bed with lvl 50 spells while he is lvl 1.. MC doesnt ask anything about lvls/system/why they raping him Because he doesnt want to offend them because he is to nice, then he gets told by someone that they enslaved him and can kill him whenever they want because when they summoned him they bind his soul to a relic what is mc reaction? Oh well..
passive,submissive and naive mc. thots everywhere and he is basically a slave who will die and he know it and they know he know it so they give him some hope in the name of companions who seems to against this slave hero system probably that's to motivate him to get stronger with hope. I personally think he will be backstabbed by those bitch harem who manipulating him.
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a lot of *** but the story keeps going on so the *** scenes aren't too long and that's what i like about this novel. and it is interessting. keep going
seriously from the way you have written it ,it sounds like your mc was killed by the summoning, but he doesn't bat an eyelid. he then finds out that the "heroes " summoned are dropping like flies again barely a flicker of concern,drugged and basically raped, no worries. the whole time he just does whatever he's told. You cannot immerse your readers in your story if the characters reactions and behaviour are not believable, 5 chapters and I already could not continue .
If the main story gets flushed a bit more then this should turn into a very good read. But, at the moment, he doesn't have many skills besides his "custom" ones. They are completely useless as of now but I hope he gets some useful ones or that the future unlocks on his "custom" actually have a use.
it so good and I like how the auther is think pulling the story to and how he is doing with and how they are thinking with it all[img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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simply bad. The MC is not so bad that of the penalty, he was taken out of his life to be a disposable pawn of the world to which he was summoned to kill a demon, however he simply accepts everything he is told and sent, unwillingly, he looks like a slave without soul. deplorable book.
keep it up author.....................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I personally didn't like how all the girls the MC ****ed had apparently had tons of *** before .................. Jddhdjdjdjdjdjfhxfjdjfjxjfjfjfj
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This novel is a hidden gem i hope more people discover it soon. It would be sad otherwise. Afterall such a fresh R-18 novel experience is rare for me. I heartly recommend it.
mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang .
A great R-18 book in making. Hopefully author will not drop it off like other promising novels. if you are a fan of R-18, but want some plot instead of MC swinging his back, this book is for you. Overall its a Mystery + R18. So, great
Just started and completed all 22 chapters. Great mix of game system, adventure, world building and ***. I'm looking foward to more. Thanks!
A great R-18 book in making. Hopefully author will not drop it off like other promising novels. if you are a fan of R-18, but want some plot instead of MC swinging his back, this book is for you. Overall its a Mystery + R18. So, great
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Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
love the book so far has a great story to it the Mc tends to lack common sense at times but I wouldn't change anything about it. ............
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I really liked it maybe not the MC but everything else was cool. I recomenx it for a quclick read after a hard day.😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
Wooow .... this novel is so CRAZY. DAMN. I already knocked him out after mc fight? / Cure slut with s e x? Then he tells every secret. (Ancestors, farts, blood type?)They go to the guild .... and meet other prostitutes and decide to help her ?? if you like where mc who is D I L D O lives then this novel is for you(cougar toy)
stupid MC................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Mc is a passive naieve fool with 0 presence that gets summoned by a elf princess that fuks and gets her previous summons Killed, she rapes the MC twice and her friend gives him aphrodisiac to rape him as well. The thIrd time they bind him to his bed with lvl 50 spells while he is lvl 1.. MC doesnt ask anything about lvls/system/why they raping him Because he doesnt want to offend them because he is to nice, then he gets told by someone that they enslaved him and can kill him whenever they want because when they summoned him they bind his soul to a relic what is mc reaction? Oh well..
passive,submissive and naive mc. thots everywhere and he is basically a slave who will die and he know it and they know he know it so they give him some hope in the name of companions who seems to against this slave hero system probably that's to motivate him to get stronger with hope. I personally think he will be backstabbed by those bitch harem who manipulating him.
Reveal Spoiler a lot of *** but the story keeps going on so the *** scenes aren't too long and that's what i like about this novel. and it is interessting. keep going
seriously from the way you have written it ,it sounds like your mc was killed by the summoning, but he doesn't bat an eyelid. he then finds out that the "heroes " summoned are dropping like flies again barely a flicker of concern,drugged and basically raped, no worries. the whole time he just does whatever he's told. You cannot immerse your readers in your story if the characters reactions and behaviour are not believable, 5 chapters and I already could not continue .
If the main story gets flushed a bit more then this should turn into a very good read. But, at the moment, he doesn't have many skills besides his "custom" ones. They are completely useless as of now but I hope he gets some useful ones or that the future unlocks on his "custom" actually have a use.
it so good and I like how the auther is think pulling the story to and how he is doing with and how they are thinking with it all[img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Reveal Spoiler simply bad. The MC is not so bad that of the penalty, he was taken out of his life to be a disposable pawn of the world to which he was summoned to kill a demon, however he simply accepts everything he is told and sent, unwillingly, he looks like a slave without soul. deplorable book.
keep it up author.....................................................................................................................................................................................................
Reveal Spoiler I personally didn't like how all the girls the MC ****ed had apparently had tons of *** before .................. Jddhdjdjdjdjdjfhxfjdjfjxjfjfjfj
mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
This novel is a hidden gem i hope more people discover it soon. It would be sad otherwise. Afterall such a fresh R-18 novel experience is rare for me. I heartly recommend it.
mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang . Harem gang .
A great R-18 book in making. Hopefully author will not drop it off like other promising novels. if you are a fan of R-18, but want some plot instead of MC swinging his back, this book is for you. Overall its a Mystery + R18. So, great
Just started and completed all 22 chapters. Great mix of game system, adventure, world building and ***. I'm looking foward to more. Thanks!
A great R-18 book in making. Hopefully author will not drop it off like other promising novels. if you are a fan of R-18, but want some plot instead of MC swinging his back, this book is for you. Overall its a Mystery + R18. So, great
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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