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Overall the book is good and fairly compelling, the world building has a lot of potential although the character screen can be a bit excessive at times. The early locking of chapters isnt quite appreciated but, so far worth the cost in my opinion.
im surprised this is even on here since it was released on kindle a little over 2 months ago so thats probably why there is such a stupid pay wall but still its a bit too much
what the sh*ttery is this? does this guy is in need money urgently? if it's emergency, please someone make some donation. as for me...i'm just passing by.....
......l..............t...........h.........I.......n.......k.............. this is a decent story, the pay wall sucks though.....................
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I get it you sell this on amazon, and its not a long book, so there wont be a lot of chapter, but you cant use the same marketing here than on amazon. Not a lot of people will invest in the novel after only 3-5 chapters.
First off, this is a published book. You can literally go out and buy a copy of it, which is likely what this guy did. Feel free to Google the title yourselves if you don't believe me. Second, the online reviews describe this story as being one long training montage, with little to no action whatsoever...... Last but not least, if you haven't already, check out this thing's Table of Contents for a good laugh.
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Bruh this an actual published book and he's trying to make money off of it like??? It's fine if this is the actual writer but I have to really doubt that. honestly I wouldn't be suprised if he bought the book and is trying to make money off of it
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Another money grubbing scam, get the hell out of here. If your predecessors did the same would you even be here😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤
Only 3 chapters. The Rest are locked Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_
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3 chapters in premium, absolutely no clue if the book is any good yet, barely any hint of actual story development. How does the author think he'll get new readers if the story hasn't even started yet?
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read the reviews and check table of contents,, ch 4 already block,, good job I will never read this novel , doubt this novel good enough to read too..
really 4 chapters then priviledge??............................................................................... .........................
What can i understand in 3 free chapters . There is your review based on 3 chapters. Didn't even bother reading . Keep doing this and wait see how many people will support you ....
Was gonna read til i saw whay you did author 😂😂😂😂 Did it to yourself and its funny but maybe try again 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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No one who puts heir entire story behind a pay scam wall, Deserves any beter than a single star.
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Interesting story, I look forward to how the author fleshes out the characters and scenarios he has created.
Authors nowadays always locking the chapters so early man wtf stop it get some help 😂 Drop drop drop drop 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻
Overall the book is good and fairly compelling, the world building has a lot of potential although the character screen can be a bit excessive at times. The early locking of chapters isnt quite appreciated but, so far worth the cost in my opinion.
im surprised this is even on here since it was released on kindle a little over 2 months ago so thats probably why there is such a stupid pay wall but still its a bit too much
what the sh*ttery is this? does this guy is in need money urgently? if it's emergency, please someone make some donation. as for me...i'm just passing by.....
......l..............t...........h.........I.......n.......k.............. this is a decent story, the pay wall sucks though.....................
Lol are u joking for real?.?????????????????????trash drop drop drop drop drop🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀😂🍆😥🥺😥😥😥😥🖕🏼🖕🏼🖕🏼🖕🏼🥰🖕🏼🖕🏼🖕🏼🖕🏼🖕🏼🖕🏼🖕🏼🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
Reveal Spoiler $115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email lise.work2021@gmail.com
I get it you sell this on amazon, and its not a long book, so there wont be a lot of chapter, but you cant use the same marketing here than on amazon. Not a lot of people will invest in the novel after only 3-5 chapters.
First off, this is a published book. You can literally go out and buy a copy of it, which is likely what this guy did. Feel free to Google the title yourselves if you don't believe me. Second, the online reviews describe this story as being one long training montage, with little to no action whatsoever...... Last but not least, if you haven't already, check out this thing's Table of Contents for a good laugh.
Giving this a chance Giving this a chance Giving this a chance Giving this a chance Giving this a chance Giving this a chance Giving this a chance Giving this a chance Giving this a chance Giving this a chance Giving this a chance Giving this a chance Giving this a chance Giving this a chance Giving this a chance Giving this a chance
Bruh this an actual published book and he's trying to make money off of it like??? It's fine if this is the actual writer but I have to really doubt that. honestly I wouldn't be suprised if he bought the book and is trying to make money off of it
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Reveal Spoiler Another money grubbing scam, get the hell out of here. If your predecessors did the same would you even be here😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤
Only 3 chapters. The Rest are locked Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_Drop_
novel taik, wkwkwkwkwkwkwkkwkwkkwkwkwkw [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
3 chapters in premium, absolutely no clue if the book is any good yet, barely any hint of actual story development. How does the author think he'll get new readers if the story hasn't even started yet?
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read the reviews and check table of contents,, ch 4 already block,, good job I will never read this novel , doubt this novel good enough to read too..
really 4 chapters then priviledge??............................................................................... .........................
What can i understand in 3 free chapters . There is your review based on 3 chapters. Didn't even bother reading . Keep doing this and wait see how many people will support you ....
Was gonna read til i saw whay you did author 😂😂😂😂 Did it to yourself and its funny but maybe try again 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
This story is a scam don’t bother This story is a scam don’t bother This story is a scam don’t bother This story is a scam don’t bother This story is a scam don’t bother
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No one who puts heir entire story behind a pay scam wall, Deserves any beter than a single star.
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Interesting story, I look forward to how the author fleshes out the characters and scenarios he has created.