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ThePromise_

The general: Normally I wouldn't give five stars. But six books later, I can see how much the author has improved. I wish her luck for this contest. If she continues improving her writing and listening to suggestions. I'm sure this book will reach further heights than her other books. The book: It starts of with a preview of the future. Sumire is telling her daughter how she first met her husband (the girl's father). That daughter is Terashima Lila (Dream Star's protagonist). So the book is a epilogue for DS. This book has more sweet romance vibes than her other ones, but the emotional aspect is still there. It's very easy to relate to the characters because of this.

4yr
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Kiiara
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*poof* popping in for the first time in Matsu-san’s book! From the start, I had already fallen in love with the synopsis. My first thought was how the author has a way with words. The synopsis was beautifully written that it instantly drew my attention. I have never read any of Matsu’s book before, but this “Eternal Melody” feels like it’s calling me. I absolutely did not regret picking this up. When I read it, I feel the subtle emotion conveyed through the writings. It’s subtle but powerful enough to intrude me emotionally. I feel conflicted with all these complex feelings coming at me at the same time. Nostalgia, sadness, heartwarming, soothing until it becomes heartbreakingly beautiful. The story may not come out strong at first but it will slowly push you to the corner, until it all come pouring. Matsu-san you really caught me off guard midway. Lastly, I’m so very much fond of your writing style. Yes, it may need certain editing for the typos but nevertheless, I love the simplicity your portraying. It is clean, lean, concise, and without too much adornment and yet, you r able to speak so much through ur writing. If any of you readers ever read Murakami or Raymond Carver works you’ll know what I mean. Matsu-san fits the same category. Ahhh I really love your work, Matsu-san!! And lord, the theme of your story fits Japanese literary so much. Your choice choosing Japanese culture is the 😁😁

4yr
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RachelRuth

When you're feeling low and don't know where to go—this melody shall stay by your side, eternally and forever yours. As a first time reader of Matsu's book, I was curious on what pulled many readers to her story and I think I can now understand. She has the ability to depict a story that lets you deeply connect with the characters and you find yourself rooting for them and curious of what will happen next. The capacity to immediately draw you in with the characters? That is a talent. There may be more polished stories with impeccable grammar... but somehow they'll appear bland and lifeless. This story is alive and bursting with harmonious melody. It is an unpolished gem, but a precious gem nonetheless! Unlike other stories that start with the female lead and male lead meeting for the first time, Matsu portrayed two characters who have already been in each other's lives for a long time. It was a perfect choice, a wonderful choice that gives it a fresh perspective and view when compared to other stories. The chemistry between Sumire and Yuhi is truly amazing and this story is a beautiful canvas—brushed and marked with the hues and shades of their love.

3yr
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Anjana_bhagat

Nuce book and story love reading but doing

18h
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Honey_Slasor

Actually so incredibly intrigued by this book

1d
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Simphiwe_Ngwenya_3165

The best books I have ever read, keep it up

6d
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Naima_Fakhreddine

Je trouve que c est bien écrit c est captivant j arrive pas a me détacher du récit

8d
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Aurelie_Pierre

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10d
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Belinda_Laure

j'aime bien l'intrigue de l'histoire et je trouve cette histoire interessante

14d
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Daoist2i5XL6

Wow!!! 1323 chapters!!!! I’ve never been a fan of this kind of novels so it took ages to finish😂 but I must say it was definitely worth it!! Try it out!

17d
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CAHAYA_SAYA

very good and the best book we can read. i will tell my friend about this apps

18d
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Sweta_6065

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19d
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DaoistNrSNLs

Je félicite l'auteur pour le récit . Bon travail !

21d
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Ayesha_Gul_8825

this ia one of the best written stories out there.

21d
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Gina_Alejo_4274

Excellent story. easy to understand and it's like you're inside the story

25d
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DaoistMN9iQL

lovely book to read [img=Out of it][img=update]

26d
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Stephy_Perles

J'adore ce livre j'ai beaucoup aimé. C'est spectaculaire

26d
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Phillipine_Matome

The story line is intriguing , it makes me wanna come for more each day .

26d
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Anais_HOARAU

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1mth
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Kathrina_Gaurano

nice story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1mth
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DaoistSOz9j4

bien ficeleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr

1mth
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benitacelia130

this book is super interesting my gosh.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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DaoistyhJg6Y

merci pour cette lecture je recommande j'adore ce genre d'histoire

1mth
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DaoistQmf8eY

Waouh! Impressionnant. La lecture est assez facile et captivante.

1mth
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Nerissa_Salvador

Good 👍 nice novel.exciting love to keep reading

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Mydear_Dhang

i want to read more stories from the author

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Anahla_Bell

this book was extremely extraordinary loved it

1mth
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Tejaswi_tatapudi

I didn't have any problem in this chapter

1mth
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DaoistCwAKPL

it is a good story i cannot stop reading this

1mth
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Mydear_Dhang

I like to read sweet romance stories from this author

1mth
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DaoistyhJg6Y

j'aime beaucoup mais certains chapitre change de prénom c'est un peut dommage mais bon

1mth
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iIKaFIi

I love it and it's so fantastic from the beginning to the end I just not satisfied with one thing the chapters update kinda slow. We want like 4 in one day

1mth
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ThePromise_

The general: Normally I wouldn't give five stars. But six books later, I can see how much the author has improved. I wish her luck for this contest. If she continues improving her writing and listening to suggestions. I'm sure this book will reach further heights than her other books. The book: It starts of with a preview of the future. Sumire is telling her daughter how she first met her husband (the girl's father). That daughter is Terashima Lila (Dream Star's protagonist). So the book is a epilogue for DS. This book has more sweet romance vibes than her other ones, but the emotional aspect is still there. It's very easy to relate to the characters because of this.

4yr
View 48 Replies
Kiiara
LV 11 Badge

*poof* popping in for the first time in Matsu-san’s book! From the start, I had already fallen in love with the synopsis. My first thought was how the author has a way with words. The synopsis was beautifully written that it instantly drew my attention. I have never read any of Matsu’s book before, but this “Eternal Melody” feels like it’s calling me. I absolutely did not regret picking this up. When I read it, I feel the subtle emotion conveyed through the writings. It’s subtle but powerful enough to intrude me emotionally. I feel conflicted with all these complex feelings coming at me at the same time. Nostalgia, sadness, heartwarming, soothing until it becomes heartbreakingly beautiful. The story may not come out strong at first but it will slowly push you to the corner, until it all come pouring. Matsu-san you really caught me off guard midway. Lastly, I’m so very much fond of your writing style. Yes, it may need certain editing for the typos but nevertheless, I love the simplicity your portraying. It is clean, lean, concise, and without too much adornment and yet, you r able to speak so much through ur writing. If any of you readers ever read Murakami or Raymond Carver works you’ll know what I mean. Matsu-san fits the same category. Ahhh I really love your work, Matsu-san!! And lord, the theme of your story fits Japanese literary so much. Your choice choosing Japanese culture is the 😁😁

4yr
View 16 Replies
RachelRuth

When you're feeling low and don't know where to go—this melody shall stay by your side, eternally and forever yours. As a first time reader of Matsu's book, I was curious on what pulled many readers to her story and I think I can now understand. She has the ability to depict a story that lets you deeply connect with the characters and you find yourself rooting for them and curious of what will happen next. The capacity to immediately draw you in with the characters? That is a talent. There may be more polished stories with impeccable grammar... but somehow they'll appear bland and lifeless. This story is alive and bursting with harmonious melody. It is an unpolished gem, but a precious gem nonetheless! Unlike other stories that start with the female lead and male lead meeting for the first time, Matsu portrayed two characters who have already been in each other's lives for a long time. It was a perfect choice, a wonderful choice that gives it a fresh perspective and view when compared to other stories. The chemistry between Sumire and Yuhi is truly amazing and this story is a beautiful canvas—brushed and marked with the hues and shades of their love.

3yr
View 26 Replies
Anjana_bhagat

Nuce book and story love reading but doing

18h
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Honey_Slasor

Actually so incredibly intrigued by this book

1d
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Simphiwe_Ngwenya_3165

The best books I have ever read, keep it up

6d
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Naima_Fakhreddine

Je trouve que c est bien écrit c est captivant j arrive pas a me détacher du récit

8d
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Aurelie_Pierre

lhxktwitwihwpix muxlhwjf* mywiywitUg, kg,itwiwt

10d
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Belinda_Laure

j'aime bien l'intrigue de l'histoire et je trouve cette histoire interessante

14d
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Daoist2i5XL6

Wow!!! 1323 chapters!!!! I’ve never been a fan of this kind of novels so it took ages to finish😂 but I must say it was definitely worth it!! Try it out!

17d
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CAHAYA_SAYA

very good and the best book we can read. i will tell my friend about this apps

18d
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Sweta_6065

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19d
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DaoistNrSNLs

Je félicite l'auteur pour le récit . Bon travail !

21d
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Ayesha_Gul_8825

this ia one of the best written stories out there.

21d
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Gina_Alejo_4274

Excellent story. easy to understand and it's like you're inside the story

25d
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DaoistMN9iQL

lovely book to read [img=Out of it][img=update]

26d
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Stephy_Perles

J'adore ce livre j'ai beaucoup aimé. C'est spectaculaire

26d
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Phillipine_Matome

The story line is intriguing , it makes me wanna come for more each day .

26d
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Anais_HOARAU

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1mth
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Kathrina_Gaurano

nice story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1mth
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DaoistSOz9j4

bien ficeleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr

1mth
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benitacelia130

this book is super interesting my gosh.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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DaoistyhJg6Y

merci pour cette lecture je recommande j'adore ce genre d'histoire

1mth
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DaoistQmf8eY

Waouh! Impressionnant. La lecture est assez facile et captivante.

1mth
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DaoistcTtYnK

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Nerissa_Salvador

Good 👍 nice novel.exciting love to keep reading

1mth
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Mydear_Dhang

i want to read more stories from the author

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1mth
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Anahla_Bell

this book was extremely extraordinary loved it

1mth
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Tejaswi_tatapudi

I didn't have any problem in this chapter

1mth
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DaoistCwAKPL

it is a good story i cannot stop reading this

1mth
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Mydear_Dhang

I like to read sweet romance stories from this author

1mth
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DaoistyhJg6Y

j'aime beaucoup mais certains chapitre change de prénom c'est un peut dommage mais bon

1mth
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iIKaFIi

I love it and it's so fantastic from the beginning to the end I just not satisfied with one thing the chapters update kinda slow. We want like 4 in one day

1mth
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