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Write a reviewAhahaππ after reading this my eyes really tell's me that... "wow"... the gurl really is a badass ancient kin- i mean queen that wants some consor- *ahem i mean some suitors.. hahaha.. i love it... some unique way to please our Female lead.. ππππ π π π ππππππ
At first I thought the story was alright. Nothing spectacular. Nothing bad. Just your average enjoyable story. Pretty classic plot. Perhaps I noticed problems that others seem to skip over because I binge-read it. I think the first thing that started bothering me was that the story is mostly carried through conversation. This isn't pleasant to read. It doesn't allow us much insight to surroundings, time, background or thoughts of characters. Not to mention, surely your characters do something else, besides talking, which is relevant to the story. The second problem is the pace. It's really fast, but also really not. I didn't realize this problem at first because of how much had happend by this point (mainly conversations) so I assumed that in the story quite a bit of time had passed as well. That's when a character mentioned that only four days passed since the beginning of the story. At that point I was somewhere around chapter 80. It' pretty unforgivable to only have four days passing in 80 chapters. Especially because it would have worked perfectly well to have done the same thing in more time. It certainly felt like more time. In fact once I knew it was only about four days things started looking a bit unrealistic. This guy who had absolutely zero interest in his wife before has come to love her in four days. Love, not in love but love. That's a pretty quick chance especially for a guy that's supposed to have no clue about love because of his loveless childhood. These were definitely the main problems but another problem I had was that the author likes to dangle things, only to do absolutely nothing with it. There is the father-in-law who supposedly treats the main well. No mention of where he is but I'm guessing he's missing because I can't imagine why else the only person who visited her in the hospital besides her best friend isn't interested in seeing her when she's finally out of coma. (Also unrelated to this problem section but what kind of hospital allows patients to leave on the day they came out of a coma) Similarly we're told that she's actually from a powerful family but that her in-laws don't know this. Only for nothing to happen with said family. We don't even get in contact with them. This is only made worse by the main saying several times throughout the story that she's going to contact her mother. She never does. Please. Act. On. Your. Words. Don't dangle something like that in front of me for 80 chapters only to do nothing with it. Don't go mentioning something about a handsome fiancΓ© when you can't even follow up on the family. Step by step. By actually taking those steps and not just talking about them. Alright. Now that I've mentioned everything that vexed me but also can be be improved. This isn't meant to be a hate review it's meant to be constructive. So let me congratulate you on the fact that all the friendly characters have a clear voice and personality. Definitely something to be proud about. The evil guys can use some more work because right now they're all just typical white lotuses.
Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! Iβd love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
Amazing. I felt like being completely engaged in this story. It has the kind of development to make you think about what happens next. I have started reading stories again and have been filling my library with something worth reading. It is definitely going to be in my library. It's a good read. It's not the regular and usual story, something different and something less repetitive.
Wow, how nice the evil princess who was like a barbarian adopted to modern world and it's evils so precisely. She is great learner and manipulator. The way she handles her best friend, husband and rivals of this life is astounding.
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her previous life she was married and used for her kidney to save her husband mistress. She reborn to when she was 14 and her dad died. She changing her life and not doing what others want her to do
Funny, Challenging and intriguing story line with strong female character who knows when to do what and how to handle her man. ππ» Canβt get over it and would eagerly look forward to it.
Nice story love to read it waiting for more stories Nd want baddies to be punished and want hero Nd heroin to be always together forever and ever
Nice story love to read it waiting for more stories Nd wanting hero Nd heroin to fall in love with each other immensely Nd irrevocably Nd want baddies to be punished
Nice book π is the best.πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππΉππΉβ½οΈβ½οΈβ½οΈβ½οΈππππππππππβπΎβπΎβπΎβπΎβπΎβπΎβπΎπππ»
This novel is superb I love the FL and the ML although their love did not start well but I love the chemistry BTW them and I also love shen ya and Jiang wui Author you are the best thank you
Reveal SpoilerI like this Book a lot. it Peeks my interest and makes me want to keep reading. I Love the character development. It is quite the motivation. I give it a Five star!
This is an amazing and interesting novel and I have red it from beginning to the end and I love it alot ππππππππππππππππππ
The story is boring, villa, but there is nothing wrong with it I feel good and also I knew her man for this I am eager to know her narration There may be many differences, there is nothing wrong with a story
Reveal SpoilerI can't wait for the next chapter I'm sure there's big mistry about to expose.And I'm so happy that their relationship is becoming stronger. Can't wait for She and Jia's wedding
The story is amazingπ.. The character development is also nice... The female lead is strong and the male lead is also nice... I love the story till now..... I'll recommend this for sure β€π§‘..... Waiting for mass release ππ
Dear writer, I really love your story line and I don't think your story is ordinary at all. Even though I've read other stories about re-birth , I love ur story very much. It's just unfortunate some people don't know how to communicate politely. I was really hurt by ur comment the other time, I could guess u were angry. Sorry about that, but I like ur story very much. Can't wait for updates. Keep up the good work.
Reveal SpoilerNice story love reading it waiting for more updates Nd want baddies be punished and want hero Nd heroin together always Nd fall in love with each other immensely Nd irrevocably
wow !! πππit really great story and the female lead is a badass . A quite different to my other list of novel story that i like π π π π π βΊπ π π
Wow wow, this novel is one in a million, a story like no other and I love it alot πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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There is only one way to explain this book is wow. The style is the writers own not some mish mash of redone work. The author is telling a tale tht is new whle6 some elements are there like boy meets girls. She dies they kind of thing it is nice to see tht the author is making the female lead strong. Hope to read more
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The story is good but it's not updated for one month by now, is this story dropped or not? Please give us any information if you're going to hiatus because of something
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Amazing story. It is quite different from usual romantic stories. The female lead is the white lotus kind of character and the male lead is cold hearted sweetheart . Both are different from each other one is from the past and the other is from the Future. In between there is zoru π»πthe little celestial being. Quite different. I would actually give this a chance. Writing is pretty good too.
Ahahaππ after reading this my eyes really tell's me that... "wow"... the gurl really is a badass ancient kin- i mean queen that wants some consor- *ahem i mean some suitors.. hahaha.. i love it... some unique way to please our Female lead.. ππππ π π π ππππππ
At first I thought the story was alright. Nothing spectacular. Nothing bad. Just your average enjoyable story. Pretty classic plot. Perhaps I noticed problems that others seem to skip over because I binge-read it. I think the first thing that started bothering me was that the story is mostly carried through conversation. This isn't pleasant to read. It doesn't allow us much insight to surroundings, time, background or thoughts of characters. Not to mention, surely your characters do something else, besides talking, which is relevant to the story. The second problem is the pace. It's really fast, but also really not. I didn't realize this problem at first because of how much had happend by this point (mainly conversations) so I assumed that in the story quite a bit of time had passed as well. That's when a character mentioned that only four days passed since the beginning of the story. At that point I was somewhere around chapter 80. It' pretty unforgivable to only have four days passing in 80 chapters. Especially because it would have worked perfectly well to have done the same thing in more time. It certainly felt like more time. In fact once I knew it was only about four days things started looking a bit unrealistic. This guy who had absolutely zero interest in his wife before has come to love her in four days. Love, not in love but love. That's a pretty quick chance especially for a guy that's supposed to have no clue about love because of his loveless childhood. These were definitely the main problems but another problem I had was that the author likes to dangle things, only to do absolutely nothing with it. There is the father-in-law who supposedly treats the main well. No mention of where he is but I'm guessing he's missing because I can't imagine why else the only person who visited her in the hospital besides her best friend isn't interested in seeing her when she's finally out of coma. (Also unrelated to this problem section but what kind of hospital allows patients to leave on the day they came out of a coma) Similarly we're told that she's actually from a powerful family but that her in-laws don't know this. Only for nothing to happen with said family. We don't even get in contact with them. This is only made worse by the main saying several times throughout the story that she's going to contact her mother. She never does. Please. Act. On. Your. Words. Don't dangle something like that in front of me for 80 chapters only to do nothing with it. Don't go mentioning something about a handsome fiancΓ© when you can't even follow up on the family. Step by step. By actually taking those steps and not just talking about them. Alright. Now that I've mentioned everything that vexed me but also can be be improved. This isn't meant to be a hate review it's meant to be constructive. So let me congratulate you on the fact that all the friendly characters have a clear voice and personality. Definitely something to be proud about. The evil guys can use some more work because right now they're all just typical white lotuses.
Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! Iβd love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
Amazing. I felt like being completely engaged in this story. It has the kind of development to make you think about what happens next. I have started reading stories again and have been filling my library with something worth reading. It is definitely going to be in my library. It's a good read. It's not the regular and usual story, something different and something less repetitive.
Wow, how nice the evil princess who was like a barbarian adopted to modern world and it's evils so precisely. She is great learner and manipulator. The way she handles her best friend, husband and rivals of this life is astounding.
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her previous life she was married and used for her kidney to save her husband mistress. She reborn to when she was 14 and her dad died. She changing her life and not doing what others want her to do
Funny, Challenging and intriguing story line with strong female character who knows when to do what and how to handle her man. ππ» Canβt get over it and would eagerly look forward to it.
Nice story love to read it waiting for more stories Nd want baddies to be punished and want hero Nd heroin to be always together forever and ever
Nice story love to read it waiting for more stories Nd wanting hero Nd heroin to fall in love with each other immensely Nd irrevocably Nd want baddies to be punished
Nice book π is the best.πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππΉππΉβ½οΈβ½οΈβ½οΈβ½οΈππππππππππβπΎβπΎβπΎβπΎβπΎβπΎβπΎπππ»
This novel is superb I love the FL and the ML although their love did not start well but I love the chemistry BTW them and I also love shen ya and Jiang wui Author you are the best thank you
Reveal SpoilerI like this Book a lot. it Peeks my interest and makes me want to keep reading. I Love the character development. It is quite the motivation. I give it a Five star!
This is an amazing and interesting novel and I have red it from beginning to the end and I love it alot ππππππππππππππππππ
The story is boring, villa, but there is nothing wrong with it I feel good and also I knew her man for this I am eager to know her narration There may be many differences, there is nothing wrong with a story
Reveal SpoilerI can't wait for the next chapter I'm sure there's big mistry about to expose.And I'm so happy that their relationship is becoming stronger. Can't wait for She and Jia's wedding
The story is amazingπ.. The character development is also nice... The female lead is strong and the male lead is also nice... I love the story till now..... I'll recommend this for sure β€π§‘..... Waiting for mass release ππ
Dear writer, I really love your story line and I don't think your story is ordinary at all. Even though I've read other stories about re-birth , I love ur story very much. It's just unfortunate some people don't know how to communicate politely. I was really hurt by ur comment the other time, I could guess u were angry. Sorry about that, but I like ur story very much. Can't wait for updates. Keep up the good work.
Reveal SpoilerNice story love reading it waiting for more updates Nd want baddies be punished and want hero Nd heroin together always Nd fall in love with each other immensely Nd irrevocably
wow !! πππit really great story and the female lead is a badass . A quite different to my other list of novel story that i like π π π π π βΊπ π π
Wow wow, this novel is one in a million, a story like no other and I love it alot πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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There is only one way to explain this book is wow. The style is the writers own not some mish mash of redone work. The author is telling a tale tht is new whle6 some elements are there like boy meets girls. She dies they kind of thing it is nice to see tht the author is making the female lead strong. Hope to read more
I can't wait to finished the bookπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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The story is good but it's not updated for one month by now, is this story dropped or not? Please give us any information if you're going to hiatus because of something
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Reveal SpoilerΰΉοΈΏΰΉβ_β@_@β_β@_@β_ββ_ββ_β@_@β_β$_$β_β$_$β_ββ_β$_$β_β$_$β_β$_$β_ββ_β$_$β_β$_$(qΕ_Ε)ΰΉ_ΰΉ(qΕ_Ε)(qΕ_Ε)ΰΉ_ΰΉΒ°ΠΒ°ΰΉ_ΰΉΒ°ΠΒ°β.Μββ_ββ_ββ_βΰΉ_ΰΉβ_βΰΉ_ΰΉβ_ββ_βΰΉ_ΰΉβ_ββ_βΰΉ_ΰΉβ_βΰΉ_ΰΉβ_βΰΉ_ΰΉβ_βΰΉ_ΰΉβ_βΰΉ_ΰΉβ_ββ_β$_$(qΕ_Ε)
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Amazing story. It is quite different from usual romantic stories. The female lead is the white lotus kind of character and the male lead is cold hearted sweetheart . Both are different from each other one is from the past and the other is from the Future. In between there is zoru π»πthe little celestial being. Quite different. I would actually give this a chance. Writing is pretty good too.