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In the waning years of emperor Raiku's reign a coup is on the horizon. In order to protect the emperor's heir, a mercenary is hired. The mercenary in question however way want her dead more than any one else.
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Alright, so this is a review for the first 23 chapters. Pros: - Good dialogue - solid story and story development - good word usage - fun to read Cons: - blocky text, I wish the author split up the big paragraphs into smaller ones. - bunches of grammatical errors, luckily they're small ones but still very noticeable. I hope the author continues improving on his writing!
Great. The author has done a great job in setting the mood and vibes for each scene. I'm hooked and I hope that the author will not drop this novel
I honestly thought that me reading this will be a bad idea as I don't like this genre. However, this is such a good read. It makes me want more and the way the story flows is not at all confusing. Other than that everything was really well thought. I recommend this novel you guys should really try it out.
So far, 20 chapters in and I can somewhat see the full picture. The author knows where he's going with the story, has clearly established characters with fleshed-out psyche and it shows. The world is given meaningful attention with certain respect to the (Japanese?) setting and I like the level of details. However, the one thing that unfortunately managed to bother me is the writing. The ideas are there, abundant and ready for use, yet they're merged together in incoherent, albeit readable, blocks of texts. A little advice would be some focus on the process of writing itself, especially the punctuation. Shortening sentences while getting rid of incohesive expressions would do wonders for the book. As it stands, it has great potential and I'm looking forward to the author's improvement in the future.
The author did a great job in describing the vibe, settings, and mood of every scene. The authors know well how to use the words properly. The characters are great and the world-building was fine for me. My only problem is the paragraphs look coagulated. I would like it if the author breaks the paragraphs into smaller sections so the readers would have time to breathe. Good luck author!
This novel seems very interesting, well I hope you will continue on to this novel, keep up the hardwork I will be supporting you all the way in this journey...
First off, the writing style is good. It's not confusing and it doesn't look forced. The story flows naturally as well. Easy to get on the groove. Keep it up, Author!!
Let's start with the good points first: 1. The premise of the story is good. Taka being a child of a slave, definitely would need to struggle hard against his other brothers. It makes for an exciting story. 2. The story development is good. 3. Author has some good words in his arsenal to use. As for the bad one, there are times when the lack of proper punctuation creates confusion and I don't seem to get what the author is trying to convey. Needs improvement on that part. Best of luck for the future, author!
First off i really need you to teach me how you write like this, the story was captivating even though i wasn't able to finish it all, but still worth me time. you did good.
This story was alright, but there are some significant grammar errors that necessitate correcting. The premise is good, but needs a bit of polishing, so I cannot give this more than a 4/5.
Good read, good fun, worth the time spent. If you're considering whether or not you wana pick up this nove, do give it a try! You won't regret it.
i really like the author's dialogue! i'm still quite early into the story, but I think they've set the scene pretty well, and the story carries a lot of momentum from the very first chapter. only 'issue' i'd say are grammatical, but those naturally get better with time, and i'm sure those will fade as i catch up to the later chapters, but i'm certainly engaged and would recommend checking this out!
The Synopsis it's could explain how amazing this book, The grammar is wonderful, the pace is amazing, I love this book and I'm pretty sure readers will love it the way I did. I highly recommend ♥ keep it up author can't wait to see more updates from you .
A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
This is my first work. Honestly glad so many people have already read it hope that my viewers can offer a few reviews and any kind of feedback. thanks. And I just want to know how many of you laugh at me shamelessly reviewing and voting for my own work
Amazing, 19 chapters in and I can tell it's one of the of not the best book of its genre in this platform, I personally liked the world building so much, keep it up.