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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Все было прекрасно но зачем добавлять другие аниме и все портить просто дерьмо 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
Ceritanya atau alurnya itu banyak lucunya, seru, skip-nya juga banyak, pas baca review kaget sih ternyata ada bagian yang author hapus terkait bagaimana si erza itu confessed ke Adrian dan bagaimana cerita kok si Erza bisa suka sm Adrian, banyak orang gk suka bagian rewrite ini Krn bagian Erza itu dihapus, tapi gw sendiri b aja, Krn emng maunya kan solo bukan Harem wkwkwkw, tapi overall bisalah diatas 4 bintang nya 🙏🙏 👏👏 for the author
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Just a child novel.. ... Dont know why the rating and review is so high..... Why Just not make MC over powered....... And MC attitude and character is naive and like a kid......
I personally really liked the story, not every story needs to be a harem and it was nice to read a story about the wholesome love of the two lovers
Awesome story. Would have loved to have a specific closing end, but I'll take what is given. Actually finishing this and not making it a half baked harem fanfic is a great accomplishment.
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Initially thought of giving 1 rating but the way the author dropped this novel by shifting all ghe blane towards webnovel, I've got only one thing to say, I am impressed by the way you dropped you fanfic
Full of plot holes, unbalanced power set. poor story development.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
j ai adore l histoire c est une de mes light novel préférer j attend la suite avec impatience j espère qu il va voyager dans d autre monde et devenir encore plus fort tous en entraînant son enfant veuiller continuer l histoir svp
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Wish it would continue but rip author!!!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
This story is tough to read even if I turn my brain off. The story reminds me of a kindergartner trying to write their first story. Little to no dialogue punctuation. There's not even much content, it's mostly just time skips, the lack of punctuation kills any ability to properly read the story. Use your time to read something else, this is just terrifying to try to read.
Fantastic novel. Mc is slightly broken. Romance is AMAZING with no harem. Can feel the love. Shame it was stopped 10 months ago. But honestly it's not too bad, can see where the relationship is headed and with how op the mc is theres no worry about the canon fights. Worth a read
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Don’t get me wrong this is a good novel or I should say it could have been a good novel. But it looks like author is a rookie who hasn’t done much research in story he is about to write. And most importantly the power scale is all over the place . Ophis from dxd who is one of the strongest beings is shown weaker than one of fighters in magi. And most annoying is the way he choose his peerage . Instead of going for harem he is choosing old man like dumbuldo for his peerage. I mean seriously author. If you want to blame anybody for lack of ratings blame yourself for doing this kind of stupid things
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I really dont know when authors start write novels with gift-multiple-abilities-with-transmigration(reincarnation). That is really disgusting plot turn. Dont read it, it doesnt interesting at all.
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I quite like this fanfic. Very good yes yes. Need exp. 1501500510150015050105050410213021u1820412083021941209210e9021e9201491209e0129e0219e210e9210e92e12
Right now im eagerly awaiting the release of chapter 119 and am thoroughly enjoying the story. It is honestly one of the better fanfics on the site. I also fully support the non harem rout the author took and i believe it helps the cohesion of the world and story. The whole multiverse travel is easy to understand aswell and that is wonderful because in a few of the other peices from other authors I've read ot was quite complicated and hard to follow in my opinion. Overall a thoughtfully enjoyable read that honestly deserves more recognition than it has currently
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Все было прекрасно но зачем добавлять другие аниме и все портить просто дерьмо 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
Ceritanya atau alurnya itu banyak lucunya, seru, skip-nya juga banyak, pas baca review kaget sih ternyata ada bagian yang author hapus terkait bagaimana si erza itu confessed ke Adrian dan bagaimana cerita kok si Erza bisa suka sm Adrian, banyak orang gk suka bagian rewrite ini Krn bagian Erza itu dihapus, tapi gw sendiri b aja, Krn emng maunya kan solo bukan Harem wkwkwkw, tapi overall bisalah diatas 4 bintang nya 🙏🙏 👏👏 for the author
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Just a child novel.. ... Dont know why the rating and review is so high..... Why Just not make MC over powered....... And MC attitude and character is naive and like a kid......
I personally really liked the story, not every story needs to be a harem and it was nice to read a story about the wholesome love of the two lovers
Awesome story. Would have loved to have a specific closing end, but I'll take what is given. Actually finishing this and not making it a half baked harem fanfic is a great accomplishment.
.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ''.'..'..'.'..'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'...'..'....'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'..'.'.'.
Reveal Spoiler Initially thought of giving 1 rating but the way the author dropped this novel by shifting all ghe blane towards webnovel, I've got only one thing to say, I am impressed by the way you dropped you fanfic
Full of plot holes, unbalanced power set. poor story development.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
j ai adore l histoire c est une de mes light novel préférer j attend la suite avec impatience j espère qu il va voyager dans d autre monde et devenir encore plus fort tous en entraînant son enfant veuiller continuer l histoir svp
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Wish it would continue but rip author!!!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
This story is tough to read even if I turn my brain off. The story reminds me of a kindergartner trying to write their first story. Little to no dialogue punctuation. There's not even much content, it's mostly just time skips, the lack of punctuation kills any ability to properly read the story. Use your time to read something else, this is just terrifying to try to read.
Fantastic novel. Mc is slightly broken. Romance is AMAZING with no harem. Can feel the love. Shame it was stopped 10 months ago. But honestly it's not too bad, can see where the relationship is headed and with how op the mc is theres no worry about the canon fights. Worth a read
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Don’t get me wrong this is a good novel or I should say it could have been a good novel. But it looks like author is a rookie who hasn’t done much research in story he is about to write. And most importantly the power scale is all over the place . Ophis from dxd who is one of the strongest beings is shown weaker than one of fighters in magi. And most annoying is the way he choose his peerage . Instead of going for harem he is choosing old man like dumbuldo for his peerage. I mean seriously author. If you want to blame anybody for lack of ratings blame yourself for doing this kind of stupid things
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More chapters More chaptersMore cMore chapters More chaptersMore chaptersMore chaptershaptesMore chapte sMore chapters More chaptersMore chaptersMore chapters More chapters More chaptersMore chaptersMore chapters More chapters More chaptersMore chaptersMore chapters More chapters More chaptersMore chaptersMore chapters
Update more bro .. nice story 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
I really dont know when authors start write novels with gift-multiple-abilities-with-transmigration(reincarnation). That is really disgusting plot turn. Dont read it, it doesnt interesting at all.
Reveal Spoiler All of the chapters for me are well written would love to see you write more. All of the chapters for me are well written would love to see you write more.All of the chapters for me are well written would love to see you write more.All of the chapters for me are well written would love to see you write more.All of the chapters for me are well written would love to see you write more.All of the chapters for me are well written would love to see you write more.All of the chapters for me are well written would love to see you write more.All of the chapters for me are well written would love to see you write more.All of the chapters for me are well written would love to see you write more.All of the chapters for me are well written would love to see you write more.All of the chapters for me are well written would love to see you write more.All of the chapters for me are well written would love to see you write more.All of the chapters for me are well written would love to see you write more.All of the chapters for me are well written would love to see you write more.
Reveal Spoiler I quite like this fanfic. Very good yes yes. Need exp. 1501500510150015050105050410213021u1820412083021941209210e9021e9201491209e0129e0219e210e9210e92e12
Right now im eagerly awaiting the release of chapter 119 and am thoroughly enjoying the story. It is honestly one of the better fanfics on the site. I also fully support the non harem rout the author took and i believe it helps the cohesion of the world and story. The whole multiverse travel is easy to understand aswell and that is wonderful because in a few of the other peices from other authors I've read ot was quite complicated and hard to follow in my opinion. Overall a thoughtfully enjoyable read that honestly deserves more recognition than it has currently
i like your fan-fic i hope you will continous. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
It is a v good book wish it wasn’t dropped