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Ok it's my first time writing a synopsis so I'll try my best and NO THIS IS NOT A TRANSLATION:
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Humans become either good or evil through the process of learning. However that rule is not absolute.
There are rare moments of goodwill shown by evil men.
There are bad intentions shown on a whim by a saint.
This contrast is what makes humans into humans.
But ultimately at the beginning of it all, the only truth they know is the existence of truth.
This is the story of a kid born in this world with absolutely nothing to call his own, unable to understand his surroundings and the people around him.
While not so much at the beginning this is ultimately HIS story. During this time he will meet many people and see many things.
He will struggle to undertsand the things happening around him and will most likely not be able to succeed at everything he tries.
His life started changing after meeting a man who is more greedy than anyone else, is more vocious than anyone else, more arrogant than anyone else and the list goes on and on. And well............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ the rest is in the story so maybe you should think about reading it
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Peak fiction, amazing characters, great world building, no ai slop, not a badly translated fic, good plot but it’s kinda slow however cooking takes time. Gilgamesh glazing 100%. All I see is potential!
I ain't going to glaze alot all i could say is these fic is pretty good webnovels is getting boring these days there only a bit of stories that are actually good and these is one of them
Honestly, I'm very much enjoying this story. This isn't a self insert or op harem story. Nah, it' a story with 2 characters a Kid and a Servant and one will try to change the other and maybe he will be changed as well. I can't wait to see where it will go.
A new fate fic that’s actually good and explains stiff for new readers unfamiliar with Fate, and an author that listens and is actively taking suggestions and trying to improve, unlike the hundreds others on this godforsaken site. What more can you want? Read it
Okay I'm 18 chapters in and overall... This Book Is Peak. Writing is so original it feels like the author ain't a fan of Chatgpt. Reading it gives you an experience of reading an original work and not some fan-fiction. After taking my time to see what need to be addressed and what doesn't need to be, so far. Honestly, there's not much really. The first one(which I'm not sure really needs to be attended to) is Gil's casual way of speaking. Not that I don't like it but I find it quite funny and off when a king(Gil to be precise) tells me "Yeah, Figures" like my neighbor next door(In chapter 15 when he was talking with our Nameless MC). Which honestly makes me double read my screen In amusement. Although this ain't too rapant as there are times he speaks in his own kingly manner Like when he said in Chapter 8 "We shall acquire a chariot" In normal situation for regular ppl, what they'd say is "Let's go get a vehicle" So overall, it's a minor thing that I trust will naturally balance out. Number 2 is that... Author, pls. At least some hints on an anonymous heroic spirits will do😭. Like when Hektor was fighting False lancer With my vast knowledge in the whole Nasuverse I couldn't even guess his identity. So it's either my memory's starting to lag from lack of FGO content, or you're bringing in a Herioc Spirit we've never seen before(Which I won't lie is very cool, and something I'm exited to see.) Now I'm not going to be that one "redditor" who'll write about 50,000 words of pure nonsense just because he wants to share his "Ideas" This are the only two things I wish to share that I think are major to me. Overall, You lean on the character's behavior is good.(Very Obvious on Hektor that I remember from the Thruf Singularity.) Story pacing is good and realistic, feels like I'm reading an actual fate LN. Some small Typos here and there(Early chaps), not like I care really. Writing Quality overall is commendable and I have no issues with it at all. Although the Major Strength I've seen in the book has to be Story Development. Story development is solid. Initially, I expected it to draw inspiration(copy, if I may) from previous Grail Wars, but I haven't felt any déjà vu or familiarity since, which is quite impressive, Really. Cuzz the idea of actually making a Grail war from scratch yourself is not... Simple. Tl;Dr: It's been Peak Fiction so far and if you're expecting to me to write about it's Update Stability, you won't here Jack from me. Experience it yourself. (Good work Author.)
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its just good,its somehow not a translation,this guy knows how to cook,so read this unless you want the chinese transmigrator with a system to visit you
Its great, gilg as a summon done good is hard enough but this seems to nail it. The mc is… well, honestly he alone would probably become stale fast considering he literally has no personality, but with gilg in the mix, and vonsidering his reaction to the dream cycle, it becomes very interesting. All the side characters seem fleshed out too, and im hyped to see how the story with the whole „a grail war but also not a normal one“ will develop.
This is a pretty good and unique fate fanfic. I would give it 5 stars, but I feel that people (me personally) trust 4 or 3 star reviews more the 5-star ones Writing Quality: truth be told, I am not someone who tries to spot any and all grammar and spelling mistakes but from what I have seen so far there is only a small number of mistakes, which can easily be ignored. plus, it's not written by AI. Updates: The updates have great stability; the author always delivers on time. Story: it's a unique concept and has great execution (something the fanfic side of web novel currently lacks). the only reason I gave it a 4 star is because pacing has been a little slow the past few chapters. Character development and World background is still being revealed at the time of writing this review, so I will try changing the rating in the future once more is revealed.
It was very well written for your first fic. And very refreshing to read something new about the grail war. Most of the fate fics have very similar ones to canon. Honestly, I love the dynamic between mc and his servant. I am a sucker for the father/son type of relationship in fics. Fights are cool too, very nicely written with details, I can imagine myself there witnessing the spectacle. I beg you, please, don't drop this.
Overall 4.6 Not exactly because of a lack of something, but because it's too early to judge. However, the fic proved to be fantastic 4 now so I decided to review it. The mc is bland and while that's usually a weakness, it's the point of the fic. Moreover Gil acts as the important piece keeping us entertained while mc is progressing (barely 11 btw). The side characters are solid with reoccuring people from other Fate Works. I won't comment on which master got which servant as you will have read it, but the picks are all good and interesting. World building is a bit lacking, although we also didn't get to the point where it's needed. Clear descriptions of scenery or reactions are stale or nonexistent. You can take it as a bad sign, but it kinda reads like a VN? It makes it funny even without the background telling us where we actually are at the moment. Great story, I hope the author continues it or else I will ring his doorbell (or get inside his house if he doesn't have one). Jackson out.
It is a fire book! decently length of chaos and good story telling and having an original plot, shit's peak on god, read it as if you would the bible for it is a religious text! *Alright ... I've done what you've asked for, mêle.... now can you p-please let my family go?... what? but we had a deal! you promised!!! no...NO....NOOOO—!*
As someone who beta-read this, I can only say one thing. ABSOLUTE PEAK. ACTUAL PEAK. Even though my beta-reading work was dubious at best. Now details, Writing Quality; There's little to no mistakes whatsoever in the writing itself, actually it even resembles the source material in the way it's written, as in, the type of writing Fate LNs tend to have. There's a select few grammar errors that rarely ever occur but the guy's quick to fix them so no wrries on that end either. The scenes are well-crafted, and the writing is engaging, I usually read stuff with 20 breaks or some in between but with this, even that didn't happen. Update Stability; Can't say anything about this for now, but the chapters written to date have a decent consistency to them. It's not daily, like the usual webnovel stuff, but at this level of quality, you really can't be asking for that. Story Development; This is the strongest point of this work. The plot is a wholly original Grail War set some time after the actual one and BY GOD it feels like it's an actual addition to the Fate series instead of a fanfiction. We have some new additions, a lot of familiar faces. He's literally writing a new grail war folks, I don't know what else you need to hear for development. Every single character so far adds something, instead of just being flair. Character Design; The characters from the originals have portrayed completely faithfully, and the few new additions are extremely exciting to follow. Even the MC's dynamic with his servant is endearing in a way, makes you smile like an idiot at times. The other Masters also mesh REALLY well with their servants, which holds true to the compatibility factor many fics choose to conveniently ignore. It's really amusing to read their interactions with one another. World Background; Fate is honestly troublesome when it comes to this particular bit, but the author and I share a singular braincell and he's done deep lore dives into the OG materials instead of just wiki-surfing and acting like a know-all... unlike a certain someone. No issues on this end yeah. Tldr; it's actual peak. Anyone who thinks otherwise will have beef with me and it will be ON SIGHT. I honestly wish I could consistently write this well.