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two chapters ain't enough but it ain't boring. your grammar ain't also bad, so you're story is readable and not painful to read. keep it up, good luck!
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You can definitely do better but i like the story already A reader is able to imagine each scene as well as follow through the story. Keep it up
two chapters ain't enough but it ain't boring. your grammar ain't also bad, so you're story is readable and not painful to read. keep it up, good luck!
Shameless Advertisement by Author here, I will try my best to make this book liked by all and incorporate all that I have learned over the years while reading web novels.
You can definitely do better but i like the story already A reader is able to imagine each scene as well as follow through the story. Keep it up