Well you should add more chapters it seems interesting but wierd starting. Get better grammar and phrases. I like how this protagonist is learning about his past but you could of explained it better and also talk about the kids real parents more.
Well you should add more chapters it seems interesting but wierd starting. Get better grammar and phrases. I like how this protagonist is learning about his past but you could of explained it better and also talk about the kids real parents more.
Well you should add more chapters it seems interesting but wierd starting. Get better grammar and phrases. I like how this protagonist is learning about his past but you could of explained it better and also talk about the kids real parents more.