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Write a reviewGood work author ππ Really intriguing beginning and excited to know about the mystery behind her dreams π§That was an awesome start to the story β€οΈ Writing is also good. But I think there is an unconscious switch between the past and present tense in the narrative. If it gets consistent in tense then it's all good and perfect! ππ₯π€ Love the story author! Waiting for more updates π Keep it up and good luck. π₯°
Good work author ππ Really intriguing beginning and excited to know about the mystery behind her dreams π§That was an awesome start to the story β€οΈ Writing is also good. But I think there is an unconscious switch between the past and present tense in the narrative. If it gets consistent in tense then it's all good and perfect! ππ₯π€ Love the story author! Waiting for more updates π Keep it up and good luck. π₯°