Genshin Impact: Detective System

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Alibi_Lullaby

The world details are flushed out and the characters actually have a depths and not just a cardboard cutout. plus the Grammar is good so I can't wait for more chapters. aside from those basic things the premise of the story seems interesting and I can't wait to see how it progresses

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RikuKage

overall, I really like the story. However, you're making Fortaine look like a joke. Trust me, I get it. I'm honestly looking forward to more of your story. Especially want to see more of Furina

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Thir

It's a very good detective history, if you like them then this may be of your liking.

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gg_wp_1330

The best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!don't give up the story

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Doragon_Kraken

The writting is good ,i Can see myself Reading this for a long Time should the update be regular.....keep it UP....this is Good.

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Jovanni_Gonzalez

This story was certainly a surprise for me since I had a hard time looking for good Genshin Impact fics. What I have read so far has been a phenomenal story and I just love the concept of all the detective stuff. Not sure how to feel about the system Xander has along with the symbiote since those can be hit or miss depending how outlandish it could get like making your protagonist overpowered all of a sudden but that’s just my personal opinion. For a first case it was quite good. A great way to start off your story and I am excited to see what you got planned next. I hope that Xander doesn’t just stay in Fontaine because I would love to see him become a world famous detective if possible. As for your next chapter update I’ll leave you with this.

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True_Vanity

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uno_31

Muy bien inicio, con personaje bien trabajados que se nota que son parte del mundo de genshin, el personaje principal no es molesto ni es un garristu Aunque no esplican que tanto sabe del mundo o si sabe

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Unfortunate_Ending

give me more!...….........................

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Internal_Pyro

Honestly one of the best things I've read in general

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I_LIKE_SWORDS

Is this inspired by a certain fanfic? nonetheless this is good.

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Not_ayin

I like the story so far.. especially the MC's personality since to me he sounds like a chill dude, You're pacing is good to me since I understood all that happened, but one thing I suggest is to put the meaning of French words that are relevant to the plot in the bottom since most of us are too lazy to google it up, characters are also fleshed out and aren't just made in China copy paste cut out personalities. you're grammar is also good even though you said it's your third language. I also noticed that the fanfic has a romance tag, I recommend going monogamy and having just a single partner since harems aren't usually all that romantic. I also suggest Furina as a love interests, I would like to see more fanfics with her as one. overall I like it and give it a 5 star, please don't drop. [img=More pls]

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VEYN

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Lifah_12

I love this novel, even though there were only a mere 5 chapters, to begin with. It seems that the author wrote thoroughly on the plot, especially the grammar.

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Cold_Wave

this is one of the best genshin story i have read

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DaoistrtvHhk

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Dick_Wizard

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The_DanQ_Way

I'm immensely enjoying this story. I love the mystery feel to it. It sounds weird, but it kind of gives me vague feelings of Ace Attorney, Professor Layton, and Danganronpa. Literal detective vibes. Keep it up! I'm eagerly waiting in anticipation for more parts!

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ArdaPendragon

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