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I actually quite like this. It's a cool idea for Gilga to be put into the anime. The harem is looking nice. Overall a satisfying novel. Wish they didn't stop writing it.
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Dude, what the ****! You sick or something? Come on. You wanted to male a dark fanfiction but you ended up with an edgy one. A tip : it would have been effective if the actual Main Character of your fanfiction is doing the deed not the slaves. You didn't do this makes him an actual pussy. I'm disappointed you even dared to make his face look like Gilgamesh. This is a disgrace.
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hello author, I can't give your novel full star because first, you don't update the new chapter. second why why why why why why why. third why why why why why why why. fourth why why why why why why. firth why you don't release a new chapter. sixth you busy or don't have an idea to continue writing. I hope can read a new chapter.
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I like the story at first but latter in the story, the MC become a bit...... Sometime I have no idea why he did what he did ( send Seryu to attack Sheele and Mine, molest Akame in her little sister form) the story also jump around all over the place sometime and I have to reread the part a few time in order to get it. The Author said that Esdeath won't be in a harem because he doesn't like her personality, I can understand that but somehow Seryu and up in the harem, For me that psycho personality is much worse than Esdeath.
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I actually quite like this. It's a cool idea for Gilga to be put into the anime. The harem is looking nice. Overall a satisfying novel. Wish they didn't stop writing it.
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Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this lovin this
Dude, what the ****! You sick or something? Come on. You wanted to male a dark fanfiction but you ended up with an edgy one. A tip : it would have been effective if the actual Main Character of your fanfiction is doing the deed not the slaves. You didn't do this makes him an actual pussy. I'm disappointed you even dared to make his face look like Gilgamesh. This is a disgrace.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Reveal Spoiler REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE3EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. Great novel I'm currently waiting for more good job author
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hello author, I can't give your novel full star because first, you don't update the new chapter. second why why why why why why why. third why why why why why why why. fourth why why why why why why. firth why you don't release a new chapter. sixth you busy or don't have an idea to continue writing. I hope can read a new chapter.
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I like the story at first but latter in the story, the MC become a bit...... Sometime I have no idea why he did what he did ( send Seryu to attack Sheele and Mine, molest Akame in her little sister form) the story also jump around all over the place sometime and I have to reread the part a few time in order to get it. The Author said that Esdeath won't be in a harem because he doesn't like her personality, I can understand that but somehow Seryu and up in the harem, For me that psycho personality is much worse than Esdeath.
Reveal Spoiler I was in trench in trench shooting Russians When messenger pigeon give letter Letter say Fuhrer is kil Nein nein nein nein nein nein
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