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Girl Of Cinder

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Author: trinit33

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In a serene village modernized by technology near the ocean, where fishing is the primary occupation, Lucinda, a girl living peacefully with her adopted mother, works at the bakery every day with her best friend, showcasing her talent for baking pastries. One day, a mysterious man with a distinctive scar on his face triggers unsettling memories of a little girl in Lucinda's mind. Soon after, an unexpected accident disrupts the tranquility of her routine.

Fate intervenes as Lucinda crosses paths with someone who holds the key to unraveling the recurring dreams haunting her. Unbeknownst to her and her mother, her case, deemed unsolvable, is reopened by the police department's top officers, who annually tackle cold cases. Lucinda develops a bond with the person in charge of her case, who, having saved her life during an accident, becomes a confidant. Simultaneously, she undergoes therapy and forms a close connection with her therapist, who, despite having a fiancée, falls deeply in love with her.

The narrative takes a dramatic turn when Lucinda, in the midst of hallucinations, nearly drowns, and her therapist, coincidentally present, rescues her. Subsequently, he harbors sinister intentions, plotting to kidnap Lucinda for himself. As events spiral out of control, Lucinda must piece together her fragmented memories, escaping a second kidnapping and confronting an uncertain future.

The story reaches its climax when the police, aided by Lucinda's mother, locate and rescue her, unraveling a major trafficking ring in the process. Lucinda's journey is one of self-discovery, resilience, and the triumph of justice over dark forces.

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    Casson_Westerfield

    this book was much better than I thought it was going to be it usually is not in my wheelhouse of books that I read but I give the author two thumbs up for a good book so far. I have only read a chapters of this book but it is definitely worth the journey keep up all the good work from what author to another.

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    Trinit33

    Hi guys, author here, please comment and like and I'm also open to corrections.

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    Slow_Neptune

    The author of this story seems to have a vivid understanding of the character's emotions. They set up the environments the characters are in which such a great atmosphere. The dialogue throughout this story was mostly good but sometimes the random interjects of Japanese were off-putting.

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    Rainism_11

    Great book you have there. At first, i must admit i thought it wouldn't be thrilling, but man! this book is awesome. More regular updates

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    King_Jojo

    Wow, I am just like wow, I never expected this book to be this awesome, I am left in awe 😲

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    Ash_2045

    A lovely heartwarming novel with a good character description with slight grammatical errors but overall excellent, and the story is slightly fast, but it will only matter a little. I am awaiting further updates.

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    Skye_Lark_

    Well done author!!! This is a wonderful and intriguing masterpiece. Please keep it up💓💓💓 patiently waiting for the next update!!!! 😊😊😊

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    Abel_Black

    Good story. Kinda surprised to see only this much views. The chapters would be be better if expressed more in fewer words. For instance, 700 to 750 words are better. Overall, not bad.

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    Tarataa
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    Hmmm may the author always in good shape so he/she will update more

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    Elementary519

    The title of the book alone is intriguing but as you read the story it's really good work on the author's part. The flashbacks are vivid and the dialogue is natural for the characters who I believe to be Japanese. The internal struggles of each character unfold in a tasteful way showing the author is really good at pacing. Great work, keep it up!

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    ForerunnerOfSky

    So I do quite like this novel, its pretty good in the way it approaches the character and world building. I do like the way the dialogue is approached, its very good. So far the novel feels a bit slow burn from what I read

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    Luminous_Arcadian

    I love the story. It has a great storyline and good character design. It's well-written, and the emotions of the characters are well-expressed. Kudos to the Author!

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    MGBobbyKE

    The flow has me fixed, I can't stop reading this wonderful book.

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    THE_GOAT_HIMSELF

    This book is unexpecting it just keeps getting better and I never see it coming

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    xEvelyn123

    Well done author🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃....... I hope you post more chapters, don't leave me hanging.

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    Daniel_grace

    The book is amazing. I love it so far, starting from the first chapter.

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    OldNispy

    Very good! The flow of writing is very nice, even a bit poetic. The characters are also fleshed out, and there is enough mystery in the plot to look forward to. Again, a very very good read!

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    Perfect_praize

    😱OMG This is a really great book. Good job 👏

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    Lord_sid

    The author's vivid descriptions bring the settings to life, immersing the reader in a rich and atmospheric world. The dialogue is sharp and authentic, revealing insights into the characters' personalities and building tension during crucial moments. Overall it is a captivating and engrossing novel.

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    Momocatt

    Okay, let me start off by saying that I was totally hooked on this story from the first page. It was just the right mix of mystery, and suspense that kept me turning the pages. The characters were really well-developed too, with their own unique personalities and motivations. I found myself really invested in their journey. I can't wait to see what happens next.

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