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Write a reviewNo więc.... Historia naprawde miala na siebe pomysl, jak i dobrze sie ja czytało do czasu kiedy autor se zniknął. Ksiazka ta jest po prostu kolejnym przykladem jak na tej stronie nie szanuje sie czytelników, (pisze to dla ,,doświadczenia'' i brakuje mi do limitu)
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please post an update. It has been 8 months please. Your fans miss your writing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
This is the first cultivation novel i read that is not generic, cliché, and repetitive. I love this novel. Hope the author can continue with it. 
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Good character development but not to the point that it seems forced. Probably not for those that are looking for the clean sweep of everything
Loved the building of the characters and the gains he gets from his travels.The changing of the main characters targets or missions. and the purpose for all his work is his sister, I love it.
I hope all is well, Author Potatoes. I wonder if you are taking a break or have stopped writing this entertaining story? I hope the sister can eventually follow along and be a badass too.
I enjoyed the storyline of the book. Character developed in a way that is enjoyable and yet fitting to the time frame. The author updates regularly when he's not in hiatus. The story keeps the reader at the edge of their seats. Good read, thanks.
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Really love what I’m reading. It has a good plot and character development. Jet is a great addition to van who is a protective brother that cares for his sister. Sadly all I can vote is 5 stars I would vote more if I could.
Reveal SpoilerAuthor is doing a great job, and the book is very worth the read. As long as people continue to give the author the time he/she needs to handle their life, we should be thoroughly impressed with what they write.
I love everything about this book the moment a update comes I jump to read it only thing i dislike is the long breaks of time between updates at time
Story is quite engaging; it feels like going on an adventure with MC as he goes through various trials and comes out stronger each time. A good read overall.
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Amazing book just wish the chapter count exceeded 500. The characters here have rivalry and growing bonds. With the constant reminder of his goal.But not really what's is to be done apron completing said goal.And he should've kept the Golden bear as pet for his sister eventually becoming her guard as well.
Reveal SpoilerLove this novel. It is a great mixture of western world innuendoes and culture combined with eastern world culture and classic wuxia style. Can’t wait for the author to put out more chapters!
Keeping it short. I love the character and the perfect managing of humor and the development of every single character including the mc. And I love fire.
Reveal SpoilerThis is one of my favorite books on webnovel. A western take on wuxia with genuine humor. Note: no harem so far and MC does not feel the need to destroy everyone who looks at him weird.
i like the novel very much except two things 1. writing quality is bad in the middle chapters.And at the latter chapters its so bad you cannot even make sense 2. update unstability: we can understand author have some problems but its worse in this case. OVERALL story is very good i'll givel full star for that just dont rush and improve your writing and make a good schedule for update .. #thank_you
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.................................................................................................................................... ...................it's been a year...... where is the update? ....................................................................................... ..................................................
No więc.... Historia naprawde miala na siebe pomysl, jak i dobrze sie ja czytało do czasu kiedy autor se zniknął. Ksiazka ta jest po prostu kolejnym przykladem jak na tej stronie nie szanuje sie czytelników, (pisze to dla ,,doświadczenia'' i brakuje mi do limitu)
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please post an update. It has been 8 months please. Your fans miss your writing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
This is the first cultivation novel i read that is not generic, cliché, and repetitive. I love this novel. Hope the author can continue with it. 
😠😠😡🤒🤒🤒👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎https://www.tenor.co/bm46R.gif 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
Good character development but not to the point that it seems forced. Probably not for those that are looking for the clean sweep of everything
Loved the building of the characters and the gains he gets from his travels.The changing of the main characters targets or missions. and the purpose for all his work is his sister, I love it.
I hope all is well, Author Potatoes. I wonder if you are taking a break or have stopped writing this entertaining story? I hope the sister can eventually follow along and be a badass too.
I enjoyed the storyline of the book. Character developed in a way that is enjoyable and yet fitting to the time frame. The author updates regularly when he's not in hiatus. The story keeps the reader at the edge of their seats. Good read, thanks.
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Really love what I’m reading. It has a good plot and character development. Jet is a great addition to van who is a protective brother that cares for his sister. Sadly all I can vote is 5 stars I would vote more if I could.
Reveal SpoilerAuthor is doing a great job, and the book is very worth the read. As long as people continue to give the author the time he/she needs to handle their life, we should be thoroughly impressed with what they write.
I love everything about this book the moment a update comes I jump to read it only thing i dislike is the long breaks of time between updates at time
Story is quite engaging; it feels like going on an adventure with MC as he goes through various trials and comes out stronger each time. A good read overall.
.................................................................gerat novel .................................................................gerat novel
Amazing book just wish the chapter count exceeded 500. The characters here have rivalry and growing bonds. With the constant reminder of his goal.But not really what's is to be done apron completing said goal.And he should've kept the Golden bear as pet for his sister eventually becoming her guard as well.
Reveal SpoilerLove this novel. It is a great mixture of western world innuendoes and culture combined with eastern world culture and classic wuxia style. Can’t wait for the author to put out more chapters!
Keeping it short. I love the character and the perfect managing of humor and the development of every single character including the mc. And I love fire.
Reveal SpoilerThis is one of my favorite books on webnovel. A western take on wuxia with genuine humor. Note: no harem so far and MC does not feel the need to destroy everyone who looks at him weird.
i like the novel very much except two things 1. writing quality is bad in the middle chapters.And at the latter chapters its so bad you cannot even make sense 2. update unstability: we can understand author have some problems but its worse in this case. OVERALL story is very good i'll givel full star for that just dont rush and improve your writing and make a good schedule for update .. #thank_you
Looks good 😚🥰😖😚😃😖🤨🤔😙🙄😐😉😐😂😥😶😶☺😖😍😶🤩😖😖😚😗😗😃😐😃😐🤨😁🙄😂😐😊😐☺😶😄😖😶😍😶🤩☹😶☹😶☹😙😙🙄🤔😉☺😖😍😶😗😚🤨😐😁🤨😗😉😋😖😋😍😍😶🤔😚😃😐😂😐😊🤔☺️☺😶🤣😖😊
.................................................................................................................................... ...................it's been a year...... where is the update? ....................................................................................... ..................................................