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I mean, If I must be honest.. A blind person typing on a smartphone can write a better novel than this.. don't waste your time, it's utterly garbage..
wish fulfillment is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo strong
The first thing that should be said is that the grammer is terrible. the first few chapters are basically unreadable although i havent read the later chapters i would assume that it doesnt get much better. As for the plot even for a H story its pretty bad.
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Reveal Spoilerbe warn it is very dark and the author didn't add tags that he/she should have. it has rape and the story will not leave any good feelings reading it.
Reveal SpoilerI can understand the writing of a 2 year old better than I will ever understand the authorβs writing. I cannot comprehend how the grammar got so bad. I would be suprised if the author is using google translate, because google translate seems pretty good after reading this.
Fuck the grammar how the am i supposed to enjoy it whin its taking so hard to understand every sentence?!?! gguuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
This is an H novel, so of course it would have a lowish score. Except I scored it low because it is unreadable. It feels like I am trying to decipher some ancient text. Also the pov's change from first to third and it is hard to tell if they are talking or thinking. If that doesn't bother you then give it a go.
How the prick has this Fanfic so many 4-5 star reviews... I mean it is unreadable the grammar is simply trash not even google translate is as bad as this... I donΒ΄t mind the FF has no " " but I just donΒ΄t understand how some people continue to read this story... Author-sama you definitly need an editor
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I think that these authors create bots and classify their books, it is not possible for this to be good, the words are out of order, horrible grammar, simply unreadable, how to classify what you cannot read.
I don't see why others like this. maybe if I get to later chapters I may like it but the grammar is a huge obstacle. it's almost like reading another language
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Saya hanya biaa mengatakannya hebat. Begitu bagus untuk Hnya sampai2 saya .... Tidak apa-apa jika tulisan berantakan,tapi kau tahu.Jalan cerita masih mudah di pahami dan bagus. Tolong tetap update
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Need to up writing quality alot ... other then that i am fine welp ... thats the only thing bothering me honestly ..........................
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this purely a H novel with little to no story so if your into go ahead and their is rape in it so if you are offended don't read this and the girls are sluts so go ahead and enjoy
Good story, it has a lot of future for tasty, just please do not speed up the echos too much and everything will be fine It is easy to read and the protagonist is easy to understand 10/10[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
hmm..... so far so good , so i like the develop Chara and story, keep it up my dude.
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I mean, If I must be honest.. A blind person typing on a smartphone can write a better novel than this.. don't waste your time, it's utterly garbage..
wish fulfillment is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo strong
The first thing that should be said is that the grammer is terrible. the first few chapters are basically unreadable although i havent read the later chapters i would assume that it doesnt get much better. As for the plot even for a H story its pretty bad.
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Reveal Spoilerbe warn it is very dark and the author didn't add tags that he/she should have. it has rape and the story will not leave any good feelings reading it.
Reveal SpoilerI can understand the writing of a 2 year old better than I will ever understand the authorβs writing. I cannot comprehend how the grammar got so bad. I would be suprised if the author is using google translate, because google translate seems pretty good after reading this.
Fuck the grammar how the am i supposed to enjoy it whin its taking so hard to understand every sentence?!?! gguuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
This is an H novel, so of course it would have a lowish score. Except I scored it low because it is unreadable. It feels like I am trying to decipher some ancient text. Also the pov's change from first to third and it is hard to tell if they are talking or thinking. If that doesn't bother you then give it a go.
How the prick has this Fanfic so many 4-5 star reviews... I mean it is unreadable the grammar is simply trash not even google translate is as bad as this... I donΒ΄t mind the FF has no " " but I just donΒ΄t understand how some people continue to read this story... Author-sama you definitly need an editor
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think that these authors create bots and classify their books, it is not possible for this to be good, the words are out of order, horrible grammar, simply unreadable, how to classify what you cannot read.
I don't see why others like this. maybe if I get to later chapters I may like it but the grammar is a huge obstacle. it's almost like reading another language
πΈπ²ππ¦π’πππ¦π¦π¦ππ²πΈπ’πππ¦π¦π³πππ¬π¦π³π΄π·π΅π±πΎπ²πΏππππβοΈππ₯ππππππππππ₯π π₯₯π₯πππππ₯π₯π½πΆπ₯π°π₯ππ₯¦π₯¬ππ₯π₯π₯¨π₯―
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Saya hanya biaa mengatakannya hebat. Begitu bagus untuk Hnya sampai2 saya .... Tidak apa-apa jika tulisan berantakan,tapi kau tahu.Jalan cerita masih mudah di pahami dan bagus. Tolong tetap update
Morw more more more moreMorw more more more moreMorw more more more moreMorw more more more moreMorw more more more moreMorw more more more more
Need to up writing quality alot ... other then that i am fine welp ... thats the only thing bothering me honestly ..........................
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this purely a H novel with little to no story so if your into go ahead and their is rape in it so if you are offended don't read this and the girls are sluts so go ahead and enjoy
Good story, it has a lot of future for tasty, just please do not speed up the echos too much and everything will be fine It is easy to read and the protagonist is easy to understand 10/10[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
hmm..... so far so good , so i like the develop Chara and story, keep it up my dude.
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