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Bastante genial y original el fanfic de HP con un buen desarrollo del mundo y de los personajes, muy recomendada 👌🏻
Отличное произведение, все отлично, как и юмор так и отсутствие ещё 20 глав описывающих его секс, отдельная благодарность автору за то что в романе нету этой фигни, хотя это гарем.
Entretenido y fácil de leer................................................ Una oportunidad se merece............................................................................... ....................
too good to be trueI mean the author-sama just created I believe the most complete marvel story
Love the story, definitely 1 of my top 100 favorites. A must read for anyone who enjoys Harry Potter crossovers! Not really more to say, but the title does make a big spoiler!
The story is far exceeded by its other story that's for sure. The harem is as always useless and what mitigated it is that it's not super present. Frankly it seems that only Wanda has a development with him that is worth reading, I skipped a few chapters, especially where the harem is present. The arc on Xandar is great, his presence is really perfect. I like his involvement with the Shield even if I find it stupid that he doesn't get paid for it. Thanks to the author
Didn't think I'd find this here... I read this at FFN, and it's an incredible read. I recommend it to all..🙂🙂🙂👍👍
Una historia muy divertida, aunque el hecho de que el MC fuera Harry Potter dejo de tener importancia muy rapido. En general, me gusto mucho la construccion del mundo que hizo y las mujeres con las que se junto, aunque lo de MJ fue un poco metido con pinzas. En resumen, muy entretenido.
All in all, I loved this work. While not one of the Most greatest works I have read it was more than fun and quite entertaining. Of course, it might not come to everyone's tastes, but imho it's perfectly balanced system-yet-reality with good enough story, world and it's development, characters and plot. Unfortunately, all good things shall eventually come to an end, and so does this story. Ending, while a little abrupt, was also alright and funnily enough the story actually feels like it's finishes and epilogue didn't feel forced. It's also nice to have more or less open ending. By the way, Star wars crossover arc was the most Hilary out and I loved it. But no spoilers shall be made so there Is that. ;P
This story is addicting. To me, there have never been a gamer story better than this one. The story is light and well made and I didn't want it to end but alas everything must come to an end. Thanks for the story Author. it have been a great journey reading the book from start to end. Enjoyed it.
Great novel though I do think it somewhat goes downhill in the middle of the "New York" volume. I completely understand it since it's mainly filler until the MCU timeline officially starts but I still liked them nonetheless. I'mma be honest though, I majorly skimmed the last 20 chapters. The chapters are really long(not that that's a complaint) and since most of the last 20 chapters is Filler, I just wanted to get through with it before moving on. There's only 2 things I wish was done better. I wished the last two Harem members had more of a connection to the MC (or really any of the harem members in the "New York" volume and beyond. After they all moved in together, the romance part drastically went downhill in quality imo). I also really wished the MC interacted with Dr. Strange more. I get it, he doesn't show up until the last 3 chapters but I was kind of hyped at the thought that Harry would somewhat Mentor Strange after The Ancient One died but we never get to see that. Overall, still really good.
I hid from the world and this was the last book before I choose not too. Thank you! You included everything! Love your work, hope all is well! Satisfying/Satisfactory/O-SI/🙇♂️
um dos melhores crossovers que ja li(brazilian portuguese) ...........................................................................................
The best fanfiction i have seen on this platform, even if it wasnt updated often. If you want to read a long and good Harry potter crossover you should read it.
It was a very good read. Thank you author.....................................................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
excellent story, too good and investing. I recommend it 10 out of 10... now author a question, do you plan to continue the story, or have you already abandoned it?
Most excellent story 🌟 Please come back and write more. I have been waiting for the next chapter for so long. Please don't drop.
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Looks great so far, the updates were slower around once a month. I love how the author stitched different Marvel stories w/o removing Fox & Sony and Marvel Comics reference entirely. Although the consecutive filler chapters are annoying specially the lack of continuinity and the super slow release speed.
i dont man, the idea was good, First few chapter were good, the whole harry potter arc was rushed with little development in his relationship with others. second arc was boring, keep hiding powers for three arcs hence I got bored...comedy aspect us good, if you have nothing to read then go ahead but you will probably get frustrated by the third arc and then drop this.
122/122 ch Excellent Story. The attention to detail is great. The jokes were hilarious and what is the most important - I had a lot of fun reading this. :D
Eu tinha ate tirado da biblioteca, pensei que tinham abandonado, ai da bem que voltou ^^, eu li ate o cap 50 na epoca e era muito bom, depois a atualização caiu pensei que foi abandonado, mas ate onde li e muito interessante.
An incredibly good fic. The MC is a very well rounded character and it always brightens my day seeing that this has a new chapter.
A very cleaver twist on a lot of narrative’s originating with Harry Potter that I have been binge reading the past week and a half, it’s also the only FanFic I’ve read that uses Jackie Chan’s Adventure’s.
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yo, I've been reading this for a while and from most of the novels I've read, this is one of the best ones around. I just hope that you are not dropping this or if you are to at least give a heads up. Hope everything good with you 🙏
Written at chapter 115. This story is pretty good, a good mix of marvel and harry potter. A bit on the crack side but still good. The story definitely starts to drop in quality in latter chapters and this is mainly due to adding the onmiverse to early in my opinion. The author should fix a few major problems which are. 1. jumping from one thing to other (I.e going from the wizarding world to study as a sorcerer.) 2. not showing harry very working on anything but just showing new tools and weapons. 3. not making it fairly clear if a character is dead or not. 4. not really showing harry interacting with other characters.
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Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters
Bastante genial y original el fanfic de HP con un buen desarrollo del mundo y de los personajes, muy recomendada 👌🏻
Отличное произведение, все отлично, как и юмор так и отсутствие ещё 20 глав описывающих его секс, отдельная благодарность автору за то что в романе нету этой фигни, хотя это гарем.
Entretenido y fácil de leer................................................ Una oportunidad se merece............................................................................... ....................
too good to be trueI mean the author-sama just created I believe the most complete marvel story
Love the story, definitely 1 of my top 100 favorites. A must read for anyone who enjoys Harry Potter crossovers! Not really more to say, but the title does make a big spoiler!
The story is far exceeded by its other story that's for sure. The harem is as always useless and what mitigated it is that it's not super present. Frankly it seems that only Wanda has a development with him that is worth reading, I skipped a few chapters, especially where the harem is present. The arc on Xandar is great, his presence is really perfect. I like his involvement with the Shield even if I find it stupid that he doesn't get paid for it. Thanks to the author
Didn't think I'd find this here... I read this at FFN, and it's an incredible read. I recommend it to all..🙂🙂🙂👍👍
Una historia muy divertida, aunque el hecho de que el MC fuera Harry Potter dejo de tener importancia muy rapido. En general, me gusto mucho la construccion del mundo que hizo y las mujeres con las que se junto, aunque lo de MJ fue un poco metido con pinzas. En resumen, muy entretenido.
All in all, I loved this work. While not one of the Most greatest works I have read it was more than fun and quite entertaining. Of course, it might not come to everyone's tastes, but imho it's perfectly balanced system-yet-reality with good enough story, world and it's development, characters and plot. Unfortunately, all good things shall eventually come to an end, and so does this story. Ending, while a little abrupt, was also alright and funnily enough the story actually feels like it's finishes and epilogue didn't feel forced. It's also nice to have more or less open ending. By the way, Star wars crossover arc was the most Hilary out and I loved it. But no spoilers shall be made so there Is that. ;P
This story is addicting. To me, there have never been a gamer story better than this one. The story is light and well made and I didn't want it to end but alas everything must come to an end. Thanks for the story Author. it have been a great journey reading the book from start to end. Enjoyed it.
Great novel though I do think it somewhat goes downhill in the middle of the "New York" volume. I completely understand it since it's mainly filler until the MCU timeline officially starts but I still liked them nonetheless. I'mma be honest though, I majorly skimmed the last 20 chapters. The chapters are really long(not that that's a complaint) and since most of the last 20 chapters is Filler, I just wanted to get through with it before moving on. There's only 2 things I wish was done better. I wished the last two Harem members had more of a connection to the MC (or really any of the harem members in the "New York" volume and beyond. After they all moved in together, the romance part drastically went downhill in quality imo). I also really wished the MC interacted with Dr. Strange more. I get it, he doesn't show up until the last 3 chapters but I was kind of hyped at the thought that Harry would somewhat Mentor Strange after The Ancient One died but we never get to see that. Overall, still really good.
I hid from the world and this was the last book before I choose not too. Thank you! You included everything! Love your work, hope all is well! Satisfying/Satisfactory/O-SI/🙇♂️
um dos melhores crossovers que ja li(brazilian portuguese) ...........................................................................................
The best fanfiction i have seen on this platform, even if it wasnt updated often. If you want to read a long and good Harry potter crossover you should read it.
It was a very good read. Thank you author.....................................................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
excellent story, too good and investing. I recommend it 10 out of 10... now author a question, do you plan to continue the story, or have you already abandoned it?
Most excellent story 🌟 Please come back and write more. I have been waiting for the next chapter for so long. Please don't drop.
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Looks great so far, the updates were slower around once a month. I love how the author stitched different Marvel stories w/o removing Fox & Sony and Marvel Comics reference entirely. Although the consecutive filler chapters are annoying specially the lack of continuinity and the super slow release speed.
i dont man, the idea was good, First few chapter were good, the whole harry potter arc was rushed with little development in his relationship with others. second arc was boring, keep hiding powers for three arcs hence I got bored...comedy aspect us good, if you have nothing to read then go ahead but you will probably get frustrated by the third arc and then drop this.
122/122 ch Excellent Story. The attention to detail is great. The jokes were hilarious and what is the most important - I had a lot of fun reading this. :D
Eu tinha ate tirado da biblioteca, pensei que tinham abandonado, ai da bem que voltou ^^, eu li ate o cap 50 na epoca e era muito bom, depois a atualização caiu pensei que foi abandonado, mas ate onde li e muito interessante.
An incredibly good fic. The MC is a very well rounded character and it always brightens my day seeing that this has a new chapter.
A very cleaver twist on a lot of narrative’s originating with Harry Potter that I have been binge reading the past week and a half, it’s also the only FanFic I’ve read that uses Jackie Chan’s Adventure’s.
Reveal Spoiler yo, I've been reading this for a while and from most of the novels I've read, this is one of the best ones around. I just hope that you are not dropping this or if you are to at least give a heads up. Hope everything good with you 🙏
Written at chapter 115. This story is pretty good, a good mix of marvel and harry potter. A bit on the crack side but still good. The story definitely starts to drop in quality in latter chapters and this is mainly due to adding the onmiverse to early in my opinion. The author should fix a few major problems which are. 1. jumping from one thing to other (I.e going from the wizarding world to study as a sorcerer.) 2. not showing harry very working on anything but just showing new tools and weapons. 3. not making it fairly clear if a character is dead or not. 4. not really showing harry interacting with other characters.
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Simply marvelous, props to you! Hope to see more of your work.