/ Fantasy / Hidden Boss: The Author Become Mob
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What do you want to do If you really reincarnated in your own novel?
Become a Hero? A villian? A Side Character?
Let's accompany Kenn to his Adventure as a New persona in his Novel.. Let's watch him if he becomes a hero or a villain..
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Write a reviewIt's enjoyable, professor stories are always fun. Some things i believe aren't needed happen, with MC getting a few too many cheats, but hey, he's the author, so it wouldn't make sense if he didn't. Hopefully the writing quality improves with time.
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Hello author, I can see clearly see that you struggle with grammar and conveying character interactions. I would highly recommend to use grammarly for grammar and reading some well written books to get the gist on how to write character conversations. As for the story development, don't rush it! The mc adapted way to quick which made it really confusing/unrealistic. I hope you don't give up and seek to improve your writing!