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The writing style is quite good, other factors would be considered decent- at least in my opinion anyways. Can't really create a good review when it's only been three chapters. I suggest putting a bisexual protagonist in the tag though.
it looks good so far the mc is learns fast Type your review here. Please write your review as detailed as you can. Your reviews would be very important to the story (at least 140 characters).
I really liked how detailed and interesting this was, and I really don't know how to tell or write what i liked about it, But I hope you keep writing.
My Guilty Pleasure I just hope for more stable updates aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Reveal Spoiler another Guilty Pleasure very nice! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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It's only the third chapter so not much I can say but alright so far seems the system has a vested interest in making him now her a sex slave so with more chapters we Will find out why
Its good but were is the next chapter ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The writing style is quite good, other factors would be considered decent- at least in my opinion anyways. Can't really create a good review when it's only been three chapters. I suggest putting a bisexual protagonist in the tag though.
it looks good so far the mc is learns fast Type your review here. Please write your review as detailed as you can. Your reviews would be very important to the story (at least 140 characters).
I really liked how detailed and interesting this was, and I really don't know how to tell or write what i liked about it, But I hope you keep writing.
My Guilty Pleasure I just hope for more stable updates aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Reveal Spoiler another Guilty Pleasure very nice! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Reveal Spoiler It's only the third chapter so not much I can say but alright so far seems the system has a vested interest in making him now her a sex slave so with more chapters we Will find out why
Its good but were is the next chapter ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................