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How to become an villainess(DROPPED)
Author: Evil_Seeker
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Earth’s most dangerous female agent and also a medical expert had been reincarnated into a cultivation world!!
She died in a missile blast
How she reincarnted?because of the Object
but when opening her eyes she heard a sound in her head i.e the system
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Contains sexual content.
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Hi guys,this is the first time i am writing a novel and english is my second language ,so there will be grammer mistakes hope you guys don’t mind.
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This novel have a good idea, but the execution is... regular. Firstly the writing is fast, TOO FAST, the actions doesn't be explained, and there are a totally fault of descriptions and some details. The characters' actions are sooo cliches; the guard, the apothecary, the merchant, etc. The MC is inexplicable too. She isn't thinking about her situation, things like "WTF IS THIS SYSTEM" or "WHY IS VILLAINESS SYSTEM", she accept all so fast and doesn't have any thinking about almost nothing, for example her own world. You should make a space to explain his character, because right now I don't have nothing. Other thing about the world...Where is this novel? In a first look is in a typical cultive world, but how in the name of budda the MC knows about medicine?. I mean I was thinking that she was in the same world but the lack of technology contract my theory, and his body is a maid's body, so she shouldn't have those knowledge. There are other things but, I don't want to write more about errors.