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really enjoying this story can't wait to read more or a following book please keep up the great work and don't let the you know what's gets you down please stay safe and healthy during this time of crisis and don't underestimate if it's over a not sincerely BriarRose.
kinda wondering why it marked as being completed on here when it's actually not.🤔🤔 There's so much more on scribble hub and on your Patreon.
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Really liked this novel not that bad. my first review. jsussjejdjejejdjdjudueeuueuerururuurrurjrjrjrjrjrjrjrjhahaususjskjssjsjsjshshhwwJ.
its great as hell i just want to know if the author will keep on writing or not theres been barely any updates for LOOONG time and im just found this so im just wondering if i should expect more or not
I've been reading this since it's very first release on scr*bblehub! It's been a year since I first read this novel and I liked it very much that I always wait for it's updates.. Good Job Author! :D
the writting style is really good 😀 and i like that. but i'm confused about the mc s/he is kimd of am i or am i not, i also didn't read that he had that kind of thoughts befor what is really annoying and confusing. why is there nothing like "mc starts to like man" in the description.
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Wow, it was amazing, i don’t usully write a revew nor am i good at doing it, but I just had to put my support at least this way. Thank you so much for this story serously. For me it was so good that I can’t seems to put it into word. I loved the principal caracter evolution, the love evolution with Mio even tought their sucub ( that was mind blowing ❤️), hehe I love the gender bender, I loved how her sex interaction were brought to the story... I could go on forever. I red until the real last chapter wich was post and I DO understand why you had to stop like that, but honestly i cried since i was getting myself ready for a good ending but ended this way. That is just how much I liked that story. If Somehow you can continu the story one day it might be one of my happiest day haha. Well I hope you will have succes for the rest as it was the first story i red from you I look foraward the the others. Ounce agaIn THANK YOU SO MUCH for this story and I shall always remember Saeko ( I hope I write it right 😣) and Mio and their adventure in my heart. Good luck to you for the futur as i shall stick around to see it myself trought you’r story😁 I can already 🤤 from it.
This was a great smut with a fun complete story to boot! I truly wish the writer had gotten permission from the original IP creator to continue.
It was amazing. Masterfully crafted to blend the story and the smut together. The pacing was well done as well and nothing felt over the top or excessive. I would like to be able to write my story on this level... But I still have a ways to go.
I'm only just starting and I can say this is better than many others, why? Simply because it's not all ***. There seems to be some amount of plot and character development
A wonderful Novel no matter what other people say or said. I just wish that there was more. Especially since it would definitely make me read it all over again.
The main character can be annoying at times but if you like the first 6/7 chapters then it's definitely worth continuing as it will only get better.
This book is absolutely amazing. The storyline is very captivating and i can get enough of it. My only request though would be that maybe you could add more chapters a week cause I'm stuck reading this over and over waiting for more chapters and its eating away at my sanity. Hope you can begin updating the book more often[img=update][img=recommend]
The book was addictive could not put down characters the plot even the etchy parts fit seamlessly I hope the author will do a sequel for this
This book overall is nice, no matter what it is gender bender usually have such a similar setting that you can’t find one like this. In general it would be nice if more gender bender were made like this or in general gender benders with succubus in them as the main character. It gives a nice feel to see the main character question what they will do.
Had me at succubus that doesn't handwaved away what a sex demon is. Stayed for the great writing and characters. Now I just want more please.
good story with a stable quality. No jumps or incomprehensible sections. the characters are funny and believable. the story is also good and runs smoothly. Also for people who do not like *** scenes worth considering. I personally can only make a recommendation. ⚠ a little Spoiler ⚠* × * I hope that the relationship with Mio will be expanded properly * × *⚠
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I find this story a great change of pace from the usual gender swap stories I have come across. Furthermore, it has good a plot and story progression. Additionally, it is well written and stable in it's releases, so there's is no too long of a wait between updates. Finally, to those who love the genre and related themes of the story I highly recommend giving this story a read.
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I don't really think this is a spoiler but overall this is great I really hope you never drop this story. And I was wondering maybe Sayo could start to tangle with more girls?
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Came here for the silly premise. I like those. But a got a pleasant surprise. The writing is a little rough around the edges but over all it doesn't detract from the story as a whole.
i think a cool and interesting story is developing very well and it’s amazing how mc is changing it’s getting very interesting without waiting for more chapters i hope it never ends
I think it's good so far but I like books like this it has a good pace and the mc is getting twisted around in both good and bad ways but ...no spoilers here just read and find out for yourself
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Reveal Spoiler really enjoying this story can't wait to read more or a following book please keep up the great work and don't let the you know what's gets you down please stay safe and healthy during this time of crisis and don't underestimate if it's over a not sincerely BriarRose.
kinda wondering why it marked as being completed on here when it's actually not.🤔🤔 There's so much more on scribble hub and on your Patreon.
Reveal Spoiler Really liked this novel not that bad. my first review. jsussjejdjejejdjdjudueeuueuerururuurrurjrjrjrjrjrjrjrjhahaususjskjssjsjsjshshhwwJ.
its great as hell i just want to know if the author will keep on writing or not theres been barely any updates for LOOONG time and im just found this so im just wondering if i should expect more or not
I've been reading this since it's very first release on scr*bblehub! It's been a year since I first read this novel and I liked it very much that I always wait for it's updates.. Good Job Author! :D
the writting style is really good 😀 and i like that. but i'm confused about the mc s/he is kimd of am i or am i not, i also didn't read that he had that kind of thoughts befor what is really annoying and confusing. why is there nothing like "mc starts to like man" in the description.
Reveal Spoiler Wow, it was amazing, i don’t usully write a revew nor am i good at doing it, but I just had to put my support at least this way. Thank you so much for this story serously. For me it was so good that I can’t seems to put it into word. I loved the principal caracter evolution, the love evolution with Mio even tought their sucub ( that was mind blowing ❤️), hehe I love the gender bender, I loved how her sex interaction were brought to the story... I could go on forever. I red until the real last chapter wich was post and I DO understand why you had to stop like that, but honestly i cried since i was getting myself ready for a good ending but ended this way. That is just how much I liked that story. If Somehow you can continu the story one day it might be one of my happiest day haha. Well I hope you will have succes for the rest as it was the first story i red from you I look foraward the the others. Ounce agaIn THANK YOU SO MUCH for this story and I shall always remember Saeko ( I hope I write it right 😣) and Mio and their adventure in my heart. Good luck to you for the futur as i shall stick around to see it myself trought you’r story😁 I can already 🤤 from it.
This was a great smut with a fun complete story to boot! I truly wish the writer had gotten permission from the original IP creator to continue.
It was amazing. Masterfully crafted to blend the story and the smut together. The pacing was well done as well and nothing felt over the top or excessive. I would like to be able to write my story on this level... But I still have a ways to go.
I'm only just starting and I can say this is better than many others, why? Simply because it's not all ***. There seems to be some amount of plot and character development
A wonderful Novel no matter what other people say or said. I just wish that there was more. Especially since it would definitely make me read it all over again.
The main character can be annoying at times but if you like the first 6/7 chapters then it's definitely worth continuing as it will only get better.
This book is absolutely amazing. The storyline is very captivating and i can get enough of it. My only request though would be that maybe you could add more chapters a week cause I'm stuck reading this over and over waiting for more chapters and its eating away at my sanity. Hope you can begin updating the book more often[img=update][img=recommend]
The book was addictive could not put down characters the plot even the etchy parts fit seamlessly I hope the author will do a sequel for this
This book overall is nice, no matter what it is gender bender usually have such a similar setting that you can’t find one like this. In general it would be nice if more gender bender were made like this or in general gender benders with succubus in them as the main character. It gives a nice feel to see the main character question what they will do.
Had me at succubus that doesn't handwaved away what a sex demon is. Stayed for the great writing and characters. Now I just want more please.
good story with a stable quality. No jumps or incomprehensible sections. the characters are funny and believable. the story is also good and runs smoothly. Also for people who do not like *** scenes worth considering. I personally can only make a recommendation. ⚠ a little Spoiler ⚠* × * I hope that the relationship with Mio will be expanded properly * × *⚠
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Reveal Spoiler I find this story a great change of pace from the usual gender swap stories I have come across. Furthermore, it has good a plot and story progression. Additionally, it is well written and stable in it's releases, so there's is no too long of a wait between updates. Finally, to those who love the genre and related themes of the story I highly recommend giving this story a read.
A good novel it has a good story and a stable wreiting quality. -------------------------------------------------#---------------------------------------------------#---------------------------------------------------#---------------------------------------------------#--
I don't really think this is a spoiler but overall this is great I really hope you never drop this story. And I was wondering maybe Sayo could start to tangle with more girls?
Reveal Spoiler Dam that is nice Dam that is nice Dam that is nice Dam that is nice Dam that is nice Dam that is nice Dam that is nice Dam that is nice Dam that is nice 😏👍👍😏👍👍😏👍👍😏👍👍😏👍👍😏👍👍
Came here for the silly premise. I like those. But a got a pleasant surprise. The writing is a little rough around the edges but over all it doesn't detract from the story as a whole.
i think a cool and interesting story is developing very well and it’s amazing how mc is changing it’s getting very interesting without waiting for more chapters i hope it never ends
I think it's good so far but I like books like this it has a good pace and the mc is getting twisted around in both good and bad ways but ...no spoilers here just read and find out for yourself
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