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Write a reviewI like this book I don't know if the translation is good because I myself am zero But I look forward to the chapters what day do you put them?
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Reveal Spoilerjust leaving my review, while I see if any manga yuri came out a new chapter, or any "oneshot", whenever I'm interested in a story, I forget to comment, but if I support with stones, I'll be checking if you update.
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I was looking for stories that interest me, and by chance I found something that is worth "Gold", I say it because there are few who dare to write or draw something related to yuri. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
by chance I found your story, only that while I read, I fell short, it left me wanting more to know what's next ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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solo dire que me gusta a donde va esta historia , y ojala tenga a todas las principales chicas del palacio de la nube congelada , ejjejee. -----------------------------------
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Hello, this is from the author. I will be shameless and post a review of my own work. I know that the book lack a lot of proof reading and editing as I used my phone to write and posted it right after I finished the chapter draft. I apologize for any inconvenience to readers and supporters of my humble, inexperienced storytelling style. I hope some of you stay with me through my journey as I complete this book and I also hope that you all will like my loyal MC and her disciples, their fluffy times and smut moments.
Good but honestly couldn’t keep reading.. it was a random ahh start, mc randomly pops up in the place with the xiao clan, we literally only know her name and where she cultivates, going by the description I thought we would at least get a background on who tf she was but that never happened…it’s like one of the op main characters’ stories but at least they have an actual background…not saying it’s bad just saying starting a story with a grown up mc that have been cultivating for years and known as a pretty powerful fairy isn’t exactly appealing.. started reading because I wanted to see her journey from the beginning but the first chapter she’s all always started it 🤦♂️🤦♂️
Reveal SpoilerI like this book I don't know if the translation is good because I myself am zero But I look forward to the chapters what day do you put them?
more chapters , please ******************************************************************************************************************************************************
More chapters __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Reveal Spoilerjust leaving my review, while I see if any manga yuri came out a new chapter, or any "oneshot", whenever I'm interested in a story, I forget to comment, but if I support with stones, I'll be checking if you update.
more chapters please. 66666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666
I was looking for stories that interest me, and by chance I found something that is worth "Gold", I say it because there are few who dare to write or draw something related to yuri. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
by chance I found your story, only that while I read, I fell short, it left me wanting more to know what's next ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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solo dire que me gusta a donde va esta historia , y ojala tenga a todas las principales chicas del palacio de la nube congelada , ejjejee. -----------------------------------
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more chapters........... -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
more chapters. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Hello, this is from the author. I will be shameless and post a review of my own work. I know that the book lack a lot of proof reading and editing as I used my phone to write and posted it right after I finished the chapter draft. I apologize for any inconvenience to readers and supporters of my humble, inexperienced storytelling style. I hope some of you stay with me through my journey as I complete this book and I also hope that you all will like my loyal MC and her disciples, their fluffy times and smut moments.
Good but honestly couldn’t keep reading.. it was a random ahh start, mc randomly pops up in the place with the xiao clan, we literally only know her name and where she cultivates, going by the description I thought we would at least get a background on who tf she was but that never happened…it’s like one of the op main characters’ stories but at least they have an actual background…not saying it’s bad just saying starting a story with a grown up mc that have been cultivating for years and known as a pretty powerful fairy isn’t exactly appealing.. started reading because I wanted to see her journey from the beginning but the first chapter she’s all always started it 🤦♂️🤦♂️
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