Immortal Sovereign

Hey guys author here and since i am the author, of course i will give my novel a great score. This isn't a spoiler but at the same it is a bit. I will talk about the MC first. I created the MC according to image i like the most. Meaning that mc is smart and wise. He is not a wuss and knows how to keep his emotions in check. I will try my best to make the mc as real as possible and give him emotions. Keeping his emotions in control doesn't mean he doesn't have emotions. I will try my level best to make the world as detailed and immersive as possible. I will not info dump the whole world or cultivation levels at a single instance but slowly reveal it as the story progresses. I find it more fun to read as the world of the novel slowly and gradually unveils infront of you. I am not good with grammar but i will try my level best to write things that the readers could understand easily. Reviews are welcome but please try to be gentle, i am new to this. I am writing this novel as a hobby as well as my first step to become a professional Writer. I feel at peace when i write and most of the time, things come naturally to me and i write it out. I will try my best to release regularly and according to the schedule(which i haven't yet created but i will as soon as possible). I will also start patreon thingy in the near future as i am still dabbling in it and checking how it works and all. I will be greatly thankful if my reader could sacrifice some power stones to keep me motivated. Of course that is if you like my novel and find it interesting to read(which i wish and hope you do). Constructive Criticism is welcomed as i said in Author's Thoughts in the first chapter. I am also open to any new idea that my reader have to improve my writing or story. I am a complete beginner and i wont mind people giving me some suggestions along the way. This review has been long enough and i bet some of you must've skipped to the bottom. Welp i wont waste anymore of your time. Meatbun Out!!