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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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La historia está bien en general, pero le falta más acción con respecto a la intersección de la masmorra con el mundo, por lo cual espero que los próximos capítulos se empice a complementar.
great story the worldand back ground are realy developte maybe a bit too much in de beginning we are filled with info so i'm eagerly waiting for the following story .I love this story it would be great if there were more updates ^^
A very nice, but very hard to not completely screw up twist on the dungeon building genre. In the first 35 chapters(how far I've read so far) the initial buildup of the overall plot hasn't finished yet, however a lot of implied information has been said, that once built upon will either be forced to be very important to the story, or break immersion with flimsy excuses as to why previously said information was incorrect.
It is a good book if you could put a zero it would be on updating stability. i like the ideas maybe have geia be a female. jshjejsjdjdndjjsjs
Reveal Spoiler Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Update??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????,,,*?,,,,?,,,,,,,?????????????????????????,
La historia está bien en general, pero le falta más acción con respecto a la intersección de la masmorra con el mundo, por lo cual espero que los próximos capítulos se empice a complementar.
great story the worldand back ground are realy developte maybe a bit too much in de beginning we are filled with info so i'm eagerly waiting for the following story .I love this story it would be great if there were more updates ^^
A very nice, but very hard to not completely screw up twist on the dungeon building genre. In the first 35 chapters(how far I've read so far) the initial buildup of the overall plot hasn't finished yet, however a lot of implied information has been said, that once built upon will either be forced to be very important to the story, or break immersion with flimsy excuses as to why previously said information was incorrect.
It is a good book if you could put a zero it would be on updating stability. i like the ideas maybe have geia be a female. jshjejsjdjdndjjsjs
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