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To much Useless stuff. No story development . Useless dialogues and fights are just too short. No story development at all. Just booring to read
Very nice should be updated more frequently though But it has a lot of potential ! You should continue to focus on the main history and then explain about the seven deadly sins of this world
Honetly I loved the idea where he got to wish for 4 things, he was thinking smart with his every wish but then, but there's not a real goal, he was given a mission but all he does is make some impossible things for others by himself and that's the majority of the story, he keeps doing random impressive things for no reason and somehow forgets his mission for who knows how many chapters before doing a thing. The story goes nowhere and it's very boring because of that. Writing quality: 3 Stars, there's many grammar mistakes in every chapter, also when you think of escanor you see something powerful but when there is action it's just "He one shot them" and that's all, I'm not joking, everytime there's only 1 to 5 lines of fight(if you can call it that) and that's all until the next chapter, I didn't put 2 stars because I think the author did a great job at writing details Stability of updates: 3 Stars Story Development: 3 Stars, there isn't anything interesting happening in the story, no immersion at all, that's just boring, everytime he just does something to shock others and that's all Character Design: Classic previous life (mc wants to be mangaka but his parents want him to be a doctor, etc...), he goes from 'smart' to show off real fast, he tries to play the role of the classic Escanor but he's just cringy and inconsistent in his thinking (wipes out annoying gangs but when it's females he doesn't do a thing and lets them harrass him) I know escanor is a gentleman in the original story but there it's just ridiculous World Background: 5 Stars, nothing more to say, it's an interesting world here, partially because of author's talent to write many details
My guy are you ganna drop this work too it's been weeks or are you having some problems on your end if you are ganna drop please inform us I've been waiting and dying
Update please I already wait for 13th days. Please give us more chapters UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATEUPDATE
Author when are you going to post more chapters hoping you can release more often i like the story so far or are you gonna drop this novel like you did the last one ? ;/
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If we combine the power of escanor and superman what will happen? Superman absorb sun radiation and escanor absorb too 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🌅🌅🌅🌅🌅🌅🌅🦸🦸🦸🦸🦸🦸🦸🦸🦸
The mc is to soft and he says he is sin of pride but i can't really see where or in which part is he's pride that high in short boring........................................................................... ................
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Slow but good. Some grammar faults here and there but still able to read it. I also want him to fight against a dragon again and defeat him completely next time. The fight between Riss and Aiden isn't over and I'm sure that Aiden will show him true pride next time
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The story so far is good. It's better than the first one and seems more planned and the characters are also good. I like Alex the best cause I'm so much like him.....just lazy. The world is quite good but the author is still making the MC stay in the little kingdom. Make him go to an empire and take on some emperor hahaha
truly a arrogant MC. thinks hes the strongest in the world and acts like it was hard for him to get that strong when in reality he got a few wishes
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Had a ton of potential to be a great novel but there are wayyyu to many holes in the MC... dude wished to get rid of the weakness of his power but somehow he is still weak and there is an arc about trials and those 20chapters the MC is barley even in it or if he is he is just doing nothing exciting... extremely boring that I had to drop
I like your story, the character of the hero also largely corresponds to the original, although not completely. Thanks for the chapter, I look forward to continuing.
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Reveal Spoiler I love this story please don't drop it. Also, I would love to see Aiden in the new "the One" very soon. I love this story please don't drop it. Also, I would love to see Aiden in the new "the One" very soon. I love this story please don't drop it. Also, I would love to see Aiden in the new "the One" very soon.
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I like it and am so far really enjoying it. ................................................................................................................................
It looks very promising. Really like it in the beginning.. Good luck Author-kun !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
If its up to snuff from the original then it going to be a blast. Doing that new lvl of power from now on can't wait to see whats come of it Author! Also MC going to go slow or fast when loves goes around?
If its up to snuff from the original then it going to be a blast. Doing that new lvl of power from now on can't wait to see whats come of it Author! Also MC going to go slow or fast when loves goes around?
Hey Author, is there anyway you can continue this book it's really good and also can I get your iInstagram
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact s9033107ringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
To much Useless stuff. No story development . Useless dialogues and fights are just too short. No story development at all. Just booring to read
Very nice should be updated more frequently though But it has a lot of potential ! You should continue to focus on the main history and then explain about the seven deadly sins of this world
Honetly I loved the idea where he got to wish for 4 things, he was thinking smart with his every wish but then, but there's not a real goal, he was given a mission but all he does is make some impossible things for others by himself and that's the majority of the story, he keeps doing random impressive things for no reason and somehow forgets his mission for who knows how many chapters before doing a thing. The story goes nowhere and it's very boring because of that. Writing quality: 3 Stars, there's many grammar mistakes in every chapter, also when you think of escanor you see something powerful but when there is action it's just "He one shot them" and that's all, I'm not joking, everytime there's only 1 to 5 lines of fight(if you can call it that) and that's all until the next chapter, I didn't put 2 stars because I think the author did a great job at writing details Stability of updates: 3 Stars Story Development: 3 Stars, there isn't anything interesting happening in the story, no immersion at all, that's just boring, everytime he just does something to shock others and that's all Character Design: Classic previous life (mc wants to be mangaka but his parents want him to be a doctor, etc...), he goes from 'smart' to show off real fast, he tries to play the role of the classic Escanor but he's just cringy and inconsistent in his thinking (wipes out annoying gangs but when it's females he doesn't do a thing and lets them harrass him) I know escanor is a gentleman in the original story but there it's just ridiculous World Background: 5 Stars, nothing more to say, it's an interesting world here, partially because of author's talent to write many details
My guy are you ganna drop this work too it's been weeks or are you having some problems on your end if you are ganna drop please inform us I've been waiting and dying
Update please I already wait for 13th days. Please give us more chapters UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATEUPDATE
Author when are you going to post more chapters hoping you can release more often i like the story so far or are you gonna drop this novel like you did the last one ? ;/
Reveal Spoiler If we combine the power of escanor and superman what will happen? Superman absorb sun radiation and escanor absorb too 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🌅🌅🌅🌅🌅🌅🌅🦸🦸🦸🦸🦸🦸🦸🦸🦸
The mc is to soft and he says he is sin of pride but i can't really see where or in which part is he's pride that high in short boring........................................................................... ................
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Slow but good. Some grammar faults here and there but still able to read it. I also want him to fight against a dragon again and defeat him completely next time. The fight between Riss and Aiden isn't over and I'm sure that Aiden will show him true pride next time
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The story so far is good. It's better than the first one and seems more planned and the characters are also good. I like Alex the best cause I'm so much like him.....just lazy. The world is quite good but the author is still making the MC stay in the little kingdom. Make him go to an empire and take on some emperor hahaha
truly a arrogant MC. thinks hes the strongest in the world and acts like it was hard for him to get that strong when in reality he got a few wishes
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Had a ton of potential to be a great novel but there are wayyyu to many holes in the MC... dude wished to get rid of the weakness of his power but somehow he is still weak and there is an arc about trials and those 20chapters the MC is barley even in it or if he is he is just doing nothing exciting... extremely boring that I had to drop
I like your story, the character of the hero also largely corresponds to the original, although not completely. Thanks for the chapter, I look forward to continuing.
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Reveal Spoiler I love this story please don't drop it. Also, I would love to see Aiden in the new "the One" very soon. I love this story please don't drop it. Also, I would love to see Aiden in the new "the One" very soon. I love this story please don't drop it. Also, I would love to see Aiden in the new "the One" very soon.
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I like it and am so far really enjoying it. ................................................................................................................................
It looks very promising. Really like it in the beginning.. Good luck Author-kun !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
If its up to snuff from the original then it going to be a blast. Doing that new lvl of power from now on can't wait to see whats come of it Author! Also MC going to go slow or fast when loves goes around?
If its up to snuff from the original then it going to be a blast. Doing that new lvl of power from now on can't wait to see whats come of it Author! Also MC going to go slow or fast when loves goes around?
Hey Author, is there anyway you can continue this book it's really good and also can I get your iInstagram