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Man, this story is good, ...for people who just love to read a story with a good concept like me but for those of you who are real picky with what they read, until the author spaces out the words into paragraphs and makes them longer this isn't for you. Over all this is a great book I just hope the author doesn't drop this and make it more...readable for others to enjoy. Keep up the good work.
why the **** is his name regret and chapters are to small ................ .m...............n.................mv .................................m.m....... .......d..d.......h.....e..y..x.s .g.f.f.......d.........h.......... .f.g.................w..g..3.y...5.. .........6.d...........................m unusual.............................
Man, this story is good, ...for people who just love to read a story with a good concept like me but for those of you who are real picky with what they read, until the author spaces out the words into paragraphs and makes them longer this isn't for you. Over all this is a great book I just hope the author doesn't drop this and make it more...readable for others to enjoy. Keep up the good work.
why the **** is his name regret and chapters are to small ................ .m...............n.................mv .................................m.m....... .......d..d.......h.....e..y..x.s .g.f.f.......d.........h.......... .f.g.................w..g..3.y...5.. .........6.d...........................m unusual.............................