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One word: Cringe Two Words: Wish fulfillment Three Words: Don't even bother . Worst of the worst of wish fulfillment. Don't get me wrong, I'm not bashing wish fulfillment novels. I do read them as well. This is just a prime example of what NOT to do when writing wish fulfillment novels. Absolutely no basis or reasoning for some events and the author just chalks it up to "as of expected of..." when in fact, it doesn't make any sense. Just focused on making the MC as overpowered as possible without providing any thought on how it led to whatever power up he decides to get. . . . Writing quality gets a 1 for grammar. Stability of Updates is also a 1 considering the last update was 5 years ago as of this writing, Character Design also a 1 due to reasons stated in the main review above, Story Dev is a 3 just for the fact that he gave a heads up that he won't be following canon but still fell short. World Background is a 3 just because it's a fanfiction so the world is pre-made but I don't want to raise the score any further.
i liked the mc and some stuff i dont agree with like tsunade knowing he has instant mastery when all she did was take blood tht made no sense but if he used a jutsu he just saw in front of her it would makes sense but other than that i like the story
Adorei, pena que acabou.................................................................................................................... 140 caracteres!
Gives seizures and is actually good somehow and is just a fever dream basically Idk E E Eodkjsjejdjendmd Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhuwydgwudgchsh I just JjsbegswfuhfygfggyeugdusgdugwrugwurguwugDmmdndjdj
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The overpowered tag is a lie. You constantly have MCs cheats being completely useless. As of 30 chapters: First enemy is a lv 3 vs lv 70, one guess who the MC is. Then, literally every adult around him (allies) is 300 to 500 lv while he's at 20. They even figured out all of his cheat powers because Tsunade is a cheat medic. (this comes to bite him soon.) Then, sage mode, old toad is 1300 lv. He can fool enemy status viewing cheat and can one shot MC while having the same skills, and negate gamer body... At this point, is it even a cheat? Then MC comes back, konoha is destroyed and he doesn't win a single battle with the enemies while they know all his skills and his weaknesses (this is why you don't let ninjas figure out your cheats.) Smh, so I mean, I guess you could say MC's opponents are overpowered. His cheat is basically a 7/10 equalizer. If he was born without cheats in this extreme AU he'd be dead by chapter 2.
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Can I also go to Naruto world with super cheat system instant mastery level max πVery well written I liked it very much I want to go to Naruto World Instant Mastery Level Max with Super Cheat System just kidding by the way thank you i love your thoughts
One of the best novel i have read. The Author of this novel clearly understood what's the reader want. I like the idea of this novel, a really really good novel.
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just worst novel of the webnivel. First chapter is OP but after that MC was fuc@ked up again and again. The power system is basically useless and content is cringy to hell.
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Quite good. First read it in fanfiction.net if not mistaken and have been trying to find continuation to the story... Finally found it βΊοΈβΊοΈ.
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love it, good stuff, I enjoyed the main characters personality, it sucks it's been two years sense it's been updated do I assume yes been dropped, oh well.
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I really loved reading this, but can someone tell me what the reason for stopping this novel was? I do not want to scroll through every single post, especially if there might not be a reason posted... π
the story is amazing I loved every moment of it the action,the power etc. I wish it was longer I started reading today I almost done.
SOOOO STUPID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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If youβre looking for a brainless fic read this where the mc has no personality and the characters have no brai A perfect fanfic for not having a brain
One word: Cringe Two Words: Wish fulfillment Three Words: Don't even bother . Worst of the worst of wish fulfillment. Don't get me wrong, I'm not bashing wish fulfillment novels. I do read them as well. This is just a prime example of what NOT to do when writing wish fulfillment novels. Absolutely no basis or reasoning for some events and the author just chalks it up to "as of expected of..." when in fact, it doesn't make any sense. Just focused on making the MC as overpowered as possible without providing any thought on how it led to whatever power up he decides to get. . . . Writing quality gets a 1 for grammar. Stability of Updates is also a 1 considering the last update was 5 years ago as of this writing, Character Design also a 1 due to reasons stated in the main review above, Story Dev is a 3 just for the fact that he gave a heads up that he won't be following canon but still fell short. World Background is a 3 just because it's a fanfiction so the world is pre-made but I don't want to raise the score any further.
i liked the mc and some stuff i dont agree with like tsunade knowing he has instant mastery when all she did was take blood tht made no sense but if he used a jutsu he just saw in front of her it would makes sense but other than that i like the story
Adorei, pena que acabou.................................................................................................................... 140 caracteres!
Gives seizures and is actually good somehow and is just a fever dream basically Idk E E Eodkjsjejdjendmd Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhuwydgwudgchsh I just JjsbegswfuhfygfggyeugdusgdugwrugwurguwugDmmdndjdj
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The overpowered tag is a lie. You constantly have MCs cheats being completely useless. As of 30 chapters: First enemy is a lv 3 vs lv 70, one guess who the MC is. Then, literally every adult around him (allies) is 300 to 500 lv while he's at 20. They even figured out all of his cheat powers because Tsunade is a cheat medic. (this comes to bite him soon.) Then, sage mode, old toad is 1300 lv. He can fool enemy status viewing cheat and can one shot MC while having the same skills, and negate gamer body... At this point, is it even a cheat? Then MC comes back, konoha is destroyed and he doesn't win a single battle with the enemies while they know all his skills and his weaknesses (this is why you don't let ninjas figure out your cheats.) Smh, so I mean, I guess you could say MC's opponents are overpowered. His cheat is basically a 7/10 equalizer. If he was born without cheats in this extreme AU he'd be dead by chapter 2.
Reveal Spoiler Can I also go to Naruto world with super cheat system instant mastery level max πVery well written I liked it very much I want to go to Naruto World Instant Mastery Level Max with Super Cheat System just kidding by the way thank you i love your thoughts
One of the best novel i have read. The Author of this novel clearly understood what's the reader want. I like the idea of this novel, a really really good novel.
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great story awesome plot twist, thrilling.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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hmm, have ntr? ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ
Great story. hfifjfjdkdjdbfjfjdbfhjfjfjfjfjfifjufifjffifufhfhhfufifuufururuurururururufjfhdufifjfjfififjfifichchchcyfydhrhsjisksjddhdhjdididbbdjdjdidhdhhdhdhdhdhdjueisisijsjsjsjdjjdd
just worst novel of the webnivel. First chapter is OP but after that MC was fuc@ked up again and again. The power system is basically useless and content is cringy to hell.
.x..x.x.xx.x.x.x.x.x.x x x.xx..x.x.x....mm. ..........x.x.x.x.x.xx.x.x.x.x.x..x.xx.x.x.x..x x.x.x.x.x.xx..xx.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.xx..xx..x.xx.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.
Quite good. First read it in fanfiction.net if not mistaken and have been trying to find continuation to the story... Finally found it βΊοΈβΊοΈ.
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Reveal Spoiler love it, good stuff, I enjoyed the main characters personality, it sucks it's been two years sense it's been updated do I assume yes been dropped, oh well.
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I really loved reading this, but can someone tell me what the reason for stopping this novel was? I do not want to scroll through every single post, especially if there might not be a reason posted... π
the story is amazing I loved every moment of it the action,the power etc. I wish it was longer I started reading today I almost done.
SOOOO STUPID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ΰ² οΈ΅ΰ² Β―\_ΰ² _ΰ² _/Β― δΉ( β’_β’ )γ β(Β΄Π΄`)β β(Β΄γΌο½)β (-_- )οΎββ« β» β£ β³ (β ΰ² _ΰ² )β (Β΄-οΉ-`οΌ)
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If youβre looking for a brainless fic read this where the mc has no personality and the characters have no brai A perfect fanfic for not having a brain