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Chapter 14: Well, this is getting complicated?!

[3rd P.O.V.]

~Stranded Island~

Sun sat down with Yeoui in his hand as a flying cloud blitzed around them in circles. The two were having a conversation he didn't want to partake in.

He only knew Kinto Un for ten to fifteen minutes so he was just listening to their conversation through Yeoui's thought communication.

'How did you end up here Kinto Un?' Finally, some questions that were worth his while were brought up, though he would have rather not sit and wait for such a long time.

'Ummm, I can't remember?' It stopped flying around and floated in one spot as it began to darken in colour.

'They both can talk and think properly now, though I have no idea how great Kinto Un's speech was before.'

Its colour began to darken at a considerable rate, Yeoui shook as he communicated with Sun.

'He's going to cause another natural disaster, Sun.' Standing up, Sun walked over to the almost pitch black cloud, as it began to suck in the surrounding air.

*Swiouuuuu!*

"Oy, what's the problem? I just beat the crap out of you so you wouldn't destroy the island!"

*Moffu!*

Patting what felt like a bean bag, Kinto Un's colour lightened up a bit. Though it began to darken once again as small raindrops fell from beneath.

'Yeoui, is he like....crying?' Yeoui shook in agreement. Sun just stood there cringing at what he supposed was a super fan of sorts. (Jin Mori Fan!)

'Does he like....worship the ground Jin walks on?'

Another shake was made, this time it did the 'Shake of Irritation,' like when Sun punches him for spite.

With his Haki, he was able to sense the emotions of Kinto Un. He was somewhat invisible to Haki as well due to his body's structure.

Which seemed to be that of Wind, Lightning and atmospheric gases into one. 'He's your localized news station at this point.'

Chuckling at his own statement, he realized how much he's been hoping for things to happen and not having the drive to change it at all.

It was ingrained into his very bones to be lazy and a pain to deal with since he was young. He wasn't going to change either but his work ethic could use a little improvement.

Kinto Un all of a sudden began to fly around them frantically. Screaming out 'Jin~' via thought communication. Which Yeoui transferred over to Sun's brain.

'He did tell me this was going to be a pain.' Breathing out heavily he looked at Yeoui in his hand, who gave a representation of a nod helplessly, using their thought communication.

Forcing himself to talk with the floating cloud, as it was the very best transportation he could get for the time being.

It wasn't just 'for the time being' as he knew this guy wasn't at his strongest. Its full size was that of a continent.

At this moment it was only as large as a small island and yet it packed enough power to destroy a great part of the terrain on the island.

"So, just from your reaction, I'm guessing you know I'm the Monkey King's reincarnation?" If he was chanting Jin like a mad man flying around him...there was an obvious answer.

Kinto Un stopped moving and confusingly floated in front of whom he thought was the original Jin Mori.

Inspecting the physique and the appearance he knew he wasn't at his peak and thought it was him suppressing his powers.

The band that the original wore was to suppress his power, looking at the forehead of Sun, it realised there was no Loop of Binding. Meaning he really was the Monkey King's reincarnation once again.

'Seeing' the expression that was plastered on Kinto Un's 'face' Yeoui informed him of the news, 'It seems....he thought you were Jin Mori.' Calling his name without any honorifics he explained to Sun the situation in one sentence.

'You can't be serious, doesn't that mean his loyalty would go down the drain? Also, it seems you can talk in full sentences now.'

Scratching his chin he looked at the duo of overpowered weapons, they could even be classified as one of the Ancient Weapons in this world.

Looking at the cloud, that seemed to have become extremely inquisitive towards Sun. Suspecting something wasn't right.

"I'm not Jin Mori, he is my teacher and mentor but I haven't seen him in a while." He dropped a bomb that shocked the atmospheric gases out of Kinto Un.

*Rumble!*

The white cloud darkened once again, as the sky became almost pitch black. The sun which once shone down onto the island was blocked out by a thick fog.

'What's going on Yeoui?!' Shouting in the thought communication link, he felt danger radiating off of this thing.

The alarm bells in his head were ringing but he wasn't the type to go into a state of anguish or fear so he asked quickly and concisely.

'He's releasing all of his pent up energy into the atmosphere, it seems he's trying to forcefully create more clouds to take over the space above the island.'

Yeoui calmly explained what he commiserated from the situation. Even if he was to use an attack, both of them combined could take him down with relative ease.

The fog however was another story, the already low Haki signal Sun was getting from Kinto Un became almost non-existent. Even with his most prized sense, his vision was extremely hindered.

They weren't that freaked out, Yeoui had never seen this before but he still understood the origin and type of abilities Kinto Un had. It wasn't hard to understand most of his attacks once you knew his powers.

*Swish!*

Above them, a spiral formed, it took the appearance similar to that of a hurricane's eye that you see on a weather report.

The danger was still evident in Sun's mind, he was tempted to release his perception range just to understand the situation he was in but he took Yeoui's words to heart.

*Vooom!*

In one fell swoop, the entire eye expanded then dispersed, as white clouds formed out of thin air, accommodating the sky above.

Kinto Un's dark colour began to lessen and became his usual clear white with some fog-like smoke around him.

"You're done?" Pouting due to the unenthusiastic response, he turned around. The issue was Sun had no clue, the guy looked like a cloud...how were you even going to know his back from the front.

'He's pouting.' They both cringed, even Yeoui didn't like the thought lingering in his mind. He was still resistant to it but his mental defences were broken down from the 500 years he stayed with Sun.

'Is he a Tsundere? That's going to be a challenge.' They just stared at him. Yeoui was deadpanning until he remembered some detrimental information. Which he would get in trouble later for.

'Ummmm, Sun?' Hearing the type of voice he used to carry his message over, made the already annoyed Sun's face contort.

'What is it, and I swear if it's something not worthwhile I'll break you in half and then throw you in the ocean.'

Shivering from the thought, he steeled his resolve and spoke with his utmost effort. Still traumatized from being left on the moon.

'His size and childish attitude pushed me to hypothesize he has the mind and brain activity of a child.'

*Smack!*

Slapping Yeoui without waiting for further reason why he kept information of such quality hidden in his noggin.

'You just made me hit a child, what's wrong with you!' His personality did a one hundred and eighty-degree turn for kids in the three years he spent with Ace and Luffy.

Kids were his weak point once they weren't little monsters, else he would still dropkick one and follow in his ancestor's footsteps and murder some orphans. (BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!!)

'Ow, what the fuck bro ill headbutt you!' Trying to threaten Sun, his body gyrated in his hand. Only to get slapped again.

Kinto Un just watched the two smacking each other. Yeoui was jumping out of his palm and hitting him wherever his stick body could reach.

'So what are we going to do with him? Is he even going to cooperate?' Halfway through they began talking telepathically, Sun needed to know if the floating cloud was usable.

'You're technically the Monkey King, and we just defeated him, gaining the right as his Master. The same way I chose you all those years ago.'

A small smile bloomed on his face after hearing those words. Those times were some of the worst and the very best he's ever had.

Peace in a mountain filled with fruits and beautiful Cherry Blossom trees. Even if they taste so bad he fainted multiple times it was a great place to chillax.

Stopping their shenanigans he started walking over to the floating white cloud that backed off every step he took. Refraining from getting itself slapped in the head like Yeoui.

Observing its movements, he raised an eyebrow. Realizing his mistake of revealing such a sight to a child.

'I'm not going to hurt you, Yeoui could testify for me.' Using his 'Talk no Jutsu' to the lowest degree, he tried to persuade it.

Even if he was its Master he didn't want to have a bad relationship with them. And children are the worst when it comes to relationships.

Throwing tantrums if you didn't give them enough attention, crying if they did something wrong and were reprimanded for it.

He didn't want that, instead of crying he'll be getting rainstorms and thunderstorms that ravage islands and villages without effort.

Kinto Un listened to his apology, contemplated on what to respond or how to as it didn't understand a couple of his words.

A connection was to be made for the two to talk, which was Yeoui, who was broadcasting their messages to each other.

Any outsider might think Sun was crazy since he was talking to a floating cloud and a skinny stick that shook every now and then.

So it used a colour scheme communication system, where it changed its body's colour to signify yes or no and if it had any information to share it could give Yeoui, he would be the medium between the two.

Its colour changed to blue as a way to signify it accepted his apology for his lack of reaction. Yeoui still had to relate what colours meant what but Sun caught on quickly.

"So, what can you do?" Yeoui's eyes almost popped out of his non-existent head. The worst question to ask a kid was 'What can you do?' as you'll be getting a whole class on how to blow up stuff with lightning.....

AN: Explanation for a lot of his powers will be in the next chapter. As some people seem to not have a single clue about GOH. Neither do they have a clue who the Old Man that I hinted and revealed to be, was even though it was obvious?

Also, a guy gave me 2 and a half stars because Sun has Renewal Taekwondo...according to him, it's not a power.....so if you guys have any complaints just let me know lol. I don't want some guy who read like fifty chapters to tell me he didn't like something that happened in chapter 25. You read so much just to tell me you didn't like something a while ago.

If you don't like the book that's fine, not everyone likes GOH (God of Highschool) or One Piece. If my writing isn't sub-par It's because I type on a phone regularly, my laptop is stuffed with school work. Even so, at least give me a better review. One that makes more sense than 'The Monkey King doesn't have Renewal Taekwondo as an ability.'. It's the most obvious thing in the world *Wheeze*.

The next guy who commented and said it wasn't the greatest writing ability, I agree💯. I write better on Wattpad or at least I used to. The problem is I do two languages and I have to re-edit most of my shit because autocorrect turns it into Spanish and French.

Limited time makes it harder lol also give me food, I'm hungry!!!

Later I'll be dropping two to three more chapters. I'll try to drop one a day, as I have school next week. I'm on school break so might as well put out some content for y'all.

Peace👋💯


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