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Chapter 353: Another Question.

So, I am beginning to write the sequel to this fic and I had a few things to say and a couple of questions to ask.

The fic stars Jay's 4th son with Ahsoka, Hadrian.

He is one of a pair of twins, Hadrian and Julian.

I am thinking of making his personality easygoing and flirty and fun with a lack of moral compass with a little manipulative-ness similar to Jay, but instead of Jay's brutality, Hadrian leans more on the decent and considerate side of things if he can. he's not afraid to kill or even wipe out planets but if possible he'll avoid it and innovate his way out of problems with tech.

Is that a personality you guys want to see or should I change it?

suggestions?

Now I gave you guys a preview of chapter one way back which is just one chapter where mc gets going on his multiversal journey with no explanation of his character or motives.

But I am thinking of making the intro into two or even three chapters or one very long chapter detailing his thought process and intentions.

Which do you prefer?

mc will also make male friends and be very sociable. not a lot, but they'll be there.

is that something you'd want or not?

Now onto motives.

In my original preview of the chapter, his motive was wanting a harem and having fun and seeing if he can do what Jay did just on a whim.

in the new version I plan on adding to that. the harem is still his motive (he is a 16 yr old horny guy) but in this version it'll also be a bit if an excuse he makes to hide a slight existential crisis he has. amd the reason he goes on the journey is because he wants to prove to himself that he can do what he wants and doesn't have to forever live in his dad's shadow. this gives him a little chip on his shoulder and make him a bit more of an active participant in most scenarios and a bit reckless for fun.

one of the arcs is in Young Justice. in that arc should mc go independent or join up with the sidekick squad for fun for a little while?

finally, do you want Hadrian to have knowledge of fictional worlds or do you want him to go in blind like the reckless teen he is and discover them on his own?

suggestions open!


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