Infinite power

LV 1

Unsightly

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LV 1

zero_m

It sucks as this is a pretty good idea but the writing is so bad that I have seen mtl translations better than it. I can't review more as I just could not read it but if you can get through the meter thick wall of trash writing there is a good story behind it I guess.

LV 3

Mindchatter123

I've seen unreadable mtl's that cannot be compared to this. The story, if there was one, is so fast paced that nothing makes sense. One moment the mc is talking to a family, the next chapter he's in another universe killing everyone in it. I would recommend that the author to read children stories to know about pacing, dialog, and world building.

LV 13

Golden_Silence

good idea, but completely unreadable........................................................................................................................................................

LV 13

GreyKnights

This is very hard to read.

LV 4

ICExAIS

Me duelen los ojos y el cerebro... Quise leerlo porque veo desde hace un tiempo actualizaciones bastante constantes, pero... No pude terminar el capitulo 1, ¿o era el 2?. En fin, de lo que vi: - Todo pasa a una velocidad que dejaría a flash en vergüenza. - El MC parece no tener una personalidad (al menos hasta donde leí). - Autor, que diablos querés decir con POV? ESO NO ES UN POV!!!! Eso es todo lo que puedo decir ya que apenas lo leí un poco pero al menos le deseo al autor que en futuros proyectos aprenda de estos errores y nos cierre la boca a los que como yo nos quejamos, y si tiene tiempo, que le de una reescribida a ese fic ya que no es malo el concepto, genérico, si, pero no malo...

LV 5

Darth_Ullyses

good concept but a sucky writer, but can improve though

LV 1

HQ_Alberto

Uma das piores fantfctions self-insert da webnovel ................................................... . .....................