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23.52% Into The Unknown Omniverse / Chapter 5: Prologue: Editing World+Background

Chapter 5: Prologue: Editing World+Background

"Hmmm so what are you going to do now luke? are you going to change or add some things in the world that you're going to be reincarnated with?" Earth~chan.

"Yes, I'm going to change and add some things before I reincarnate. Btw Earth~chan, should I change my name? I think my current name doesn't quite fit into Naruto World. "

"Yes, I also think you should change your name or just use another name. It will help you remember your name and you can also use your other name as an alias. If you're going to add or change your name, I think you should just use the name Nero as it will be you when you grow up so used it instead so at least it will be easy for you" Earth~chan.

"Yes, you're right. I think Nero is a fitting name for me. Then how about I also named you? at least I can properly call you. How about Kyrie?"

"Well thank you for that wonderful name, I like it a lot <3. and as of now, you can call me kyrie~chan, Nero~kun *cute giggle*" Earth~chan / Kyrie.

"Well, I'm glad that you like it. So for now I'm going to start editing the plot story and add some things for my background, At least having a good family background can help me a lot, So how to change the storyline Kyrie~chan?." Nero/Luke

"Just say the Name world" Kyrie~chan

"Naruto World"

*Editing of World *

( Let's see, How about I moved the Uchiha Incident to the night that the Kyuubi attacked Konohagakure??, Yep that will do. Instead of Itachi doing it with Obito aka 'Madara'. Let's do it with Shimura Danzo and his root. Let's see, before Obito takes control of Kyuubi, Obito visits Danzo first and then controls him. Controlling him by ordering him to attack the Uchihas and some ninja of Konohagakure because of their hatred for them. Then next, when the Kyuubi got controlled, Danzo will start his massacre adding to the chaos with the help of his Root Anbu, then next the Uchihas will retaliate and start fighting to the death against Danzo and his men. Then Hiruzen Sarutobi came to the scene because his Anbu squad warned him about the two groups' confrontation. When Hiruzen saw Danzo killing shinobi members of Konohagakure, He got mad and confronted his 'Bestfriend'. but Danzo went crazy when he saw Hiruzen, he started his jealous monologue that he should be the one to be the Hokage so Danzo also started attacking Hiruzen with the intent to kill his 'Bestfriend'. Then the two 'Bestfriend' started fighting to the death.

Then for the Kyuubi part. Let's see, Instead of Kushina and Minato both dying. it will only be Minato sacrificing his life. okay, let's start to edit. when the Kyuubi started to attack Konohagakure, Minato is confronting the masked man 'Madara' who infiltrated the birthing process of Kushina. then the masked 'Madara' starts his Villain reasoning on why he attacked the village telling that he hates the village to the core. Minato started to panic because he doesn't know the condition of his family and the village is under attack by the Kyuubi, while he is also fighting the masked Madara. Then the Masked 'Madara' started to retreat because his goal is almost finished and he feels an unknown presence arrive within the village, for his last goal it is to collect the eyes and dead bodies of Uchiha members that died during the confrontation between Danzo and his group. So the masked 'Madara' started to disappear with the help of his Jutsu.

Then Minato will confront the Kyuubi by teleporting it outside the Village. Next, when Minato is confronting the Kyuubi. Kushina also arrived at the spot and tells Minato that reseal the Kyuubi inside her, but Minato will not agree because the Konohagakure will lose its Bijuu. because of her condition, he knows that Kushina is in her last leg and she's only breathing because of her Uzumaki physique. then Kushina will use her last remaining chakra and used her Adamantine Chain rendering the Kyuubi. when the two are confronting the Kyuubi, an unknown white-haired masked shinobi arrives at the scene. Both Minato and Kushina are wary of the new person that arrived thinking that it is an accomplice of the other masked person. but the unknown shinobi tells them that he is not an enemy and wanted to help them reseal the Kyuubi. but Minato is still on guard, so the unknown shinobi just acted and started to confront the Kyuubi. after seeing that the unknown shinobi is on their side, he also helps him to repel the Kyuubi. But because the Kyuubi has an enormous amount of Chakra.

Then the two men concluded that they needed to seal it. Minato tells the unknown shinobi that he will seal it with him and his son Naruto. but the unknown shinobi doesn't agree with Minato and he tells that they should seal it to Kushina and his son instead, He said that Kushina can be still be saved because of her Physique and the chakra of Kyuubi. When the Kyuubi heard that he is going to be sealed again he went crazy and started to attack the two men. then Minato agrees with the suggestion of the Unknown shinobi, so he used his Hirashin no Jutsu and teleported to the location of his son Naruto, when Minato came back with his son Naruto the unknown shinobi said he was the one that will be going to cast the sealing Jutsu to Kushina and Naruto so that the Kyuubi can be sealed to the two of them. Before the unknown shinobi used his sealing technique, he used a Jutsu slightly similar to the Adamantine Chain of the Uzumaki, but the difference between the two is their color. The color of the chain is Golden. then it binds the Kyuubi and the Unknown shinobi started to cast his unknown sealing technique. after casting the technique, the first part of the Kyuubi chakra came out then he started to Seal it to Kushina who is already close to her death because of Chakra consumption and her remaining life force, so the unknown shinobi started to give her some unknown medicine to help her recover some strength and when Kushina has been stabilized, the unknown shinobi also started to finish his last sealing Jutsu and started to seal it to the infant Naruto.

then when the Kyuubi feels that he lost almost all of his Chakra, because of the Jutsu he went frenzied and started to fight back even though it is bound with the chains. Then Minato saw that Kushina have been saved he felt relieved. but then he saw the Kyuubi trying to kill his son by piercing it with his long sharp nails, Minato acted fast and tried to stop the Kyuubi from killing his infant son. so he jumps in front piercing his abdomen. when he saw that the Kyuubi still have some remaining chakra, he knows that he will not survive this fight so he used the Shiki Fujin and sealed the last remaining chakra of Kyuubi inside him resulting in finally sealing the Kyuubi and also used another Jutsu, Hakke no Fuin Shiki (Eight Trigrams Sealing Technique) for reinforcing the seal and transferring his last remaining chakra to his son Naruto. After casting his final Jutsu he stared at both Kushina and Naruto for the last time before closing his eye and dying. After the Kyuubi was gone.

Hiruzen arrived at the scene after his brutal death fight with his 'Bestfriend' Danzo, (resulting in the death of his 'Bestfriend') then he saw 4 people. in front of him is an unconscious Kushina, a crying baby, the dead body of the 4th Hokage Minato, and lastly an unknown white-haired masked shinobi. Hiruzen saw the last act of the 4th Hokage, and he vowed to help and protect his family. then Hiruzen went forward to ask the unknown shinobi for his identity but the unknown shinobi started to disappear, after a few seconds only white particles were left in the place where the unknown shinobi is standing. When Hiruzen saw it, he can't do anything because the presence of the unknown shinobi is gone. so his only choice is to ask Kushina what happened and who is that Unknown shinobi. then that concludes the Kyuubi attack.

So for the other changes, after the masked person, 'Madara' captured and controlled the Kyuubi. he left the birthing area of Kushina leaving behind the almost dying Biwako Sarutobi, the wife of Hiruzen Sarutobi. after that an unknown white haired-shinobi arrive at the place and saw the dying state of Biwako, the unknown shinobi heals Biwako giving it an unknown medicine. when the unknown shinobi felt the arriving presence of the 3rd Hokage he disappear and left the scene. then Hiruzen saw the state of his wife, and order some of his shinobi men to get some medical shinobi.

for the next changes, because of the attack of Danzo, Root, and Kyuubi. the last remaining members of the Uchiha are Mikoto, Infant Sasuke, 4-5 years old Itachi,9-10years old Shisui, 4-5 years old Izumi, and Hazuki(Izumi's Mother). Fugaku died during the confrontation between Danzo and him.

then for my family background let's see. I think is better for me to have a good family heritage so at least other people can't antagonize me. so for that let us start with my grandparents from my father's side, My grandmother is the twin sister of Hiruzen Sarutobi, named Fuyumi Sarutobi, offspring of both the Sarutobi and Hatake clan, my grandmother is married to my deceased grandfather who died during the 2nd shinobi world war and is the son of both the Senju and Sarutobi clan. then for my grandparent's from my mother's side. my grandfather is an offspring of Hatake and Senju, then my grandmother is a full-blood Uzumaki but they both died during the 2nd shinobi world war. Then my father is an Anbu who died protecting the citizen of Konohagakure during the Kyuubi attack and Shimura Danzo's Coup D'état. then my mother is a day away from giving birth to me. My mother's name is Ayako Hatake-Sarutobi she was red-haired which she inherited from my grandmother and she's also the cousin of Sakumo Hatake making her the aunt of Kakashi. and with that, I'm 25 % Sarutobi,25% Senju 25%, 25% Uzumaki, and 25% Hatake. I think this will do. I pretty much change and add a lot of things. for sure the difficulty of the world will Increase because of changes within the plot. No one-eyed mummy, no avenger Sasuke, no saint Itachi. okay lets end it.)

*Final World Difficulty: SS>SSS*

"Okay old man, I'm ready to be reincarnated" Nero/Luke

then a flashing white light covered my whole body.


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