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Is that a Wisp?

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Author: Suiyan

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Author's Note: The start of the story is very slow and cliche. Give it a chance until the wisp reaches the human cities. It's at that point that the book's charm shows itself (Around chapter 20, all free!).
What if a wisp, with zero EQ about human culture and habits, gains the opportunity to finally achieve human form? Now he can enter cities, experience technology, and fight his way to the top, right? In this universe where wisps are seen as nothing more than resources, a wisp stands up to challenge the wisps' destiny! Not without causing a lot of misunderstandings on his way, of course…


Qi Condensation;
Foundation Establishment;
Core Formation;
Divine Soul;
Soul Forging;
Void Breaking;
Divine Path;
Divine View;
Semi Divinity;


Mortal Rejection;
Godly Fusion;
God Foundation;
God Core;
Nascent God;


Semi-God Realm;
God Trial Realm;
Elementary God Realm;
Primal God Realm;
God Realm.

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    Hi guys, this is the very first chapter, and I would like to make some things clear. 1- There will be romance? Well, a little, but I'm not a romanticist. Hence, this will take place 'SUPER FU***NG LATE' in the story. So don't worry about Feifei for now. She isn't the main point here, Krune's life as a wisp is. 2- If you haven't noticed the spaceship yet, you better know that this is a novel where technology exists. Still, it is mostly used for convenience. It takes almost no part in the cultivators' strength, so don't expect super mechas or spiritual armors or whatever. Think about this universe as if our nowadays technology meets the ancient cultivation world and they just get well together. It also helps to create a lot of funny events, so... 3- The first 20 chapters or so doesn't picture it well. Still, like a wisp, Krune only has the little knowledge that he learned in the forest and by secretly visiting the nearby villages. He knows about the technological world but had barely involved himself with it before leaving the Katiu Forest. 4- As a nonhuman, Krune has no EQ when considering the humans' culture and habits. It is definitely one of the top trends of this novel, so you can expect a lot of 'smashing my face against the common sense wall' after chapter 20 more or less. 5- Will there be harem in this novel? No, there won't be any, be it Krune or any other character in the entire story. 'Sorry, Mario, but your princess is in another castle.' I'm the type of person that can't accept a world where a man having several wives is okay. Still, a woman having more than one man is considered a betrayal, this is BS! I have no problem with novels where both genres have the same rights, though. 6-The book is now passing through a re-edition. The story won't change anywhere, just the grammar will be fixed. You will notice that the grammar will turn bad at some point, and then it will come back to normal after chapter 100. Thanks to my editor for all the work on the existing chapters so far. o/

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    Its so cool and original. I love the idea of a wisp cultivator and the best is that its not a reincarnation and the wisp os intelligent. There is no long vjapters about learning that bore you. Just the balance it need to keep it interesting and logical for the plot. Its a must read in a point of view. I just hoping the author will continue. Ps: no harem.

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    The quality of the writing is over all alright there are a few spelling mistakes here and there but nothing that can't be over looked. The stability of the updates is pretty consistent so not much to complain about. The real downfall of this story is the characters and their development, and by development I mean the lack of it. The characters frankly are boring and very 2d most of their personalities can be described with a few words such as, mean and money hungry, talented and ignorant, genius and quiet, and for Ao he has nothing other than being the only other guy in the story. The story development is also very bad it is mostly the same over used jokes and the protagonist getting bullied by his so called friends. The Mc is supposed to be smart but then makes the same mistakes over and over again, and then it is just labeled as a joke. The one thing that makes the Mc unique, other than his race, is almost instantly given to his friends and they are only slightly slower than the "genius" mc. This story had so much potential, and I really enjoyed it at the stat but then the repetition of the same thing made the story get old real quick. As a suggestion to the author pleased do not keep forcing the same jokes, build on the characters more, give something to make the mc unique again, other than his race, allow the mc to grow and learn from his mistakes instead of repeating them. These are just a few things that could be done to improve the over story. Once again I love the concept of the story and the beginning was great, it just never let the characters to be built cause it to get boring really quickly.

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    This novel will surpise you it is enjoyable our mc has ditermination. And lastly there isnt out there a cultivation about a wisp. I wonder how the mc will continue to progress

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    Hmm. Rough. World building needs help, character building as well. A bit forced overall. Editing good, but needs more captivation to appeal to a larger audience.

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    Pretty disappointing. There are quite a few glaringly obvious flaws with this novel. First off, everything works out way to well for the mc. He gets saved by a really powerful group who realistically would not give a rats ass about him and gives him a cultivation technique suited for him (because he cannot learn other without meridians). He gets a super common technique for cultivations that everyone can get their hands on for themselves, all their cousins, AND their dogs and finds it is an incomplete technique that even in its first stages of unlocking is better than all other technique out there. All while not even 1 person in the hundreds, if not thousands, of years has thought maybe I should see how far this technique can go. And this only is in the first few chapters, it still just as bad, but uses that technique as a main reason for it working. Secondly, the whole story is about how it is dangerous to be a wisp in a cultivation world because everyone want to use you for resources, but no out of 120 or so chapters there is only 2 times anyone has even considered using them as resources for cultivation. Every character you meet is either strictly good or strictly bad, and most of the time everyone is they meet are good people.

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    This will be pretty long, sorry in advance. I want to start by saying how much I love this story, however even the best book can have problems. So here’s my two cents on the matter. The start is interesting and had me thinking the same as the main character for awhile. It picks up really quickly and gets seriously interesting after he decides to set out alone, but around chapter 40-50ish there is a lot of over used gags, unlikeable characters and useless plot threads. Though these clear up around chapter 80 it still had moments that made me think certain characters would make other appearances rather than just be one offs. Of The two who survived the MC’s first encounter with people after gaining his new cultivation technique, only one is relevant and is soon forgotten entirely. The couple who told the MC about how humans wear clothes are told to say MC’s name if they are ever in need, but that never comes up again. I could go on, because this never really changes. There are at least a dozen characters I thought would stick around, or be important later only to have been sidelined completely. Hell even the main cast gets a complete overhaul at one point. It’s done very well, but still sucks that we won’t see certain characters for afew hundred chapters. It’s true that as one cultivates one can live for hundreds of thousands of years, so all these characters might reappear eventually. But doesn’t make me feel any better knowing it’s only a possibility. There is a lot that’s hyped up and then just forgotten right after. Like the Spiritas. While it was my mistake to treat them like energy beings and not like elvish humanoids, I still felt disappointed that we didn’t see anything from them despite the way they were hyped. That being said, afew more humanoid races wouldn’t hurt. Humans are one thing. And demon beast are incredibly varied, but other life forms that have colonized their worlds and expanded across the Many universes could add a lot to the story. Instead of just having everyone be either human, or demon beast in human form. As the story goes on this kind of thing only becomes more apparent. But the story does improve constantly. After taking advice from the fans the story only got better. Especially with character development and world building. Even the grammar and punctuation improved. For awhile it wasn’t easy to read certain lines, but this is corrected, though not perfect, it’s still easy to understand and has only afew small mistakes. After certain annoying characters start to turn around for the better and the repeated jokes come to a halt the story improves drastically. But if your not into romance and expect nothing from the MC be prepared, because, while the romance doesn’t appear till afew hundred chapters in, once it does it will always be there and constantly expand as new couples form and more and more hybrid children are created. The underdog concept the MC has from being a wisp is basically nonexistent. You can’t call him an underdog in any sense of the word. He is a literal genius at everything he does. The story makes that apparent really quick too. Even at the first realm of cultivation the MC is remarkably more powerful and skilled in almost every way than the cultivators and demon beasts around him. And this continues throughout the story and is one of his defining traits. He is an OP blacksmith, alchemist and technically a puppet master aswell. He barely needs to try for most of what he does and things often fall into his lap without much strenuous effort. This is either because of the MC’s personality and the effects from decisions and choices made by the MC and his crew, or because there’s a powerful being pulling strings behind the scenes. Either way he is the centre of attention. Much to his annoyance since he hates to bring unwanted gazes, but seems not to realize how seriously amazing he is compared to everyone else. He isn’t humble at all but doesn’t come off too overconfident all the time. Sometimes his personality is annoying though. Like when he treats two enemies like fodder and talks as if they aren’t even there. Or when he casually says how he too wields a special type of law and is in the advanced stage, while said person in in the initial stage. Making her feel less special and pathetic compared to him. He does that kind of thing a lot with his friends. Showing them up without realizing it and complaining when they call him out, or acting as if he doesn’t understand. And one of the best concepts I found interesting at the start was the Wisps short lifespan, i was really curious how the writer would balance the MC’s struggle as he found his friends surpassing him in cultivation and his lifespan coming to an end, him finding the limits of his race and needing to push beyond, but that is literally not even close to a problem for the MC. I mean seriously every wisp ever born has worried about their lifespan and the MC logically assumes he’ll need to worry when he reaches a higher level, so he makes preparations. Getting a long dead wisps technique to ensure he can make a breakthrough to extend his lifespan before it runs out. Only it isn’t needed and goes almost forgotten for hundreds of chapters. I love a lot of the stuff in this story, but it’s annoying to think of people like the MC in the real world. No matter how hard you try, if you don’t have talent you’ll only get so far. And if you meet someone overflowing with talent who works just as hard, then what was the point of trying in the first place. For every step a normal person makes the MC makes three more and then looks back and takes another step just for the sake of proving how amazing he is. I like how he helps his friends and doesn’t take pleasure in killing. His choice of equipment reflects this and Fits very well. But He just seems TOO PERFECT. Annoyingly so at times. The main characters elemental control is basically godlike and helps in everything he does. Whether it’s helping his friends improve their own elemental control, or engaging in Combat and cultivation. Even things like blacksmithing, alchemy, formations and ‘puppetry‘ are all dominated by the MC. This isn’t really that big of a problem just something I noticed and thought was weird. It does suck that his elemental control isn’t used to its fullest though . Since the writer likes to use the same few attacks over and over. I love the way these attacks have developed and evolved over the course of the story, but it seriously limits what could be done. The MC will always have an elemental advantage against any opponent of the same realm and even against ones in higher realms to an extent. Yet this power is rarely used The way it could be. With all the elements the MC should have a massive arsenal of unique elemental fusions and skills that make the most of his level of control, but the same few techniques get used over and over. He should use the best elements for each adversary, not just spam whatever’s convenient. So many techniques have been forgotten or just go unused. After every fight the MC should either develop a new technique or use the techniques of his past opponents to constantly improve his skills. Especially since he can see a technique once and replicate it with ease. The side characters are fleshed out pretty well and done properly, but some of them just feel like they exist and don’t really contribute to the plot in any way shape or form. The MC also has knowledge of countless languages and strives to learn them all, but this is only really mentioned or relevant once. The MC also has a master that barley does master like things and this transmits into the MC who has his own disciple, but only really guides his protégée occasionally. It feels less like a master, disciple relationship and more like a student, teacher one from school. Say some stuff, show some stuff and have them do it themselves before you test them. Instead of spending time guiding and aiding personally and slowly, like a master should. Instead they leave everything up to their disciples. I get that a sense of individuality is Needed and they can’t baby them, but I expected alittle more. Overall a great story with a lot of room to grow. If I were the writer I would make the MC hit a wall during his cultivation. A wall larger and harder than anyone around him. That way the struggle would return and it wouldn’t feel like cultivation was so easy. It’s supposed to be going against the heavens after all, so it shouldn’t be a walk in the park. Not that it has been completely easy for the MC and his group. It just feels they face less adversity than others while progressing faster and growing all around more powerful. I’ve never liked the concept in any story of someone only being afew decades old and being able to hold their own against someone who has lived for hundreds, even thousands of years. When stories do that kind of thing, it ruins the enjoyment for me. So I hope the MC doesn’t continue growing exponentially faster and stronger than everyone else around him. Again sorry for the Long review. I just had a lot to say. I’ve been reading this from long before it went premium, so I hope it continues to improve and thank you for writing such an interesting novel. If you’ve read this far thank you. I would have put more of why I enjoy this series, but I feel it was covered in most of the other reviews.

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    This story is going to **** I swear to god if krune was a human and knew all the customs and **** i gurantee he’d be one of those overly nice stuttering mc’s and its annoying like what the f*ck this kid gets his divine soul and it has sentience but then it completely disobeys him but then he finally gets rid of it and he doesn’t like it like grow the **** up and man up like jesus christ thats your own soul but your just gonna allow it to run rampant when you don’t even have access to your full power because its basically a child and when you go through the natural process of breaking through it wanted to kill you and you just let it be like what the **** is wrong with this imbecilic author this is one of those times where i wish i could just kick the mc’s ass because hes pissing me off so much like FUCK THIS SHIT

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    MC is a forever child and is always protected by someone no matter how much he cultivates and because of this MC maintains his no killing policy because no one would come back to take revenge on him without dealing with his protectors this kept on going till 900+ chapters where he lost his protection and immediately starts killing monsters but lucky enough to not encounter any human who are willing to fight it out with him till death. MC lacks forethought though it's said he has higher IQ but it's hardly shown in in his thought process. This novel is different in a sense you're a story of a MC with child mentality though old enough to have his own grandsons.

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    This book is super Good the author got everything down to the last detail and he doesn’t disappoint. He knows how to tell a story and how to keep people interested and wanting more. You should try it out

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    The main character goes from intelligent and pragmatic to merciful and naive within about 30 chapters, on the level of a Japanese MC at that. "Oh, you just tried to kill me? That's fine, you can leave." At first, the MC killed threats without hesitation, yet later, he risks his identity being discovered (which would instantly get him hunted by those far more powerful) to kindly ask a group "please don't hunt wisps anymore". The foolish main character combined with the trope-filled writing killed the story for me, and likely will for anyone more fond of calculative/antihero MCs.

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    First of all, wait until you read at least five chapters before forming an opinion. The first two chapters are quite small and ordinary, but the story quality gives a super jump (and I mean it) after the third one. The author increased the amount written after the third chapter as well. What really caught my attention is the MC and how the world thinks about the wisp, and I've never seen a wisp MC before. Another excellent point in this story is the MC cheat. This one was very well thought, and really well elaborated.

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    This book is great and cool to read. Served a story about martial arts. Characters are very calm at all. Background of world this book very nice too.

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    I only managed to get through the first 6 chapters.... The grammar and syntax are beyond bad. The author miss-uses tenses a lot. Infact he interchangeably uses them in every other sentence. Even the average 6th grader should have a better grasp on atleast the 4 simplest and when to use them: Simple past/past progressive and simple present/present progressive. To the author: I am not trying to disparage your work but you are honestly not that gifted when it comes to grammar, either study up or get an editor to do the work for you. One last thing: even in the earlier chapter you are artificially inflating your wordcount. You are creating needlessly complicated sentences that no one understands and break syntax. Keep the sentences short, it will improve flow, you'll make less mistakes and the reader will in no way be confused.

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    This is one of my favourite novels on this site. I saw some pretty large reviews recently on other books so I thought I’d make a decent one of my own since it’s been awhile. To start of The main character is extremely intelligent, interesting and fun to read about. He’s pretty much a genius and loves to improve, learn and help those who need it. Especially his friends and family. Many of the reviews I’ve seen complain about things that pretty much disappear by chapter 80. The author is very active and interacts with his fans. Taking criticism and improving as he writes has allowed the story to grow naturally along with the main character. It makes this story all the more unique in my eyes. Because of the MC’s naive and humble beginnings we learn much of the world through his eyes and it is always a breath of fresh air. The side characters aren’t very developed at first, seemingly only their for comedy (which sadly falls flat sometimes), or they can be described pretty easily, but as with everything in the story they only get better the longer it goes on. I have noticed afew faults here and there. The grammar was difficult to sit through after awhile in the beginning. Though this isn’t really a consistent problem. The odd mistake here and there still pop up. Which is completely understandable mind you. There are also multiple plot points that are skipped over. Though minor they may be. One of my favourite scenes in this story is Krune’s battle with the fire dragon Gomat and I was hyped for him to FINALLY get a sparring partner he could consider his equal. Yet this is FAR from what happened as Krune used the battle to learn Gomat’s blue flame skill before improving it and making an even more powerful version immediately putting him above the badass dragon. He’s also never mentioned again. Colen and Nala are in similar situations though I wasn’t nearly as hyped for them. Before leaving the Makui planet Shinja trashes the common young master and he swears his revenge. Though the mans father isn’t stupid and would rather see him learn his lesson and grow than go out and take revenge on his behalf, especially since Shinja has such potential. Which was awesome to see as its not very common in stories like this. It stuck with me because these people are never brought up again. The way the wisp’s of the Dalin universe use their ethereal bodies during combat is likewise forgotten. I thought it was so cool when I first read about it, but it’s only mentioned the one time. It’s not even brought up after the MC sends a message back to the Luvile universe. It contained cultivation techniques and skills, but no mention of this unique way Wisps can use their bodies to fight. It’s not even brought up when the MC is training his daughter. Even though she has a wisp-like ethereal flame of her own. (Which even after she gains control over it I imagine it flaring up with her emotions) Weapon intent is all but forgotten. Though seeing as there aren’t many characters who wield weapons it makes sense. The fact Krune is tempering his physical body with tribulation lightning is never really mentioned again either. Though he can withstand more than two and a half times the maximum output he was once able to, his body is still considered fairly average and even weak. I know he’s a wisp, so this can also be forgiven. I just thought it might be a plot point considering covering your weaknesses and making them into strengths is usually a big part of cultivation novels. Not that he’d need his body since he’s a long range combatant anyway. Something that I was always excited about but never happen was after Krune improved Gomats blue flame by combining it with Tribulation lightning to create the purple flame. Light Spirit/Little light/Luvile then says something like “I wonder if he’ll be able to make the others” making me assume we would get multiple elements that were enhanced and merged with the purple tribulation power. Though this was my own speculation, what light spirit meant is never explained. There’s a pretty big change in cast half way through the story. Not really a complaint or warning, just a heads up. It’s a pretty neat way to do it too. I do miss many characters and want to see the results of many things that won’t be shown for awhile Though. Like Mile and Barry’s relationship. How the Makui world has developed after Krune left. And what the lizard dragons are up to. I had imagined them to be main characters when they were just there for the main character to help and show how caring and non murderous he is. (Which is another trait I love about him) I also feel like sound laws should be a thing.😅 All in all this is a great story. Things tend to be forgotten in long running stories like this, the author is very good at balancing the way he writes. Many plot points are left behind, but they all feel like things that may be relevant later on, so I truly can’t wait to see how this story develops further. And P.S Author Thanks for writing this wonderful story.

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    From chapter 1 to 900 the story has been is that a wisp after that however somehow the authour has managed to write a completely different story starting from when krune got his land incarnation honestly I don't understand this story anymore Otherwise it has been a fun ride😌

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    So i came here because I loved Death and me and expected to see smt of equal quality. well no. The author says it grts better after 20 chapter but honestly i would have prefered if he didnt get his human form cause the story goes downhill fast. Like really fast. He meets annyoing as hell characters who literally have 0 impact on the story but exist forever. but our mc lets himself get pushed around trusts people who he barely knows with his life. and even risks dying for them bcs why not. its just his lufe after all. Idk if it gets better but its reaaaaally a lot worse compared to his other work. sad. still not the shittiest thing out there so yeah

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    The main character has 0 EQ, as said on the tin. This is portrayed by having him make mistakes while interacting with others, leading him to be beaten up by his "friends" every time he does something off, often without any explanation to him. In addition, none of his supposed friends have any respect for him or his wishes, going so far as to purposefully do the ONE thing he has asked them not to, multiple times, just to mess with him. I sincerely hope that the author isn't drawing from personal experience when writing these character interactions, as it would be pretty sad. I love the premise, but with the MC showing no signs of demanding to be treated at all nicely, and none of his "friends" offering to due so, I find it unreadable.

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    This novel is a breath of fresh air in many ways. The grammar’s a ****y bit weaker than some, but that hardly affects the experience. You’ll find that the author, Suiyan, has a fetish for mass releases (don’t think of anything dirty). The story progresses nicely on a slowly quickening rate. From the first few chapters to the latest, you’ll always find tidbits to enhance your knowledge on what the core plot is. Does he have to reach the peak of the world? Save his loved one? Save his race? Extend his life span enough to not die? The answer is: Yes. Like I said, it’s a breath of fresh air, and the same goes for the characters. You don’t have that faultless main character that never does bad, or commits mass genocide and goes “I won’t let the world walk over me” or something of the like. Here, our MC, Krune is genuinely good, not from his character description, but rather his actions. While he comes of as a little wimpy, character development that sees him taking on new, and the cliched shameless trait exist. But, this only enhances the comedy, ‘cause the Novel is easily top three in comedy. The side characters, while kinda generic at the beginning, diversify in their characters later on. This, also, is a plus. For world background, you have a literal multiverse and a higher realm, but the plot never feels like it’s larger than its current setting. To me, that would mean that if he’s in a village, you could get knowledge on the cities, but the readers don’t immediately focus on what happens after he leaves the village, but rather the village itself. I’m not entirely sure what constitutes an amazing background, but I think it’s good enough if it’s there and doesn’t overshadow the foreground before it’s the main focus. Nonetheless, the world is expansive with the author not only expanding on it based on size/location but also based on how the people’s views change in the different parts. Or at the very least confirming that it won’t just be a cliche “go to city, go to competition, go to school, offend big guy run away, find something useful, repeat steps one to five with a ‘capital state’ rather than ‘city’, goes back to city and floor the big guy before we forget about him.” Krune is not the type that lets conflict dictate his worldview. All in all, it’s a great, kinda lighthearted read. I love it. Hope you try it if you’re reading this.

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    This MC is fucking hilarious with every step causing misunderstanding and you will cheers for him such amazing Novel right there and the interaction between him and the world is so funny

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