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Write a reviewI enjoy the story but in my personal preference try to use more of a variety of words. For example instead of just using said, you could use something like told or replied
Havent read it yet but pretty sure this is a fanfic so u gotta move tHis to the fanfic area not the novel area FjdjndmsallS anakz Xmz xxns wlodxn
As a Yu-Gi-Oh fan I liked reading this however some of the sentences don't make sense and there are some spelling mistakes.However, overall a good read and interesting story.
I enjoy the story but in my personal preference try to use more of a variety of words. For example instead of just using said, you could use something like told or replied
Havent read it yet but pretty sure this is a fanfic so u gotta move tHis to the fanfic area not the novel area FjdjndmsallS anakz Xmz xxns wlodxn
As a Yu-Gi-Oh fan I liked reading this however some of the sentences don't make sense and there are some spelling mistakes.However, overall a good read and interesting story.