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Awesome read! Love the build up, I hope Sarah is alright. Get up David, your girl needs you!! Can't wait for more. Looking forward to the new chapters. Author, write more, quick!!!!!
A great read, differebt from the usual marial arts genre. Love the enmotiobs spult on the story and the decision David has to make. Love the banter between his girls and him and gotta love the from man.
Great story, great setting. Love the build up, can't wait for more. Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome
Wonderful story execution, interesting to read. Can't wait to see how the story unfurls. Wonderful story execution, interesting to read. Can't wait to see how the story unfurls. Wonderful story execution, interesting to read. Can't wait to see how the story unfurls.
Awesome read! Love the build up, I hope Sarah is alright. Get up David, your girl needs you!! Can't wait for more. Looking forward to the new chapters. Author, write more, quick!!!!!
A great read, differebt from the usual marial arts genre. Love the enmotiobs spult on the story and the decision David has to make. Love the banter between his girls and him and gotta love the from man.
Great story, great setting. Love the build up, can't wait for more. Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome
Wonderful story execution, interesting to read. Can't wait to see how the story unfurls. Wonderful story execution, interesting to read. Can't wait to see how the story unfurls. Wonderful story execution, interesting to read. Can't wait to see how the story unfurls.