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Filth... This book is absolute filth... But god do I love it. Excellent world building in an environment you wouldn't expect, and a fresh take on the over saturated system novels. Already subscribed to Patreon. Thanks, Dirk!
don't drop it , amazing work, . . .. .. . .. ... .. .. , .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .
Overall 4.6 Just wish there were more chapters Its really good and the concept was amazing, especially how he got his knowledge by pure chance.
Amazing work. Flawless grammar. You got a way with words that make your works interesting to read. Word of advice- Make a cover for the book. You can even take it from a Google search. But keep it sexy.
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Good novel, would like it if there were more updates, but that's the author's decision. The 72 chapters available currently have great lemons and some good background for their world.
It is good,really good writing. I just hate that the mc turned into a fighter than a schemer and the words that describes system abilities are plain weird bro. Imagine getting abilities named like "basic fire" and "basic ranged" as part of the choices. The description of abilities is also not given which made it confusing to read since the mc is somehow using abilities that just pop out of nowhere
Ok….I love you 😂 you are amazing writer, this book is everything I was looking for, I’m big fan of your story and can’t wait for update every week
Hidden gem! The characters are nice and the 18+ scenes are good but you may feel the story development is slow. The chapters are just like my *cough*. That's it...
Великолепная новелла с перчинкой взрослого контента. Интриги главного героя и то, как он покоряет девушек и справляется со сложными ситуациями, поражают и увлекает
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Absolutamente surpreendente. Inicialmente, eu estava procurando por histórias obscenas para ler no meu tempo livre, mas então tive a chance de encontrar esta bela obra-prima. Vim procurar cobre, mas em vez disso encontrei diamantes. O estilo de escrita do autor é suave como um fluxo de água, as escolhas de palavras são excepcionalmente satisfatórias, muito eloqüentes. O aumento da inteligência do personagem principal é até perceptível o suficiente, e eu sinto que esse é um aspecto em que muitos autores falham. Agora sobre a história: começamos com nosso protagonista, ou mais conhecido como a mula, tropeçando na cena de "flores em tesoura", na biblioteca onde ele 'trabalha'. Em seguida, obtemos informações sobre o primeiro elemento não natural, um sistema. Sim, um sistema, mas, todo mundo tem. Sim. Cada sistema varia um do outro e geralmente leva décadas para ficar realmente forte com o que interpretei. Não são as versões para jogadores poderosos.
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I absolutely love this novel. I really recommend this to people to give a try [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is not bad. Author, you really need to proof read your work. You mix up a lot of articles. Your story progression is not bad but I feel it became a generic fantasy in later stages.
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i like your novel, keep your good work. you must put picture to your novel, if you want attract an attention the reader. keep the good work.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Filth... This book is absolute filth... But god do I love it. Excellent world building in an environment you wouldn't expect, and a fresh take on the over saturated system novels. Already subscribed to Patreon. Thanks, Dirk!
don't drop it , amazing work, . . .. .. . .. ... .. .. , .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .
Overall 4.6 Just wish there were more chapters Its really good and the concept was amazing, especially how he got his knowledge by pure chance.
Amazing work. Flawless grammar. You got a way with words that make your works interesting to read. Word of advice- Make a cover for the book. You can even take it from a Google search. But keep it sexy.
Is this dropped? ……………………………………… ……. …………. ….. …… …. ….. ….. …. ….. ….. …… ….,. ….. ….. …… ….. ….. …… …. . ….. …… ….. …… ….. ….. . …………………..
Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2 Mission 2
Mission Mission Mission Mission Mission Mission Mission Mission Mission Mission Mission Mission Mission Mission Mission Mission Mission Mission
Good novel, would like it if there were more updates, but that's the author's decision. The 72 chapters available currently have great lemons and some good background for their world.
It is good,really good writing. I just hate that the mc turned into a fighter than a schemer and the words that describes system abilities are plain weird bro. Imagine getting abilities named like "basic fire" and "basic ranged" as part of the choices. The description of abilities is also not given which made it confusing to read since the mc is somehow using abilities that just pop out of nowhere
Ok….I love you 😂 you are amazing writer, this book is everything I was looking for, I’m big fan of your story and can’t wait for update every week
Hidden gem! The characters are nice and the 18+ scenes are good but you may feel the story development is slow. The chapters are just like my *cough*. That's it...
Великолепная новелла с перчинкой взрослого контента. Интриги главного героя и то, как он покоряет девушек и справляется со сложными ситуациями, поражают и увлекает
good, developed world beginning a little slow or confusing..................................................................................
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Absolutamente surpreendente. Inicialmente, eu estava procurando por histórias obscenas para ler no meu tempo livre, mas então tive a chance de encontrar esta bela obra-prima. Vim procurar cobre, mas em vez disso encontrei diamantes. O estilo de escrita do autor é suave como um fluxo de água, as escolhas de palavras são excepcionalmente satisfatórias, muito eloqüentes. O aumento da inteligência do personagem principal é até perceptível o suficiente, e eu sinto que esse é um aspecto em que muitos autores falham. Agora sobre a história: começamos com nosso protagonista, ou mais conhecido como a mula, tropeçando na cena de "flores em tesoura", na biblioteca onde ele 'trabalha'. Em seguida, obtemos informações sobre o primeiro elemento não natural, um sistema. Sim, um sistema, mas, todo mundo tem. Sim. Cada sistema varia um do outro e geralmente leva décadas para ficar realmente forte com o que interpretei. Não são as versões para jogadores poderosos.
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I absolutely love this novel. I really recommend this to people to give a try [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is not bad. Author, you really need to proof read your work. You mix up a lot of articles. Your story progression is not bad but I feel it became a generic fantasy in later stages.
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