Chapter 2: Elite High School
I've just updated the previous chapter to the following, made it by actually thinking. (I'll post a chapter in replace later but I'll keep this notice)
So this is what I learned
1) I got this amazing power
2) I can control and coat anything with the particles I grabbed and have to maintain it by clenching my fist. (So the particles won't leave), its also possible to make the hand at any shape to coat an object. As long as I pay attention. The way to release the particle is if I ease my hand.
3) I can control any particles from literally anything(In theory), I only controlled some such as the shadow, light and air. As long as it is within a 3m radius(3m = 300cm)
4) I have no limit of using the particles power, as long as it is within my 3m radius. But the distance the power I attempt to manifest or the distance I'm with the power, it gets weaker.
5) I get fatigued more easily when holding on to a particle.
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Suddenly Zeke teleports in and says "Ok lets go already"
I'm like "WHOA WAIT A MINUTE" I immediately used the space particle I was holding and coat myself. I sensed that I was able to 'teleport' anywhere in my radius and POOFED, I escaped
"What the hell? Your ability is also space movement? Like me?" Zeke exclaimed half surprise, half excited.
*Just go with it Tian Fan thought* As he nodded.
"Finally, it was getting lonely ever since Senior has left" Zeke cheered.
*Uh oh what have I done*
"Ok do you have any questions" Zeke asked "I don't want you go poofing away again"
"What exactly is Elite High School?" Tian Fan replied.
"Sigh, the usual question. The Elite High School as I said is a gathering of all talented people from different places. Its a place where we nuture them according to their powers. Its a thing for many generations now. You might not know, but you've been living in a world of lies. You might have thought World Wars were a battle with soliders, but its actually various powers attacking each other. Ok done with introduction LETS GO". Zeke said and immeditaley grabs Tian Fan and teleports.
What a shame for Tian Fan to have said he used space abilities too. Causing Zeke to be excited and not listen to Tian Fan's complaints of teleporting too fast. (Zeke has a teleporting limit too)
And soon they reach the Elite High School.
"Ok, since you're 15 and you have a rare ability, you've been assigned to class 1-A. Don't worry about school transfer procedures, we'll handle it for you" Zeke said.
"Am I allowed to leave at my own free will?" Tian Fan asked.(Finally)
"Hahaha, think about it. Even if we let you off and consider you not a threat to exposing the school and the hidden powers that some people have, others will. Believe me. Consider it helping your family". Zeke laughed.
"What about my parents and siblings?" Tian Fan asked again.
"You might think we'll let your parents and siblings in the dark like some people. But we tell them the truth, and give them a notice. If they wished they could come near the school and live. It would be a hassle but they'll be safe if anyone knows about you" Zeke replied.
"Ok, by the way, I lied I don't have space powers" Tian Fan said. Looking at Zeke's face of questioning, Tian Fan continued "I can copy some abilities that I come in contacted with, he summarised."
It was at this moment, Zeke was 'NO WAY IN HELL THATS SO OVERPOWERED'
Looking at Zeke's face, Tian Fan laugh internally.
Zeke suddenly became serious and said "I'll report this to our Principal, you can temporary stand outside Class 1-A" and Zeke disappeared.
Having grab Zeke's space particle as he disappeared, Tian Fan poofs away too.(If you are questioning when Tian Fan released it, lets say he released it when Zeke was teleporting him to school.)
While teleporting quickly to Class 1-A a person who was speedingly rushing in turned a cornef and rushed towards where Tian Fan was about to appear. The moment Tian Fan appeared, with his quick reflexes, teleported to the side. Sadly the person also had quick reflexes and jumped to the SAME side.
"Oof, I just got Déjà vu" Tian Fan murmured.
And the person who banged into him said "Ouch, so much for our quick reflexes".
Tian Fan and that person immediately laughed.
"My name is Tian Fan, whats yours?" Tian Fan felt like this guy was humorous and worth befriending.
"Liu Shi" the person replied.
"Liu Shi", Tian Fan replied.
*"My parents named me Liu Shi to remind me to make every second in life counts!"
"Liu Shi, good name" Tian Fan said.
"So what are you doing here?" Liu Shi asked.
"I'm a transfer. Though I'm waiting for a senior to come and pick me up after talking to the Principal". Tian Fan replied.
"Oh, so you are joining my class soon? Nice! I'll see you soon!" Liu Shi said as he quickly dashed in as the bell ranged.
CREATORS' THOUGHTS 
Monkeysgt
Monkeysgt Some people may have realised, that I'm not so good at the talking parts of the story. Sadly, I'm in need of any editor who doesn't charge a penny on editing(I can't pay). Also a illustration for my book cover.(I'll credit your name in the description).
If you are an editor and wish to help edit(Thanks in the future) direct message me at discord @Monkeysgt#7472
*Liu Shi also in chinese means 'losing something'. Thereby the name.
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