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good novel, it hurts you stopped writing. It would be great if you came back because despite the mistakes that bothered you, it didn't affect you in the least in history and it was just as interesting. You could also think about charging for chapters since at least it is worth it
Really not sure how this has so many stars, what is wrong with you guys? Is there a point in botting reviews??????????????????????????????????????????????
Thank....................................................................................................................................you
Great work.. All in all a good time investment though the slow progression.. Hasty plot and massive plot errors leaves a bitter taste in the mouth. I was really looking forward to the development of his seven lackeys.. The guy in the painting and anuka. I really hope you continue this... cheers.. Good job
You know how XD works for you to join the vip the day to get a good one to go to the Darkness controls from the background as a player and a bucket list for him to come back to the Darkness controls and the bad and burn it out and other things
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Reveal Spoiler He has lots to play with they are going for that vice job are you going now and I couldnt attack someone for my alliance with the translation was a joke to be a enforcer to get the money I need more rewards for their own lives than they do anything for you to be a general manager of a u have a daughter
Can I ask how many harem members he has? Does he leave his harem? Or is the harem good? Please, I want to read. Someone Reply......jhajhaahhahsh
Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good
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Its very interesting story.I want more updates please. ...................................................................................................................................................................
Just 3Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone
Reveal Spoiler Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops
Reveal Spoiler Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good
Reveal Spoiler Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need
Reveal Spoiler Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good
Reveal Spoiler Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good
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Unidentified female players immediately after a game of the empre and he has a lot faster as well as play with them and he's a good day for you to join the vip u and the fridge is the first time in the background as a whole and I will see you skin in a tier and I couldnt attack you and your derp is a joke to me now
Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone
Reveal Spoiler Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops
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Great plot but it feels like it has a lot of filler. By the way when are Alpha and the rest get their powers/ transform KEEP IT UP!! KEEP IT UP!! KEEP IT UP!! KEEP IT UP!! !KEEP IT UP!
Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and
Reveal Spoiler You can be in the background then gunshot and he will tell u good things about the event and I couldnt attack someone for a week now and I couldnt do it enemy and the fridge you can do it this time and then he would have quit the job as well but I have a daughter to marry between me but she doesn't want me
Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and
Reveal Spoiler Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good
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I absolutely love it. The main character is on point and I love he's dark humor and how much of a player he is🤣🤣🤣 I mean how many slaves does he have? like 5 or so. But all in all it's a great book
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email lise.work2021@gmail.com
good novel, it hurts you stopped writing. It would be great if you came back because despite the mistakes that bothered you, it didn't affect you in the least in history and it was just as interesting. You could also think about charging for chapters since at least it is worth it
Really not sure how this has so many stars, what is wrong with you guys? Is there a point in botting reviews??????????????????????????????????????????????
Thank....................................................................................................................................you
Great work.. All in all a good time investment though the slow progression.. Hasty plot and massive plot errors leaves a bitter taste in the mouth. I was really looking forward to the development of his seven lackeys.. The guy in the painting and anuka. I really hope you continue this... cheers.. Good job
You know how XD works for you to join the vip the day to get a good one to go to the Darkness controls from the background as a player and a bucket list for him to come back to the Darkness controls and the bad and burn it out and other things
acabou o romance?acabou o romance?acabou o romance?acabou o romance?acabou o romance?acabou o romance?acabou o romance?acabou o romance?acabou o romance?acabou o romance?acabou o romance?acabou o romance?
Reveal Spoiler Why.why.why.why.why.whyWhy.why.why.why.why.whyWhy.why.why.why.why.whyWhy.why.why.why.why.whyWhy.why.why.why.why.whyWhy.why.why.why.why.whyWhy.why.why.why.why.whyWhy.why.why.why.why.whyWhy.why.why.why.why.why
Reveal Spoiler He has lots to play with they are going for that vice job are you going now and I couldnt attack someone for my alliance with the translation was a joke to be a enforcer to get the money I need more rewards for their own lives than they do anything for you to be a general manager of a u have a daughter
Can I ask how many harem members he has? Does he leave his harem? Or is the harem good? Please, I want to read. Someone Reply......jhajhaahhahsh
Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good
Reveal Spoiler Its very interesting story.I want more updates please. ...................................................................................................................................................................
Just 3Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone
Reveal Spoiler Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops
Reveal Spoiler Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good
Reveal Spoiler Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need
Reveal Spoiler Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good
Reveal Spoiler Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good
Reveal Spoiler Unidentified female players immediately after a game of the empre and he has a lot faster as well as play with them and he's a good day for you to join the vip u and the fridge is the first time in the background as a whole and I will see you skin in a tier and I couldnt attack you and your derp is a joke to me now
Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone
Reveal Spoiler Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops
Reveal Spoiler Great plot but it feels like it has a lot of filler. By the way when are Alpha and the rest get their powers/ transform KEEP IT UP!! KEEP IT UP!! KEEP IT UP!! KEEP IT UP!! !KEEP IT UP!
Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and
Reveal Spoiler You can be in the background then gunshot and he will tell u good things about the event and I couldnt attack someone for a week now and I couldnt do it enemy and the fridge you can do it this time and then he would have quit the job as well but I have a daughter to marry between me but she doesn't want me
Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and
Reveal Spoiler Just pure gibberish for points game first chicken dinner with a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good need a guild wars and stone in the rally my troops are only t2 and it good
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I absolutely love it. The main character is on point and I love he's dark humor and how much of a player he is🤣🤣🤣 I mean how many slaves does he have? like 5 or so. But all in all it's a great book