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My name is John Black, and I'm 25 years old. A pretty good name, right? Well, I had a pretty bad day. After all, I got fired from work because I didn't participate much. The reason is I was sick, but my manager is a bastard who likes to bully his subordinates.
As I was transitioning into town at the crosswalk, I heard someone honking on my left. When I looked to the side, I saw a very scared face outside the truck windows. Then, I realized I was going to die, so I stopped, even though I tried to run. But it was already three meters away from me, so I accepted it.
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and if you are looking for mc who fall in love with single flirt or because he sees beautiful girl this is not for you NO HAREM/NO ROMANCE
Lookism,Jujutsu Kaisen,Images are not mine
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Write a reviewthis is my first fanfiction so dont expect much from this fanfic and english is not my mature english so if grammar is wrong then im sorry, and like any other author im gonna give myself 5 star
Author, I feel your story is abit rushed. Also if you don't put proper quotation marks it only gets confusing for us to differentiate between dialogue and statement. Since the mc is overpowered there is little room for development if not the mc hides his power. Short chapters don't matter to me since I am myself an author and I am currently writing a Gojo fanfiction and it has pretty short chapters.
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you should use this " " if a character is talking because it's confusing if you dont use this" "(forgot what's it called) And this for ' ' internal monologue. though you could ignore this....