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An office worker absolutely bored of life, passing days doing nothing but working the only moments in his life that he actually felt exiting about was when he played Duel Monsters (Yu-Gi-Oh)watch as he gets reincarnated by a godly taking pity on him in the world of duel monsters.
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This story has definite potential however it has grammar issues and the story is too fast paced. Also everything feels rushed as well. If the Author took time on this and worked on the quality it could be a pretty good fan fic.
it's a nice try I guess, plot is cool and all, so the potential is good. problem with this though, is that the grammar is all over the place, paragraphs end before a sentence does, and all other stuff, so it's unreadable until edited